Journalists, Heroes, Love, OH MY!

Hey there, this is BeastlyBrunswicker, from Brunswicker's United. Here is the preview to my first fan fiction ever:

Sarah Philips was a mix of happy, sad, and nervous. Sad because she was at Benjamin Franklin's funeral, happy because she'd just heard her mother finalizing that she was going to Philadelphia to court James Hiller, and nervous about what all of her wealthy relatives would think.

"Sarah? I asked your mother if I could court you, so my question is would you wish to court me. I really can't ,er, stand you. I find you quite inspiring," James' voice sounded far away, even though he was standing right next to me.

Sarah wanted to change the tears of sorrow running down her front to tears of great happiness and relief! She secretly had always fancied James, and now her unmistakable love could shine like the stars on the black sky! She nodded like she never nodded before. A happy day was this, even in the thickest fog of sadness! One life had past, but it seemed as if another was born.

Meanwhile, Henri knew he was in HUGE trouble. The chef, for Lafayette's army, hated him, and him only. The chef had even said that if Henri did one more bad deed, he be thrown off, without Lafayette knowing.

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