This is my first fanfiction so I would like reviews about my mistakes I have. Disclamer: I will never own Warriors. Well on to the story.
Chapter 1
"Wake up Firepaw, don't tell me you forgot. You have to go on dawn patrol." mewed, Graypaw. Firepaw just remember that this was his first patrol and got up faster then any cat could say Shadowclan. Firepaw mewed, " Thanks Graypaw for waking me up. See you after the patrol." Firepaw was going on a patrol with Sandpaw, Whitestorm and Dustpaw. "About time you woke up kittypet." Sneered Dustpaw. Firepaw just ignored him and listened to Whitestorm. "Dustpaw will come with me to check near Shadowclan borders while Sandpaw and you go to near Riverclan borders, and meet neer Windclan borders. Sandpaw and Firepaw went near Riverclan borders and droped some scent markers. Firepaw asked,"Sandpaw why aren't you insulting me like at camp?" Sandpaw blushed and mewed, "Ummmm... It's just that I actually liked you and it's just that I don't want any body to know so can you keep it a secret. It's justi love your flamepelt and your very cute and handsome." Firepaw was shocked, like really really shocked,"Well I also like you to Sandpaw like your eyes are beautiful and you are pretty yourself." Firepaw mewed. While the whole time Graypaw was hiding in the shadow eavesdropping. While Firepaw, Whitestorm, Dustpaw and Sandpaw were finishing dawn patrol Graypaw went back to camp and dropped his prey in the fresh-kill pile was laughing evily. He told everyone about what happened and half of them was shocked but they decided to keep it a secret from Dustpaw,Firepaw,and Sandpaw from knowing they knew.
Well this was Chapter 1 I give thanks to who ever reviews. Btw flames will be given to Tigarstar.