The Son and Dads Switching

The wish:

One day trunks and goten were collecting dragon balls so they can wish there dads into girls for their own amusement. So they collect the dragon balls and trunks said, Rise shinron and grant our wish and goten said, this is going to be funny and trunks said yeah then the sky got as dark as night and a giant snake like dragon a rose and said what is your desire say your wish. trunks was so excited that he stuttered a bit sh-shinron we-we wish hey trunks I dads are the strongest people in the universe right not now goten im trying to get our wish granted the dragons patient was limiting speak your desire you drive my patients we wish for man it be so cool if we were as strong as our dads huh trunks GOTEN NO as you wish then shenrons eyes turned bright red and said your wish is granted what is your second wish trunkses brain was racketing to think of a way out of this then he spoke and said shenron we wish he was about to say cancel the first wish but then he thought it would be pretty cool to be in side his father's body and even if he did want to punish him hed be way to strong by then but he didn't want the wish to happen now so he said we wish for the first wish to happen a year later and for it staylike that for 3 months to reverse the wish as you wish his eyes turned bright red once more and the dragon was disappiring back inside the dragon balls and they scattered all over the world once again and the sky turned back to normal shenron would be seen again once more oh but that would be much much later.

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