THIS IS MY NEW NARUTO OC STORY, BUT I TIE IT IN WITH THE REAL NARUTO STORY TOO. ANYTHING IN BRACKETS IS FILLER INFORMATION FOR YOUR BENEFIT ONLY AND IS NOT REALLY PART OF THE STORY. I ACTUALLY HAVE 40 PAGES OF MY EXTRA INFORMATION INCLUDING HAND DRAWN ART AND DETAILING FOR THIS, BUT OBVIOUSLY CANT POST IT.

[Our story starts 1 year after the Uchiha Clan Massacre. The two main characters are nine-year olds and approximately 1 year older than Sasuke, Naruto, Sakura]

First Arc: Sharingan Arc

Chapter 1: Darkness Falls: Blinded by Envy

"No…let us go…" yelled Ryuchi

"Stop!" yelled Firu

"Well, maybe you should have thought of this before you left your clan walls, you punks" a shinobi said as he roundhoused the two boys to the ground.

[Ryuchi has a medium tan skin, dark hair with a dark blue tint and his hair is shoulder length. His eyes are a deep hazel brown and he wears a white shirt with long sleeves, dark grey pants and same color shoes. His shirt hangs outside his pants and he has a dark blue rope as a belt fastened over the shirt, at his waist. Firu has short black hair. It looks kinda messy and spiky at the same time. He has hazel green eyes and white skin. His left arm is taped from wrist to elbow and right arm is taped from wrist to mid forearm. Firu wears a dark green sleeveless shirt which is tucked into his dark green pants. He has a dark blue sash at his waist and same color shoes.]

"How mighty is the Saratoshi clan now!" another shinobi mocked as a group of them gathered and pummeled the two eight year olds.

Ryuchi grabbed one of their legs and bit down as hard as he could.

"Ahhhh!" the shinobi yelled, "you little punk!"

He reached into his satchel and pulled out a kunai knife. Firu saw this and jumped forward.

"Lightning Style: Intense Shocking Cyclone Jutsu!" Firu yelled.

He pulled in a breath and spewed out a pitiful gust of wind and electricity. As it came in contact with the shinobi's arm, it sent his kunai knife flying back into his own shoulder.

"You goddamn brat," a third shinobi yelled as he delivered a roundhouse kick to the weakened face of the eight year old Firu.

Firu was sent flying back into Ryuchi. He slowly started pulling himself to his feet. As he got up, he noticed that Ryuchi was knocked out.

"You will pay," the man yelled as one of his fellow shinobi pulled the kunai knife out.

"Fire Style: Flamethrower Jutsu!" the shinobi yelled. He sent a punch through the air and a flamethrower showered from his fist.

"No, Zarashi…You've gone too far," a shinobi yelled, "what have you done!?"

"Ahhh, my eyes, it hurts so much! My eyes, I can't see." cried Firu

As the smoke cleared the shinobi saw a badly burnt child with his eyes missing and blood rushing from his eye sockets.

"You've gone too far," a shinobi yelled, "let's get out of here."

All the shinobi fled in fear leaving the two boys for dead.

"Help me Ryuchi. Please…help…me," Firu whispered as he pulled on Ryuchi's sleeve.

As Ryuchi came to, he looked up and saw his best friend on the ground with dripping tears of blood. He turned pale at this site and froze.

"Help me…" his dying voice whispered again. Ryuchi unfroze and lifted his friend to his shoulders. He picked up Firu and slowly carried him back toward their clan. The rain starts to fall and the blood gets washed away from the streets.

[Borders represent scene breaks]

The door to the house slides open as Ryuchi falls forward and drops Firu forward.

"Do you know how late it is…" a lady walks in yelling.

As she looks down at the boys she drops the plates of rice and curry she was carrying. Her scream echoes through the whole village. A man runs in and finds the two boys on the ground.

"Ryuchi, what happened?" he asked in a demanding voice.

"Zarashi…" Firu whispers as he passes out.

"Damn it!" the man yells as he punches a wall, "this is the last straw."

Ryuchi and the man sat at the hospital in a waiting area. Ryuchi's arms and torso were bandaged up.

"Will Firu be ok?" Ryuchi quickly asked.

"I don't know son, let's wait and see," Ryujin replied calmly

A doctor came out of the operating room as the waiting light turned off and came over to Ryujin.

"He will make it," the doctor paused, "Firu is in critical condition and he can't see anymore. It seems his eyes were burned out, but with the surgery we've been able to fix his skin cells, so at least he won't have any burn scar tissue."

"Yea…at least he's alive." Ryujin exhaled heavily.

"Can we…" Ryuchi hesitated

"Yes." replied the doctor.

They walk into the room and look at Firu. He was mummified in medical bandages.

"Ryuchi, is that you?"

"Yes, and father came too."

Hearing this Firu tightened his arms to his waist and sat up as much as he could

"Sir" Firu said as best he could.

"It's ok, relax. You really need to rest if you are going to make a full recovery." Ryujin said.

He looked down at the boy for a moment, then turned and walked to the door.

"Make a quick recovery…son." Ryujin said as he walked out.

"That's the first time he called me that…" Firu whispered with a glow.

Ryuchi looked at him and smiled.

[Ryujin is a tall well built man with the same skin as Ryuchi. He has light bluish-grey eyes and wears a long dark blue robe.]

"This was the last straw," Ryujin said, "I want the Ishiba Clan in body bags! Attacking helpless children...it's, it-"

"You want to destroy our main clan of ninja. Do you really think I care for YOUR clan that much?" a heavily silhoutted figure said from the other end of the spacious room.

"They assaulted the heirs to my clan, they disrespected my family, and you expect me to just sit around!" Ryujin started to raise his voice.

"You should know that your Seringan is not THAT important to this village."

"What!? It's the most powerful jutsu in this village, let alone the only genjutsu," nothing but silence, "fine then, I have no choice, but to secede from this village."

"If you leave, the Ishiba clan will be able to freely attack you as a foreign nation."

"I know that. And we will crush them."

"Even if you are outnumbered 40 to1?"

"I will kill Zarashi with my bare hands. He nearly took my blood.."

"Then I have no choice. If you counterattack the Ishiba, you will be attacking the village as a whole."

"What!? You bastard!"

"I cannot hesitate. From this day forward the Village Hidden in the Shroud declares war on your Saratoshi clan. Leave, now. And don't let me see any of your people outside that wall.."

"You will pay for this~Ooikage." Ryujin said as he walked away.

As Ryujin leaves a pair of Sharingan eyes appear on the silhoutted figure. They transform into Mangekyo Sharingan and a voice says, "The first part is now complete," the silhoutte gets up, revealing the real Ooikage and disappears into the desolate darkness of the room.

[The Village Hidden in the Shroud is made up by me. Its supposed location is somewhere south of the Land of Wind (Village Hidden in the Sand). The Ooikage (lit. means: Shroud's Shadow) is the leader of the Village Hidden in the Shroud. Seringan is the brother eye of the Sharingan. Unlike the Sharingan which predicts physical movements, the Seringan predicts thoughts. It has four stages then an ultimate stage. In each stage the iris turns blue and the pupil white and a black triangle pointing inward toward the pupil is contained depending on the stage (1-4). The Ultimate Seringan form has an inverted black star form with same colors.]

So how is this for chapter 1?