Artemis: This is my first fanfic so it probably isn't that good but here ya go!
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"blah blah" Rhyho speaking to someone with her jutsu
'blah blah' Rhyho thinking
"blah blah" demon speaking
Thankful for that night.
It was on a rainy night that I first say him, clad in black with a sword on his back. Just lying there on the wet grass with out a care in the world. I walked over to him and noticed that he bore some shallow cuts on his arms and chest.
"Hello?"
"…"
"Are you okay?"
"…yes" he said, in a soft voice with a tinge of sadness.
"Um…why are you lying out here in the rain?"
"The rain…it calms me down."
"What's your name? My name is Rhyho Shizaku."
"Uchiha, Itachi Uchiha."
"Say do you have a place to stay?"
He just shook his head in response.
"Then come to my place! I have an extra room" I said with enthusiasm.
That is when he got up, turned and stared me in the eye. We stayed that way for ten whole minutes. His beautiful black eyes looking at me with such intensity I have to fight the urge to back away. The rain had finally stopped.
"Why would you invite a complete stranger to your house? I could kill you in your sleep." He said with a look of confusion on his face.
"Because, true you look scary, but my gut tells me you are breaking ever so slowly inside and I always listen to my gut feeling." I say in a soft, calming, and confident voice.
He looked at me in shock. I tensed, ready to jump away at a moment's notice, while he slowly walked towards me. When he was little less then six inches away, I heard the soft footsteps of a wolf coming toward us.
"Um… I think I hear footsteps."
"I don't." he stated.
He leaned ever so closer to my face and when he was barely an inch away when I said.
"Well I think one of my wolves is on the way, so we should get going." I said while turning in the direction of my house.
Itachi's p/o:
As I saw her back turn away, I find myself silently fuming.
"How could she see that when she is only a little kid?!"
I started to follow her, assumingly to her house.
"So you really are going to come with me?" she said with a smile accompanied by a small giggle.
"Damn, she looks really cute when she smiles…wait why'd I just think that? CRAP! She's only like 6 years old!!"
"Are you okay? You look like your off in the skies." She said startling me from my thinking.
"Oh…um…you know I plan on leaving when I heal."
"I figured as much, but thank you for telling me."
"You know, you seem really mature for a little girl."
"And you seem a little young to be killing a whole clan. But we all have our secrets."
I just stared at her in shock. "H…How did you know that?"
She turned around and smirked at me. "Like I said, everyone has their own secrets. Why should I be any different?"
"How old are you?"
"Heheh 8!!"
My face must have fallen because she just laughed at me and started to walk to her house again.
When we got to her house she bandaged me up and sent me to bed.
Rhyho's p/o:
After i tended to his wounds i told him too go to sleep. I went to bed shortly after that.
The next day he was gone.
...
That was 9 years ago.
And a lot has happened since then...
O.o cliffy!!
Tell me if i should keep going or not!
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