bPoster's Note: Here is the first chapter of Raelynn's NEW fanfic. It's still Twilight, and although I'm a bit over that now, I know a lot of people still like it. This took about 10 000 000 000 000 000 000 rewrites, but I think it's a lot better than her first one. So please read and enjoy!/b
Brianna Shayle was always the most popular girl at Forks High, because she was a beautiful cheerleader. She was very beautiful like a vampire princess, and had golden hair that was long and wavy with caramel-toned highlights and the most gorgeous blue eyes that had ever beheld Edward Cullen. They had been dating now, but had broken up because Brianna wanted to find herself. It was a difficuult time for the beautiful Edward to handle.
Then they had a new girl in school, and her name was Bella Swan becaus it was her that had come to Forks with her family. See, her mother has Bella with her ex-husband who is Charlie, but now she has married Phil and they had their other daughter who was named Rennemsee. Resnemenee was so beautiful and specual the parents loved her more than their love for Bella. So they had made Bella go and live with Charlie, so they had more time to spend with Renmeese.
Charlie had many alcholol problens because he is police man, but he loved Bella. He was often out catching murderers and people who had smoked at work, so they had to go to jail, and then Edward would come over to visit Bella and they made their true love under the sky.
One day Brianna fought with Ashlynn Master, and they decided they should become mortal enemies. Both of them loved Mike Newton, but Brianna loved him most, but Ashlynn had dated him, but she had slept with Eric, but Mike had found out. And now he knew that Brianna loved him more, but Ashlynn refused to break up so he could never be with Brianna.
It broke Edward's heart that Brianna loved Mike so much, and that he could not have her anymore. He was so sad that he hung himself in the forest from a tree and just waited to strangle. But suddenly the kind and benevolent Bella Swan was for a walk in the forest to pick mushrooms for dinner, since Charlie has spent all the money on moonshine again. She saw a beautiful boy hanging from a big oak tree, and took him down and gave him mouth two mouth, and then she dragged him through the forest to Carlisle and Esme who adopted him and gave him love and kindness. He was so greatful to Bella from saving his life from a broken heart, that he could never love anyone but her again.
Brianna was really happy with her Mike, because she loved him more than she had loved Edward. But Ashlynn was really jealous and sad, so she tried to make out with Edward all the time, to make Mike jealous. But that didn't work, LOLLLZ because Mike only had his love for Brianna. It made Bella really sad, but Edward kissed her and made love to her under the desk in biology, and that was so romantic and crazy. Everyone got jealous.
One day Brianna's parents said that "Your life is too perfect. You're too beautiful and popular to ever have known pain. So we have adopted a new daughter who has had a terrible childhood, and she will be your sister and the experiance will teach you compassion and suffering."
A girl came into the room, and she was very thin with a skeleton for bones, and she wore a jute bag that said POTATOS stamped on it in black letters. Her sadly colored eyes were sunk into her skully face and her dull hair like deaf grass. She had a razor blade on a chain around her neck to slash her wrists with.
"I don't want this sister!" cried Brianna, and ran away from home. Mike took her to the movies, and later they had lots of sex and listened to Justin Bieber. Mike is a really good boyfriend, so he never said that Brianna's music taste sucked. Not like LOGAN, fuck you! Go listen to Anthony and Johnson while you have sex with Amber! My life is SO much better as a free woman!
So yeaaaah, Brianna was pretty happy in her life. Even her own parents were jealous of her perfectness. It was all good until one day the homeroom teacher Miss Scrully came into the classroom and said "Dear students, instead of prom this year, we shall have X-Factor. The principle has decided that voting for prom queen is descriminating, because only the most beautiful girl in school can win it, which means Brianna, and none of the ugly ones will ever have a chance. That's sexist. So now we shall have talent show instead, so someone can DESERVE to win for once."
Brianna began to cry, because she could never be prom queen if she wasn't allowed to be the prettisest girl in school! But then she thought that she would win Xfactory instead, because that's actually cooler. All schools have a prom queen, but she was going to be a a STAR!