So, this is my first attempt at a fanfiction I don't have a beta, so all grammar errors are mine, and mine alone. Also I'm really sorry for my crappy grammar. And I appreciate all reviews, good, bad, anything. One last thing, if I'm being slow on the updates, don't restrain yourself on badgering me to update. Anywho, hope you like this. :) Oh, yea I just remembered... I kinda can't get enough Daniel whump, so there will be much of that in the future -probably obsessively so- so just, be prepared..


Sparks flew across his field of vision, accompanied by the the roaring sound of machinery exploding. As the Tel'tak lurched this way and that.

"What the hell is going on Carter?!" Jack yelled, struggling against the lurching of the Tel'tak, to come rest beside Samantha Carter, who was currently sitting in the pilot seat.

"I don't know sir!" She reported, well that sure is helpful Jack thought, all they needed now was a black hole right in front of them and it would just be another day. The ship made another lurch nearly knocking Jack of balance.

"Son of a-" He was cut off suddenly as a beam of light surged through the ship.


The last thing she remembered was the colonel yelling something- in a well to put it lightly, a very, very pissed off voice,- just before a bright light engulfed the ship. As she lifted her head a sharp pain shot through it like a lightning bolt.

"Jeez." She wheezed out, at the same time taking the Tel'tak in. She was still in the chair, and there where burn marks almost every place she looked. The colonel-who somehow had ended up on the other side of the Tel'tak.- was struggling to get up.

"Here sir." She said, as she ignored the pain in her head and got up to help him. He didn't look hurt, well that's at least something she thought.

"Thanks Carter." He managed, a small little smile, he looked slightly unsteady on his feet. But noticing her judging look he immediately stood straighter. Well thats good old Jack for you.

"What the heck happened?" Daniel's voice interrupted her train of thought. He was standing off next to Teal'c, he had a nasty bruise on his arm, but otherwise appeared to be alright. She glanced at Teal'c, she was about to ask him if he was alright, but he beat her to the punch.

"I am unharmed Major Carter." she nodded, the last thing they needed was for one of them to be hurt.

"So Carter, want to tell us what the heck's going on, or you want to keep that to yourself?" She smiled a little at that.

"I have no idea sir".

"Well then, ideas?" Jack asked casually, coming to stand next to her. She glanced around the sorry excuse of a Tel'tak, everyone's face was pretty much blank. Except for Daniel's -naturally.

"Well according to Tokra intelligence, the planet were orbiting was emitting some pretty strange energy signals recently." He supplied.

"I suppose the light was some residual effect of the planet's gravitational pull suddenly increasing." She added, thinking it could be possible that the excess energy from the suddenly increased gravitational pull from the planet could have caused the light.

"Stranger things have happened." She said, voicing her thought out loud.

"Speaking of the planet where the heck is it?" Jack asked, staring out the Tel'tak's window.

"What the?!" Daniel exclaimed, alarm creeping into his voice.

"What are you guys….." she began to say as she whirled around and looked outside the Tel'tak, alarm seeping through her like a disease.