Authors note; LO EVERYBODY! This is my 1st fanfiction, so if you are gonna
flame me, be gentle. PLZZ!!!!! All there really is to say is that I've been
reading fanfiction for YEARS now, I thought, why not give it a go. The
first two chapters for this fanfiction are to act, as a prologue, so as to
tell you how the universe began in my fanfic, so don't flame me for not
bringing any NGE chars into it! They will appear in the third chappie,
that's a promise. I would also really appreciate it if some of you would
help with proof reading my work; I've not done myself a profile so if u
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DISCLAMER: I don't own evangelion and I neva will (Demon starts sobbing uncontrollably)!!!!! If this story contains any material from any past fanfiction, no matter how remote, it was not of my doing; my fingers just seem to register what my subconscious is thinking!!!! On with the story!!!!!!
THE PUREST LIGHT AND ETERNAL DARKNESS
CHAPTER 1: THE FALL OF LUCIFER ...(epilogue)
In the beginning, god created the heaven, earth, moon and stars. All was bound to his will. All fulfilled their duty. The sun would rise and set across the gentle sky, a constant reminder of eternal change; the plants and trees would grow from the earth, turning deserts and wastelands, into green gardens of paradise; the first man and the second woman, Adam and Eve, complimented each other and were perfect to populate the Earth and gain dominance over the lower forms of creation; the stars would shine with an ethereal glow when all was dark. A beacon of hope to all of Gods creatures; the Angels and Archangels, gods loyal servants, immortal and pure of heart, would guard and protect the creations of God, from any impurities that would dare forsake the Oni-Powerful's creation. All was right with the cosmos...until evil was born.
Evil first appeared, when God grew restless and tired, from the extreme trails and labours, which drained his strength. When this new side of God took control and dominion of the All-knowing's celestial body, it turned God on his creations, gaining sadistic pleasure from destroying the creations of God. This new persona took even greater pleasure in knowing of the cruel irony, that God was killing its children, but not of its own free will. With great difficultly and strength, God banished this new side of him to the deepest and darkest corners of all existence. After a period of time, the rejected side of the Oni-Potent began to grow and manifest. It began as nothing more then a vacuum in the vastness of space.
Fate and destiny held much heartache and pain for God and its children before the perfect utopia was allowed to be born.
While time monumental went past, God sensed something familiar, growing in the darkest reaches of nothingness; something new which God itself had not created. This new being, greatly scared God, as God never had encountered such a presence with such raw power, and a lust for destruction before. God was worried for its potential knew no bounds. God felt as if all could be lost if this threat was not dealt with the up most speed and strength. God knew this evil could taint the purest of souls, turning once innocent minds into cold, and twisted abominations of their previous forms. God, in his haste and desperation, sent his mightiest and most cunning Archangel, Lucifer, to defeat the unknown entity and leave no traces of its existence. Mighty was Lucifer in strength and grace, almost equal to that of the All Mighty itself. God told Lucifer that it would over watch him and protect him in the upcoming battle. Though God, as mighty and powerful as it is, could not prevent the tragedy that would befall its greatest of heroes, purest of saviours, and most noble of children and itself that cosmic day
Lucifer flew across the heavens and stars to meet with the new evil; the evil sensed that the incoming entity would perfectly suit its dark and corrupt designs. As the entity began to concentrate, it could see through its mind's eye, a mighty angel. The first criteria it could distinguish was that the angel flew with 6 pairs of wings; the wings shone with a white glow that could be considered beautiful and majestic, as well as full with raw power. The angel's eyes were midnight blue, close to a brown shade but definitely blue. These blue orbs portrayed great grace and confidence, as if eagerly challenging any that would appose them; at the same time, they held such kindness and compassion, as if willing to sacrifice anything in order to do the right thing.
As Lucifer closed in on the dark emotions he could sense emitting from the unknown entity, he came into view of the creature that was on one of the moons of Jupiter, as he landed, he found himself for the first time ever in his immortal life, gasped at what he saw.
Before Lucifer were countless volcanoes, which spew boiling hot magma that, held the potential of tearing mortal flesh from bone in seconds. If it weren't for the fact that Lucifer was an Archangel, he would have been dead as soon as he landed on the natural satellite. As he followed the dark flow of energy with his eyes, they have rest on a being he had never seen before. The being appeared to have no shape of form, as if it was a huge mass of darkness. Waves rippled through the expanse between Lucifer and his mysterious enemy.
Lucifer sensed the intense emotions emitting from the heart of the beast. The angel of might grew restless and wary with the evil entity, and drew his mighty sword, the light bringer, from its resting place. The blade was known among all who saw it and its master sparring on the plain of the all- knowing. The blade was engraved with what appeared to be magic ruins. The beast deduced that they were a special incantation that allowed the blade to glow with gentle, azure blue warmth, as if drawing the beast in, daring it to touch its sharp and menacing edge.
Lucifer began to shudder unconsciously when the being began to change its outward appearance. When the transformation was complete, Lucifer couldn't help but stare at his target's new form. The beast appeared to have taken the form of a female, as the body was accented with a menacing glow, and was unclothed, allowing the endowment to be showcased for the entire universe. Her raven-black hair crawled down to her knees and held a flawless quality, as if she was a goddess...or a demon.
Her black, seductive eyes portrayed such power and lust, that they called any mortal, who dared to look into them, to their doom. Behind the façade of the perfect breasts, knee-length hair and her cold black eyes, lay a power so great, Lucifer was unsure if he could win. Lucifer, done with the redundant staring contest, and spoke with a voice that held confidence and power.
"I am known as Lucifer, the light of god. I come on my fathers orders to destroy the creation that he had not made with his own will, and remove it from existence" Lucifer allowed himself the tiniest of scowls, hoping that the entity would not put up a fight
"Pathetic...you believe you can destroy what even your father couldn't kill?" the entity's eyes danced with terrifying power and a twisted sense of pleasure. Seeing Lucifer eyes burn with hatred and resentment towards drove her wild, the power of the knowledge she had was limitless, the fact at all the pieces of jigsaw were in place, with Lucifer being unknowingly linked to God and have a vessel right in front of her, she couldn't help herself but laugh at the fact that her plan had been set in motion, and soon, the foolish angel would take the bait and fall into her trap, where there was no escape and no-one, not even the all-loving God would live to see another sunrise.
"Hold your tongue foul demon! Least I deprive you of your ability to form coherent speech and lies!! My father is a noble and mighty being who will not waste his time of such impure and foul scum!!!!"
"Foolish angel! Your father would never risk the life of his children if he could help it! He sends you because he is too weak to even protect himself! I am his strength and power!!! I am his confidence and intellect!!! I am your father's better self"
Lucifer stood still, trembling with an uncontrollable rage at such blasphemy! How could such a lowly creature allow their tongue to throw up such filth and vomit, as if it was the truth? Lucifer unconsciously opened and closed his right hand, as if aching to wrap his hands round her neck, and slowly drain her body of all life.
Without another word, Lucifer rushed the female, with his sword, coming overhead, with a clear intent of slicing her vertically. She sensed what the arrogant angel was about to try; to her, Lucifer appeared to be moving in slow motion, his battle cry almost stretching on forever, and his eyes danced murderous rage.
What happened in the next few seconds had Lucifer stricken with fear and pain. The angel of truth found himself moving through the air at impossible speeds, seeing his sword coming swiftly close to her head, only to cut through air. The next thing he knew was the sharp pain where his neck was connected to his shoulders.
If anyone was to watch in super slow motion, they would be able to make the female sliding underneath the unexpecting angel; then when the angel landed, missing his target, the woman rapped herself round the angel in an position, that at any time, would be considered arousing and erotic. As her fang teeth began to grow abnormally fast, closing in the on the slow angel's neck, she could feel a great rush of adrenaline and power coursing through her pulsating veins, knowing what she was to do next.
The next few moments in the universe were quiet, as not a single breathe or sound was unleashed. Then as if all at once, a demonic wind howled through the universe, making all that felt it shiver with fear and lost hope, while the combatants were encased in the apocalyptic hurricane, a loud, agonizing cry resounded throughout the cosmos. This was no normal cry of pain and loss, but the cry of a soul being shattered, and a fallen Archangel dying...
The being left standing had an ethereal glow, with dark, bat like wings. The wings, that belonged, to a foul and evil demon. The eyes portrayed great satisfaction and sadistic pleasure at what they had just accomplished. They had defeated the most powerful Archangel with such ease that it was child's play.
In a final act before heading off to its final destination, the demon stood to his full height and proclaimed in a voice like thunder that made the heavens shake and God cower "I am REBORN!!!!!!!!!...I am coming for you dear brother, to rob you of what you care the most, YOUR PATHEIC HUMANS!!!!"
As the new evil tested it's crimson wings, a first darkness covered the cosmos. Many dark hours were to come and few were going to survive....
-End of chapter 1
Hoped you liked it, send me a review or e-mail of what you think and don't forget to go easy on the flames. Don't worry about the chapter lengths; I am hoping on making chapter two 5000 words long and chapter three 7000 words long
Til next time!
DISCLAMER: I don't own evangelion and I neva will (Demon starts sobbing uncontrollably)!!!!! If this story contains any material from any past fanfiction, no matter how remote, it was not of my doing; my fingers just seem to register what my subconscious is thinking!!!! On with the story!!!!!!
THE PUREST LIGHT AND ETERNAL DARKNESS
CHAPTER 1: THE FALL OF LUCIFER ...(epilogue)
In the beginning, god created the heaven, earth, moon and stars. All was bound to his will. All fulfilled their duty. The sun would rise and set across the gentle sky, a constant reminder of eternal change; the plants and trees would grow from the earth, turning deserts and wastelands, into green gardens of paradise; the first man and the second woman, Adam and Eve, complimented each other and were perfect to populate the Earth and gain dominance over the lower forms of creation; the stars would shine with an ethereal glow when all was dark. A beacon of hope to all of Gods creatures; the Angels and Archangels, gods loyal servants, immortal and pure of heart, would guard and protect the creations of God, from any impurities that would dare forsake the Oni-Powerful's creation. All was right with the cosmos...until evil was born.
Evil first appeared, when God grew restless and tired, from the extreme trails and labours, which drained his strength. When this new side of God took control and dominion of the All-knowing's celestial body, it turned God on his creations, gaining sadistic pleasure from destroying the creations of God. This new persona took even greater pleasure in knowing of the cruel irony, that God was killing its children, but not of its own free will. With great difficultly and strength, God banished this new side of him to the deepest and darkest corners of all existence. After a period of time, the rejected side of the Oni-Potent began to grow and manifest. It began as nothing more then a vacuum in the vastness of space.
Fate and destiny held much heartache and pain for God and its children before the perfect utopia was allowed to be born.
While time monumental went past, God sensed something familiar, growing in the darkest reaches of nothingness; something new which God itself had not created. This new being, greatly scared God, as God never had encountered such a presence with such raw power, and a lust for destruction before. God was worried for its potential knew no bounds. God felt as if all could be lost if this threat was not dealt with the up most speed and strength. God knew this evil could taint the purest of souls, turning once innocent minds into cold, and twisted abominations of their previous forms. God, in his haste and desperation, sent his mightiest and most cunning Archangel, Lucifer, to defeat the unknown entity and leave no traces of its existence. Mighty was Lucifer in strength and grace, almost equal to that of the All Mighty itself. God told Lucifer that it would over watch him and protect him in the upcoming battle. Though God, as mighty and powerful as it is, could not prevent the tragedy that would befall its greatest of heroes, purest of saviours, and most noble of children and itself that cosmic day
Lucifer flew across the heavens and stars to meet with the new evil; the evil sensed that the incoming entity would perfectly suit its dark and corrupt designs. As the entity began to concentrate, it could see through its mind's eye, a mighty angel. The first criteria it could distinguish was that the angel flew with 6 pairs of wings; the wings shone with a white glow that could be considered beautiful and majestic, as well as full with raw power. The angel's eyes were midnight blue, close to a brown shade but definitely blue. These blue orbs portrayed great grace and confidence, as if eagerly challenging any that would appose them; at the same time, they held such kindness and compassion, as if willing to sacrifice anything in order to do the right thing.
As Lucifer closed in on the dark emotions he could sense emitting from the unknown entity, he came into view of the creature that was on one of the moons of Jupiter, as he landed, he found himself for the first time ever in his immortal life, gasped at what he saw.
Before Lucifer were countless volcanoes, which spew boiling hot magma that, held the potential of tearing mortal flesh from bone in seconds. If it weren't for the fact that Lucifer was an Archangel, he would have been dead as soon as he landed on the natural satellite. As he followed the dark flow of energy with his eyes, they have rest on a being he had never seen before. The being appeared to have no shape of form, as if it was a huge mass of darkness. Waves rippled through the expanse between Lucifer and his mysterious enemy.
Lucifer sensed the intense emotions emitting from the heart of the beast. The angel of might grew restless and wary with the evil entity, and drew his mighty sword, the light bringer, from its resting place. The blade was known among all who saw it and its master sparring on the plain of the all- knowing. The blade was engraved with what appeared to be magic ruins. The beast deduced that they were a special incantation that allowed the blade to glow with gentle, azure blue warmth, as if drawing the beast in, daring it to touch its sharp and menacing edge.
Lucifer began to shudder unconsciously when the being began to change its outward appearance. When the transformation was complete, Lucifer couldn't help but stare at his target's new form. The beast appeared to have taken the form of a female, as the body was accented with a menacing glow, and was unclothed, allowing the endowment to be showcased for the entire universe. Her raven-black hair crawled down to her knees and held a flawless quality, as if she was a goddess...or a demon.
Her black, seductive eyes portrayed such power and lust, that they called any mortal, who dared to look into them, to their doom. Behind the façade of the perfect breasts, knee-length hair and her cold black eyes, lay a power so great, Lucifer was unsure if he could win. Lucifer, done with the redundant staring contest, and spoke with a voice that held confidence and power.
"I am known as Lucifer, the light of god. I come on my fathers orders to destroy the creation that he had not made with his own will, and remove it from existence" Lucifer allowed himself the tiniest of scowls, hoping that the entity would not put up a fight
"Pathetic...you believe you can destroy what even your father couldn't kill?" the entity's eyes danced with terrifying power and a twisted sense of pleasure. Seeing Lucifer eyes burn with hatred and resentment towards drove her wild, the power of the knowledge she had was limitless, the fact at all the pieces of jigsaw were in place, with Lucifer being unknowingly linked to God and have a vessel right in front of her, she couldn't help herself but laugh at the fact that her plan had been set in motion, and soon, the foolish angel would take the bait and fall into her trap, where there was no escape and no-one, not even the all-loving God would live to see another sunrise.
"Hold your tongue foul demon! Least I deprive you of your ability to form coherent speech and lies!! My father is a noble and mighty being who will not waste his time of such impure and foul scum!!!!"
"Foolish angel! Your father would never risk the life of his children if he could help it! He sends you because he is too weak to even protect himself! I am his strength and power!!! I am his confidence and intellect!!! I am your father's better self"
Lucifer stood still, trembling with an uncontrollable rage at such blasphemy! How could such a lowly creature allow their tongue to throw up such filth and vomit, as if it was the truth? Lucifer unconsciously opened and closed his right hand, as if aching to wrap his hands round her neck, and slowly drain her body of all life.
Without another word, Lucifer rushed the female, with his sword, coming overhead, with a clear intent of slicing her vertically. She sensed what the arrogant angel was about to try; to her, Lucifer appeared to be moving in slow motion, his battle cry almost stretching on forever, and his eyes danced murderous rage.
What happened in the next few seconds had Lucifer stricken with fear and pain. The angel of truth found himself moving through the air at impossible speeds, seeing his sword coming swiftly close to her head, only to cut through air. The next thing he knew was the sharp pain where his neck was connected to his shoulders.
If anyone was to watch in super slow motion, they would be able to make the female sliding underneath the unexpecting angel; then when the angel landed, missing his target, the woman rapped herself round the angel in an position, that at any time, would be considered arousing and erotic. As her fang teeth began to grow abnormally fast, closing in the on the slow angel's neck, she could feel a great rush of adrenaline and power coursing through her pulsating veins, knowing what she was to do next.
The next few moments in the universe were quiet, as not a single breathe or sound was unleashed. Then as if all at once, a demonic wind howled through the universe, making all that felt it shiver with fear and lost hope, while the combatants were encased in the apocalyptic hurricane, a loud, agonizing cry resounded throughout the cosmos. This was no normal cry of pain and loss, but the cry of a soul being shattered, and a fallen Archangel dying...
The being left standing had an ethereal glow, with dark, bat like wings. The wings, that belonged, to a foul and evil demon. The eyes portrayed great satisfaction and sadistic pleasure at what they had just accomplished. They had defeated the most powerful Archangel with such ease that it was child's play.
In a final act before heading off to its final destination, the demon stood to his full height and proclaimed in a voice like thunder that made the heavens shake and God cower "I am REBORN!!!!!!!!!...I am coming for you dear brother, to rob you of what you care the most, YOUR PATHEIC HUMANS!!!!"
As the new evil tested it's crimson wings, a first darkness covered the cosmos. Many dark hours were to come and few were going to survive....
-End of chapter 1
Hoped you liked it, send me a review or e-mail of what you think and don't forget to go easy on the flames. Don't worry about the chapter lengths; I am hoping on making chapter two 5000 words long and chapter three 7000 words long
Til next time!