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please read, and enjoy
"Hi" - speech
'Hi' - thoughts
"Hi"-Kyuubi
Chapter 1: Birth of The Amatsugan
Naruto panted as he ran. He was running as fast as his nine year old legs could carry
him. Behind him, he heard the growl of dogs and the unmistakeable gnashing of
teeth.
He didn't look back. Up ahead he saw a large group of houses and put on a burst of
speed. Naruto channeled a burst of chakra to his legs, and as soon as he was near,
he jumped, expelling his chakra to further his momentum.
Naruto flew through the air, not knowing what he did was just a very advanced form of
chakra control.
Naruto landed hard on the roof of the compound. Looking down and panting, he saw
the dogs barking. 'Thank Kami I got away,' Naruto thought to himself.
The dogs eventually went away, and Naruto began to climb down, when he saw a
window open. "Kuso!" Naruto grunted and lay down flat.
He peered over the edge, and saw a man with a Cloud head band. He examined
him curiously. 'What's a Cloud ninja doing here? And... is that Hinata?'
For sure, it was a foreign ninja. Naruto watched as the foreigner began putting
Hinata in a bag. Naruto gasped, and ducked as the ninja turned around.
Contrary to popular belief, Naruto was actually very intelligent, but his intelligence
was hidden due to his worry of the teachers hating him even more. Their pride
and happiness was based soley around the Uchiha. Naruto growled at the thought
of him.
He returned his attention to the kidnapper, as he now realized the Cloud ninja was.
He grit his teeth.
'I've got to do something...' Naruto thought furiously.
Naruto began prying one of the planks from the roof off. Summoning a bit of
Kyuubi's chakra, he began writing a message.
'Hinata's...been...kidnapped...Cloud ninja' Naruto furiously scratched into the wood.
Naruto grinned as his nails returned to their normal length. "How the hell does the
old man not tell me about this... you'd expect he'd think that the Kyuubi would try
to contact me," Naruto muttered under his breath.
'You'd think that kit, but you humans have a certain... propensity for not thinking
ahead."
'... shut up Kyuubi'
Naruto jumped off the roof, trying to get as close to the walls as he could.
Reaching out, he quickly lengthened his nails again and dug them into the Hyuuga
walls.
He slid down, emitting a terrible screeching noise.
Thock!
Naruto barely dodged the kunai that was thrown at him. He channeled his chakra
and turned around, now facing the Cloud ninja.
Naruto's eyes glowed red.
Growling, he quickly tossed the wooden plank into one of the windows. It shattered
the windows, and lights began to quickly turn on.
"KUSO!" Naruto growled as the Cloud ninja began running.
Naruto's red eyes flickered. A thin, dark purple iris formed around his larger natural one.
A yellow circle formed in his pupil, resembling a halo. At the same time, a white, more
noticeable iris formed in the middle of his first one. It wasn't a perfect circle like the
other two, however. This one had waves to it.
Then. just as quickly as it appeared, it disappeared.
Naruto nearly fell off, having gotten dizzy. Shaking his head to clear his confusion, he
noticed the Hyuuga talking behind him.
'Kyuu? What was that?'
'Aa... go kit, get after him. I'm not sure what just happened.'
Kyuubi had felt what had happened. How could he not? It had shaken his cage to
it's core. He had felt a wave of pure, white chakra that he had never thought he
would feel again until today.
He growled as a second wave of chakra came, signaling the eyes changing back.
This time, the chakra that came back was a dark blue, and it brought a feeling of
dread and darkness with it.
'Hmm... it seems the kit has THAT Kekkai Genkai... this should be interesting.'
Kyuubi then noticed the dark blue chakra settling into an orb, next to where the
white chakra had apparently settled.
He snorted as he saw the two chakras twist around each other for a moment, showing
a grinning skull.
"Hmm... you and your games...but then... I don't think you're giving the kit the
Amatsugan for no reason now,"
Who Kyuubi was speaking to wasn't clear until a shadow emerged from the pipes leading
to his cell.
The Shinigami.
He stood tall, and walked swiftly, holding his scythe over his shoulder. He stopped in front
of Kyuubi's cage.
"It has been determined... that a new Shounin be named..."
Kyuubi rested on his paws. "So...it is that time again?"
The Shinigami sighed, "Unfortunately... there is a great evil here in this world,
Kyuubi, and this boy must be the one to rid the world of it..."
Kyuubi growled. "So... why him? He already has too much on his shoulders..."
The Shinigami frowned. "You have grown attached to him..."
Kyuubi sat up on his haunches. "What of it? The boy has never had a
father, nor a mother, and I, am the reason why he is hated so, and
the reason why he knows no family. It is the least I can do to make sure my
wrongs do not end up being his death."
The Shinigami bowed his head for a moment, then he stared into Kyuubi's eyes.
Kyuubi shuddered.
"Kyuu, Kyuu... how many times must I tell you it was not your fault?
This is why the boy must be the one... I have been watching his lineage for
what feels like a millenia now. His clan has had the potential to wield
the Amatsugan for a long time now... I just never thought we'd actually need
to bestow it upon one of them... and then... there is the Uzumaki blood in
him..."
The two etheral beings turned to look at the black, swirling mass of chakra.
"Indeed... if he can control the two chakras, he will be what brings this world
to peace..."
The Shinigami nodded, as he gripped his scythe in his hand.
"The snake... what did you say his name was?"
Kyuubi growled as memories of how he was brought under control by two
human beings.
"Orochimaru... watch him... but it's really Madara you need to watch..."
The Shinigami's eyes flared with fire. "Be assured," the Shinigami hissed,
the fire in his eyes flickering, "Madara will not go unpunished... he has
prevented what every human must go through, and that is life
and death... his desire for immortality will be his downfall..."
Kyuubi raised his hindquarters and stretched. "Indeed... how long will he
live....having stolen that scroll?"
"Long enough to plunge this world into utter darkness if he is not
stopped.. long enough..."
There was a pause in the conversation. The Shinigami raised his scythe
warily.
"Watch him, Kyuubi, make sure he does not die.. he is far too important."
Kyuubi nodded...as best as a demon fox could nod anyways.
"You make sure you and the others up there watch him... he will need it."
The Shinigami nodded. Then, with an unearthly roar, he raised his scythe,
and brought it down on to the floor, leaving a straight, jagged line that
quickly began spreading through out the floor, creating a seal.
The seal glowed brightly for a second, and the two beings examined it
curiously.
The seal flared down with a flicker, and the two beings both let out a breath
they did not know they had been holding.
The Shinigami turned around, gave Kyuubi a nod, and disappeared.
Kyuubi laid down again.
"And so...it begins..."
Meanwhile, Naruto had been chasing the man for well over five minutes now.
He growled as he stopped to sniff the air.
Naruto knew the Hyuuga wouldn't be coming for several minutes, they would be
too disorganized and paniced.
His ears twitched.
Naruto moved his head to the side and dodged the thrown kunai.
His ears twitched again.
He turned to his left and got down on all fours and began chasing after the
Cloud nin.
Naruto ran into a clearing and paused, getting up from the ground.
"Doton: Ijou Dobei no Jutsu!"
Naruto fell backwards as the earth around him formed into a sort of cage. He
growled, and his eyes once again changed to the Amatsugan and back.
The Cloud nin walked forward from the bushes and smirked.
"This is what Konoha sends? An academy student? My, they must not care
about the girl's eyes very much."
Naruto growled as he glared at the Cloud nin. "That's what you
think you bastard," Naruto growled out before running his hands through a set
of seals.
"Doton: Gekisai Doseki no Jutsu!"
The Cloud nin raised an eyebrow as the earth and rocks around them began to
rise.
He quickly dodged however, when they began to fly at him at high speeds. He
threw the unconcious Hinata to the ground and dodged the rocks and debris
flying at him.
He got up, only to have Naruto in his face. "Suprise," Naruto shouted as he
brought his fist up.
The Cloud nin caught Naruto's punch and twisted. Naruto groaned as his
arm was twisted painfully.
Naruto manuvered his body around until he was almost turned away from the
Cloud nin.
The Cloud nin smirked, and quickly pushed Naruto to the ground and began taking
out kunai.
Naruto could only lay there helplessly as the enemy nin began throwing kunai.
He watched as every single kunai made an outline of his body on the earth,
preventing him from escaping.
Naruto watched the nin take out another kunai and began charging.
Tha-thump.
Naruto's heart was beating abnormally loud as the nin was about to bring down
the kunai.
Tha-thump, tha-thump,tha-thump,tha-THUMP!
With each beat, the nin's Kunai came closer and closer. Naruto could see the
razor edges of the kunai, so close it was.
Until something inside of him broke.
Naruto immediately began feeling new chakra coursing his veins, and he relished
the feeling of power.
He grit his hands and noticed that his claws were now there, albeit longer then
usual, and he felt more...animalistic then usual.
Naruto glanced at the kunai and saw his eyes.
His breath caught in his throat. His eyes!
He saw them and examined them, as he wondered over this new Kekkai Genkai
that had mysteriously shown up.
He glared at the man and gasped.
It was astounding, he could see the man's chakra vessels, and his weak points.
He could see a motion of the man's arms before it moved.
Focusing, he saw through the chakra vessels and into his body. His bones glowed
brightly to him, and he saw the nin's kunai drawing ever closer.
With an amazing slowness. He blinked and focused on making the kunai move
slower.
It stopped moving.
Naruto could control time.
Naruto stepped quickly got up and felt a burst of pain. 'What?' Naruto thought
to himself, confused.
'What's this? The more I move the more it hurts...'
Naruto looked down, and a dawn of understanding lit up his face.
He merely slowed things down, but because he was moving faster, it hurt because
of the differences of reality clashing together.
Naruto grinned and released time. The nin dove forward and stabbed the earth with
his kunai.
The nin stood up and narrowed his eyes. "What did you- how did you?" The nin
demanded.
Then the nin saw Naruto's eyes.
"I see... if that's what your eyes can do, then I think I'll TAKE THOSE INSTEAD!"
The nin dove forward, in slow motion. Naruto breathed out in wonderment.
And then the pain flared up again. Wincing, he ran to Hinata and began another
set of seals.
"Futon: Kamikaze Kamaitachi no Jutsu," Naruto shouted, as he released time again.
The nin barely turned around before he was slammed into a tree by the winds, and he
was cut sharply with every new direction the winds turned.
The nin fell down, bleeding heavily, and Naruto fell to a knee, gasping.
Already he could feel the stages of chakra exhaustion setting in.
'Kit, why the hell do you think you're doing? Get off your ass and finish this already!'
Naruto grit his teeth. 'You have a lot of explaining to do furball...' Nontheless, Naruto
got up and off from his knees.
Summoning the last of his own chakra, his quickly ran through another set of seals,
while mixing in some of Kyuubi's.
"Koumajutsu: Go Tenma Kiritateru no Jutsu!"
Naruto got low to the ground as his claws lengthened to five inches longer then normal.
They were also extremely sharp, and had an unnatural red glow to them. Naruto growled.
And then he charged.
The Cloud nin barely doged as Naruto took his first slash at him. 'Okay then, four more to
go,' Naruto thought as the tree behind him fell down with a thud.
The Cloud nin gasped. Naruto took his momentary distraction and ran as fast as he could,
channeling chakra to his legs to add even more speed.
This time, there was no dodging. The first slash created marks over the nins chest, the
second claw that came forth cut across his leg, almost crippling him.
The coupe de grace however, was when Naruto brought both of his hands up, and
slammed them down onto the ground, expelling the chakra gathered in his claws,
and blowing the nin back, adding the venemous demon chakra to his wounds.
Naruto was gasping hard now, as he fell foward, finally almost out of chakra, as his
eyes reverted to normal.
He heard a rustle in the bushes.
He weakly turned around, pulling out a kunai to try and defend himself, but dropped it
when he realized it was the Hyuuga clan.
Naruto glared, "You bastards have some great fucking timing don't you?"
With that, he fell into a dead faint.
Alright! First story, first chapter, and over five pages... not too bad I think.
Read and review please. How Naruto knows these jutsu and why he is so powerful
will be explained in the next chapter... powerful for a nine year old anyways.
Don't worry, he's not going to be overpowered, he'll still get his ass handed to him
a couple times... he just won't be as... weak...
Translations:
Amatsugan- Heavenly Eyes
Shounin- Saint
Doton: Ijou Dobei no Jutsu - Surrounding Earthen Walls
Doton: Gekisai Doseki no Jutsu - Pulverising Earth
Futon: Kamikaze Kamaitachi no Jutsu - Divine Cutting Winds
Koumajutsu: Go Tenma Kiritateru no Jutsu - Five Demon Slashes