I FINALLY UPDATED THIS!
No more reviews saying 'Your braking the rules', 'I'm reporting you', 'UPDATE!'. Actually I like people saying ' UPDATE!'
If this is your first time reading Clear Lake, hello! This is about six siblings facing a troubling time that only they can stop. Please Read and Review, and send in OC's only AFTER you have read all chapters. Thank you!
I'm so sorry I didn't do this before. I've just been too busy, too... lazy.
By the way...
There was a HUGE war that happened. Many cats were killed. The alleigances are for BEFORE THE WAR and AFTER. You may want to count the cats I killed :).
My Pen name is Cinderstar377, a cat I created. All usernames I have end in 377... Candy377, Snowstar377. Dulvan377(Don't ask).
Cinderstar(tail) is a black she-cat with gray stripes on her legs, ears, and tail. She has green eyes. She is NOT Cinderheart/pelt. She is the leader of Sunclan, a fanfic I'm working on... but haven't posted yet. I wont for a few months.
Snowstar is a white she-cat with green eyes and the tip of her tail is brown. She is the leader of Snowclan, and is part of a four-book comic I made up.
These two she-cats fight a lot. Expect them to. And expect randomness(maybe not humor), Tigerstar, and Heather.
Don't say the name Heather. That isn't my name. Th-thats...
Nevermind. All you need to know is she is the sibling of Sawn(tom), Jasper(tom), Leelo(she), and Flower(she). Plus she is five moons old.
Don't say her name out loud.
Please don't.
Allegiances Before War
Thunderclan
Leader, Scorchstar- red tom with orange tail and yellow eyes
Deputy, Yellowheart- gray tom with yellow eyes and black paws
Medicine Cat, Grasslace- light gray she-cat with vivid green eyes
Apprentice, Gorgepaw(brown tom)
Warriors:
Heatherfang- tan she-cat
Apprentice, Pinepaw(red tom)
Jaggedfur- spiky black tom
Slowwing- black she-cat
Brighttail- tortishell she-cat with brith blue eyes
Drufffur- bushy tom with black tail
Apprentice, Whitepaw(pure white she-cat)
Eggtail- cream tom with pure white tail, Laurelclaw's mate
Mudwing- dark brown tabby with long bushy tail
Raventooth- skinny black tom with gray stripes on his pelt
Apprentice, Sorrelpaw(brown she-cat with white stripes)
Orangefoot- light red tom
Apprentice, Patchpaw(white tom with black patches and green eyes)
Purpleheart- blue-gray she-cat with unusaully purple eyes
Queens:
Laurelclaw- light gray- she-cat with white paws and brown stripes
Kits, Fuzzykit, Thornkit, and Robinkit)
Elders:
Lightfur- creamy she-cat with white muzzle
Ashfoot- gray tom, oldest cat in Thunderclan
Shadowclan
Leader, Darkstar- gray tom with black ears, paws, and tail
Deputy, Amberrain- pretty light orange she-cat with blue eyes, Darkstar's mate
Medicine Cat, Wildgarlic- dark gray tom with white stripes
Apprentice, Stripepaw(black tom)
Warriors:
Redwing- red tom with yellow eyes
Apprentice, Runningpaw(brown tabby tom)
Thickear- large brown tom
Thorntree- brown tom, Deadheart's mate
Silverstalk- pretty silver she-cat, Amberrain's sister
Dirtfoot- white tom with dark brown-black paws
Queens:
Deadheart- small black she-cat with white underbelly
(kits, Bluekit and Jawkit)
Windclan
Vinestar- Large gray she-cat with green eyes
Deputy, Dapplefoot- speckled black she-cat
Medicine Cat, Sunear- yellow she-cat
Warriors:
Whitefoot- fast white she-cat
Pheasentclaw- lithe brown tom with cream underbelly and red tail, Whitefoot's mate
Curvebelly- small dark she-cat
Apprentice, Runningpaw(dark cream tom)
Graystreak- dark gray tom with lighter gray stripes on ears, back, tail, and legs
Apprentice, Crosspaw(black tom with a brown tail)
Elders:
Hareclaw- creamy tom
Daisypelt- Brown she-cat, formerly of Thunderclan
Riverclan
Bluestar- gray she-cat with vivid blue eyes
Deputy, Sharpeye- brown tom
Apprentice, Hawkpaw(dark brown tabby tom)
Medicine cat, Darkwing- soft brown she-cat, Sharpeye's sister
Warriors:
Longjump- white tom with one brown stripe from his tail to his head
Skyleap- pretty blue-gray she-cat with brown and creamy stripes on her pelt
Apprentice, Soarpaw(white she-cat)
Hugefoot- large heavy creamy tom with brown paws
Apprentice, Reedpaw(light brown tabby, Hawkpaw's brother)
Conebird- yellow she-cat with bright blue eyes
Queens:
Onefoot- brown tom with one black paw
Ashwhisker- light gray with black whiskers
(kits, Blackkit and Frogkit)
After the War Allegiances
Thunderclan
Leader, Yellowstar- gray tom with yellow eyes and black paws
Deputy, Heaterhfan- tan she-cat
Medicine Cat, Grasslace- light gray she-cat with vivid green eyes
Apprentice, Gorgepaw(brown tom)
Warriors:
Jaggedfur- spiky black tom
Slowwing- black she-cat
Apprentice, Fuzzypaw(white tom with one eye missing)
Mudwing- dark brown tabby with long bushy tail and scars on flanks
Apprentice, Thornpaw(brown tom with red paws)
Laurelclaw-light gray she-cat with white paws and brown stripes
Raventooth- skinny black tom with gray stripes on his pelt, Brighttail's mate
Apprentice, Robinpaw(red she-cat with green eyes)
Patchfur- white tom with black patches and green eyes
Muskrat- dark gray she-cat with dark green eyes, Patchfur's mate and formerly a rouge
Whitepelt- pure white she-cat with no tail
Queens:
Brighttail- tortoiseshell she-cat with bright blue eyes
Elders:
Lightfur- creamy she-cat with white muzzle, oldest cat in Thunderclan
Shadowclan
Leader, Darkstar- gray tom with black ears, paws, and tail
Deputy, Amberrain- pretty light orange she-cat with blue eyes, Darkstar's mate
Medicine Cat, Wildgarlic- old dark gray tom with white stripes
Warriors:
Redwing- red tom with yellow eyes
Apprentice, Runningpaw(brown tabby tom)
Deadheart- small black she-cat with white underbelly and one ear missing
Dirtfoot- white tom with dark brown-black paws
Apprentice,Heatherpaw
Blueheart- black she-cat with blue eyes
Queens:
Amberrain- pretty light orange she-cat with blue eyes, Darkstar's mate
Windclan
Vinestar- Large gray she-cat with green eyes
Deputy, Graystreak- dark gray tom with lighter gray stripes on ears, back, tail, and legs
Medicine Cat, Sunear- yellow she-cat
Warriors:
Whitefoot- fast white she-cat
Pheasentclaw- lithe brown tom with cream underbelly and red tail, Whitefoot's mate
Runningclaw- creamy brown tom
Apprentice, Icepaw(white she-cat with cream underbelly)
Crosstail- black tom with a brown tail
Apprentice, Sparrowpaw(lithe brown she-cat with a red tail)
Elders:
Hareclaw- creamy tom
Riverclan
Bluestar- gray she-cat with vivid blue eyes
Deputy, Sharpeye- brown tom
Medicine cat, None
Warriors:
Skyleap- pretty blue-gray she-cat with brown and creamy stripes on her pelt
Conebird- yellow she-cat with bright blue eyes
Askwhisker- light gray she-cat with black whiskers, Skyleap's sister
Hawkfur- dark brown tabby tom
Apprentice, Eaglepaw(brown she-cat)
Soarheart- white she-cat
Reedfur- light brown tabby, Hawkfur's brother
Apprentice, Talonpaw(dark brown tom with black paws)
Blackclaw- huge mean black tom with gray paws
Queens:
Onefoot- brown she-cat with one black paw
(Second litter, Applekit and Rockkit)
Outside the Clans:
Ivy- gray she-cat
Braveclaw- black tom
Braceclaw- black tom, Braveclaw's brother
Snug- fast white she-cat
Longjump- fomerly of Riverclan, a traitor
Stripepaw- formerly of Windclan, a traitor
Frogpaw- formerly of Riverclan, a traitor
Have you said Heather's name out loud yet?
Don't... here's a result of that: *Shows picture of a mangled beaten up kitty).
Here's the Prolouge!
The battle had been dreadful. Around the island, cats were crying over lost ones. Starclan cats were grouping the bodies next to the oak where leaders would hold gatherings.
One cat trailed off. Her mate had died today. So did many others, and one of her kits were maimed. Laurelclaw could not stand the pressure any longer as she threw herself into the lake, hoping to kill herself. I wish I could see my mate one last time... she thought. Then she realized if she died she could see him, and walk the stars with him forever.
Thrusting her head into the lake, Laurelclaw waited for it to be over. Suddenly someone rammed into her side, sending her collapsing onto the sand.
"Mouse brain! What are you doing?" it was her mate!
Laurelclaw forced open her eyes. "I want to join you...please don't leave me!"
Her mate stood over her as a cat of Starclan, with stars dancing around his paws. "Don't worry! I will be with you forever! Just bid your time, and soon you will be with me and then our kits will join us. I will love you forever!" he started to fade.
Laurelclaw's eyes widened. "Don't leave! Please! No!" she begged, crying. But her mate shook his head. "I have to go now. Don't kill yourself! I love you Laurelclaw! Take care of our kits!"he disappeared.
Laurelclaw got to trembling paws and surveyed the area. No one had seen them. Good. Still sobbing, she made her way over to the clearing, where Thornpaw raced up to her. "Mom!" he exclaimed. "No one could find you! I thought you were...dead."
Laurelclaw shook her head. I'm fine."
Thornpaw smiled. "Our whole family survived! Yay! Wait- where is Dad?" Suddenly downcast and worried he stared at his paws. "Did you see him?"
Laurelclaw's legs almost gave away. "I'm sorry, Thornpaw. He... he didn't make it."
Thornpaw stared at her for a moment and then let out a huge wail. "Nooo! Dad! Eggtail!" he yowled and he ran off to where Robinpaw and Fuzzypaw were waiting. As he talked to them Laurelclaw saw that the two's happy faces turned into sadness, and Robinpaw padded to Laurelclaw and pressed her muzzle against the she-cat's fur, tears running down her face.
"I...I know, Robinpaw. But Eggtail will be with us, in our hearts, forever. Then we will see him in Starclan! Right, Robinpaw?"
Robinpaw nodded dully. "R-right," she murmured.
The two walked around the oaks looking for Thunderclan cats that had died. Then, helping carrying Eggtail, they padded back to camp.
Later
At camp Robinpaw still looked unhappy so Laurelclaw camp over to her to speak to her.
"Just remember that he loves you and that he will be with us, and he wants me to take care of you. Robinpaw, you will talk to him again. He might even come down from Starclan to see you!" Laurelclaw tried to smile at Robinpaw, who's face lit up the tiniest bit.
"You really think so?" she asked.
"I know so." Laurelclaw answered. Their family may be ripped apart, but now they knew they were really together. And Eggtail would watch over them until it was their time to walk among the stars with him, and even forever after that.
I think you might see Tigerstar and Heather next chapter.
07/28/12
For those who send in OC's, they don't appear on this simply because then the allegiances would be... REALLY long.
Read on,
Cinderstar377