This is a semi-Maximum Ride story. There will only be a few characters from Maximum Ride. Fang, Iggy, and Gazzy. The rest of the characters will be made up. I chose only the guys because this fanfic will be written in the anime genre, Reverse Harem. Btw, I decided not to use Gazzy's nickname in this story. I just doesn't fit the image I'm trying to create. Gazzy and Iggy will seem a little OOC, only because they have different backgrounds. I'm trying to make the story realistic. Not recreate characters.


I will need a lead girl for the story, but I do have requirements.

1) the girl will not resemble Max, Angel, or Nudge.

2) the girl will not resemble the three boys.

3) the girl will not be overwehlmingly powerfull.

4) she has to have a strange, unique quality.

Here are the bios of the three boys for this story.

Fang Knight

17 years old

Dark, dark blue hair, full lips

Violet/midnight eyes, strong jaw

(Resembles Ikuto, from Shugo Chara. Google it.)

6'2, with a slender figure

Wears a black button up shirt, black jeans and black Vans.

Carries around a violin in a black case, (like Ikuto)

Grew up in a wealthy family, goes to a prestegious private school in the France.

Iggy Palestine

17 years old

White hair with blue tips, thin lips

Peircing blue eyes, graceful jaw

(Resembles Ikki from Amnesia, google it)

6'3, with a tall, strong, yet gentle build.

Wears a dark blue button up shirt, with black slacks and black dress shoes.

Never takes off a blue spades ring his mother gave him as an infant.

Had a poor family, so they shipped him off to live with a wealthy man in England. Goes to the same school as Fang.

Zack Churchill

16 years old

Curly blonde hair, full lips

Icy green/blue eyes, heart shaped face

(Resembles Keichii Shimizu from La Corda D'Oro)

5'11 with a sporty figure

Wears a white button up shirt with a navy blue vest, black slacks and white sneakers. He never wears any other shoes except for his white sneakers.

Is actually a Prince and lives with his Uncle, an Earl, attending the same school as Fang and Iggy.


Now, for what this story is actually about. Its pretty simple. This is a school for teens taining in Magic. Each student has three special abilities. An elemental power (sub or main), a object that can project their magical power, and a mental ability. Most students can only find their elemental power. Lucky ones can find their element, and an object. But close to none ever find their mental ability until they're very old and withered.

What is special about the three boys, and the girl, is that they have all found two of their powers,and are close to the third. The three boys are all drawn to the girl as she struggles at the new school, trying to find her first two powers. But as it so happens, she finds her mental power first. This causes the dark forces to brew and eventually a battle arises.

So, this is what I need from you guys.

1) the main girl

2) a supporting girl (this girl has to be mysterious)

3) a supporting boy (he has to be arrogant)

4) another girl (preferably friendly)

5) one more girl (preferably a bitch)

Okay, so all of you guys, show me what you've got. Feel free to add suggestions for their powers, too. Have fun with it! And, here's a first chappie.


Snow. White snow. The color of nothing. Is all that could be seen.

Red. Dark, rich red. The color of blood. A red moon is visibe

It falls now. The blood. It falls into the sky, lighting it on fire. Flames crackle and stars fall towards the Earth. Crashing, burning, lighting this dead world on fire. The moon is burning, but not black. The moon is burning, not burning black. But burning white. The moon screams in agony, begging for help, begging to be freed. But no one is there.

It ends. The flames stop. The moon doesn't scream any longer. Look closely at the ground. Green. What a sight! A cologne besides Blood red, Snow white. Not orange, or blue, or black. But green. What a lovely green. So pure, so sweet.

From that day on, the world was born. No one knows how the fire started, or how it stoped. No one saw it for themselves. For they did not exsist yet. All they knew, is what that day was. Many would forget this, and make up their own versions. But the truth would always be with the ones with the flakes of the once red moon inside of them. The day was the day of creation. The day when their creator sent flames from heaven.

That day was forever known as When The Sky Burned The Moon.


And that is chappie one. Sorry, its short, but I don't have enough info to go making a long one. So you guys gimme some characters. I need them all submitted by September 20th. Kay?

~MoonStar