Author's note: This is my first fan fiction. I would really like to know what do you guys think about his story.
The story:
1) Miaka never found the Universe of Four Gods.
2) The characters in the book are real high school students.
3) Taka and the six other suzaku senshi are now in their third year while Miaka and Yui are one year slower than them.
***The Story***
The suns shining with birds chirping and bees buzzing around the flowers in the school garden. Students were laughing and busy talking as the school bell rang. Miaka and Yui who best friends for about ten years were walking round the school garden when they saw Taka. Taka is one of the cutest and most popular guys in school. His silky blue hair shone brightly in the sun, and moved up and down his face when he turned, to see Miaka and Yui staring at him. He smiled to them charmingly and they blushed.
During break, Taka came to have lunch with Miaka leaving all his admirers growing with jealousy. Miaka has always got a crush on Taka but little does she know that he too felt the same way.
"Are you free tonight?" asked Taka nervously, swaying from side to side.
"erm... yeah but I have to be home before midnight and no alcohol," said Miaka with twinkling eyes.
"What?.. I was thinking if I could phone you," said Taka, looking confused and cute.
"What? Oh sure! Yeah!" said Miaka who is now filled with embarrassment and stared at Taka as he brushed his hair with his right hand.
"Great," said Taka cheerfully while walking towards his friends
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At night at Yuuki Resident, Ketsuke picked up the phone. "Hello! Yuuki Resident," said Ketsuke formally.
"Can I please speak to Miaka," asked Taka shyly.
"ehem... and who are you..." answered Ketsuke keenly but was interrupted by Miaka.
Miaka pushed Ketsuke away. "Hi Taka!"
"Are you free?" asked Taka.
"Yeah..." answered Miaka when she stepped on Ketsukes' face when he tried to snatch the phone.
The conversation continues until Mrs. Yuuki return home from work with Ketsuke gasping for breath as he crawls away.
Miaka lay down on her bed, looking at the posters on the wall while thinking about the conversation that she had with Taka. Am I dreaming? Did he really mean what he said? Could it really be true?
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"Yuuki Miaka! This is the third time you've been sleeping in my class this week. If you think that my class is boring you can spend the next hour standing outside the class." Yelled Mr. Yamamoto, the history teacher.
"Miaka, how can you sleep in class when the exam is just two weeks away?" said Yui sternly before she realized that Miaka was staring at Taka instead of listening to her. "What have you two lovely birds been doing? Are you hiding something from me?" Yui asked as she eyed Miaka with interest. "Oh so now you have a boyfriend and you're leaving your best friend behind"
Miaka who finally realized that Yui was talking to her, blushed and answered quickly, "Hiding what? What boyfriend?"
"Miaka!!!" said Yui sternly, raising her eyebrows.
"Ok...I'll tell you." said Miaka and explained softly "He phoned me the other night and told me that he like me after he asked me who I like. I was shocked when he told me that and didn't believe him but he somehow got me convinced and I admitted that I like him too."
Yui looked a pale as a ghost after Miaka finished explaining and said, "Oh my!" Suddenly turned cheery again and exclaimed, "I'm so happy for you!"
***Author's (Melissa) note***-
"Yeah, I'm happy for you too...so happy that I feel like strangling you. Some girls just gets everything they want!" shrieked Melissa. "Unfair!"
"Cool down," said Pan while fanning Melissa with a big fan.
***Back to story***
After school, as Taka walked Miaka home, he asked her if she could go to school tomorrow to watch his basketball match which Miaka agreed. Taka's the basketball captain of the school and was obviously one of the best players in school. Miaka has always supported and cheered for him. She never failed to watch any one of his tournaments. The way he moved so smoothly with the ball as if it was a part of him was the best part.
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Miaka was in her room, writing in her diary...
Dear diary, Taka was fabulous this morning. He played extremely well and his team won the other by a lead of 20 points. I was so worried when he injured his leg in the first half. Luckily he was back in the game in the second half. After game, we went for a drink. I just love the way he talks about stuffs that he like, just like a kid!
Last year when I was new at this school, I knew nothing about basketball but now I'm turning into a basketball freak myself. Spectators were cheering while cheerleaders were cheering for the team that they believe was the best. I was sitting at a bench all alone when he came and talked to me and all I did was just smile. He has the nicest eyes among all the guys I've known and also have the nicest voice. I never knew his name except that he was the guy that almost every first year girls talk about. He was easily noticeable as one of the best in the court. I was always only there to cheer upon him and stare at him when he wasn't looking. I felt jealous when other girls surround him. No matter how hard I tried, I never did once come out from my shell to talk to him.
These few days have been just like a never-ending dream. The guy I love is talking to me and I answered him back without any hesitation. He told me that he loves me too but could he be trusted? I do trust him but I can't ignore the fact that this is all happening too sudden and that people acknowledge him as flirty. He even asked me if I would accept him if he proposed. I was too happy to even think that I quickly answered "yeah".
One day was walking down the stairs to the school hall, Nuriko, who is a friend of Taka came to me and asked if I am the girl Taka's was chasing. :) I just blushed and said, "I don't know".
***Author's note***
Melissa: Well the first chapters complete! Feel free to tell me what u think about it. Hope u all like the story!
The story:
1) Miaka never found the Universe of Four Gods.
2) The characters in the book are real high school students.
3) Taka and the six other suzaku senshi are now in their third year while Miaka and Yui are one year slower than them.
***The Story***
The suns shining with birds chirping and bees buzzing around the flowers in the school garden. Students were laughing and busy talking as the school bell rang. Miaka and Yui who best friends for about ten years were walking round the school garden when they saw Taka. Taka is one of the cutest and most popular guys in school. His silky blue hair shone brightly in the sun, and moved up and down his face when he turned, to see Miaka and Yui staring at him. He smiled to them charmingly and they blushed.
During break, Taka came to have lunch with Miaka leaving all his admirers growing with jealousy. Miaka has always got a crush on Taka but little does she know that he too felt the same way.
"Are you free tonight?" asked Taka nervously, swaying from side to side.
"erm... yeah but I have to be home before midnight and no alcohol," said Miaka with twinkling eyes.
"What?.. I was thinking if I could phone you," said Taka, looking confused and cute.
"What? Oh sure! Yeah!" said Miaka who is now filled with embarrassment and stared at Taka as he brushed his hair with his right hand.
"Great," said Taka cheerfully while walking towards his friends
********************
At night at Yuuki Resident, Ketsuke picked up the phone. "Hello! Yuuki Resident," said Ketsuke formally.
"Can I please speak to Miaka," asked Taka shyly.
"ehem... and who are you..." answered Ketsuke keenly but was interrupted by Miaka.
Miaka pushed Ketsuke away. "Hi Taka!"
"Are you free?" asked Taka.
"Yeah..." answered Miaka when she stepped on Ketsukes' face when he tried to snatch the phone.
The conversation continues until Mrs. Yuuki return home from work with Ketsuke gasping for breath as he crawls away.
Miaka lay down on her bed, looking at the posters on the wall while thinking about the conversation that she had with Taka. Am I dreaming? Did he really mean what he said? Could it really be true?
********************
"Yuuki Miaka! This is the third time you've been sleeping in my class this week. If you think that my class is boring you can spend the next hour standing outside the class." Yelled Mr. Yamamoto, the history teacher.
"Miaka, how can you sleep in class when the exam is just two weeks away?" said Yui sternly before she realized that Miaka was staring at Taka instead of listening to her. "What have you two lovely birds been doing? Are you hiding something from me?" Yui asked as she eyed Miaka with interest. "Oh so now you have a boyfriend and you're leaving your best friend behind"
Miaka who finally realized that Yui was talking to her, blushed and answered quickly, "Hiding what? What boyfriend?"
"Miaka!!!" said Yui sternly, raising her eyebrows.
"Ok...I'll tell you." said Miaka and explained softly "He phoned me the other night and told me that he like me after he asked me who I like. I was shocked when he told me that and didn't believe him but he somehow got me convinced and I admitted that I like him too."
Yui looked a pale as a ghost after Miaka finished explaining and said, "Oh my!" Suddenly turned cheery again and exclaimed, "I'm so happy for you!"
***Author's (Melissa) note***-
"Yeah, I'm happy for you too...so happy that I feel like strangling you. Some girls just gets everything they want!" shrieked Melissa. "Unfair!"
"Cool down," said Pan while fanning Melissa with a big fan.
***Back to story***
After school, as Taka walked Miaka home, he asked her if she could go to school tomorrow to watch his basketball match which Miaka agreed. Taka's the basketball captain of the school and was obviously one of the best players in school. Miaka has always supported and cheered for him. She never failed to watch any one of his tournaments. The way he moved so smoothly with the ball as if it was a part of him was the best part.
********************
Miaka was in her room, writing in her diary...
Dear diary, Taka was fabulous this morning. He played extremely well and his team won the other by a lead of 20 points. I was so worried when he injured his leg in the first half. Luckily he was back in the game in the second half. After game, we went for a drink. I just love the way he talks about stuffs that he like, just like a kid!
Last year when I was new at this school, I knew nothing about basketball but now I'm turning into a basketball freak myself. Spectators were cheering while cheerleaders were cheering for the team that they believe was the best. I was sitting at a bench all alone when he came and talked to me and all I did was just smile. He has the nicest eyes among all the guys I've known and also have the nicest voice. I never knew his name except that he was the guy that almost every first year girls talk about. He was easily noticeable as one of the best in the court. I was always only there to cheer upon him and stare at him when he wasn't looking. I felt jealous when other girls surround him. No matter how hard I tried, I never did once come out from my shell to talk to him.
These few days have been just like a never-ending dream. The guy I love is talking to me and I answered him back without any hesitation. He told me that he loves me too but could he be trusted? I do trust him but I can't ignore the fact that this is all happening too sudden and that people acknowledge him as flirty. He even asked me if I would accept him if he proposed. I was too happy to even think that I quickly answered "yeah".
One day was walking down the stairs to the school hall, Nuriko, who is a friend of Taka came to me and asked if I am the girl Taka's was chasing. :) I just blushed and said, "I don't know".
***Author's note***
Melissa: Well the first chapters complete! Feel free to tell me what u think about it. Hope u all like the story!