Test Alternative Outcome
Summary: An alternative storyline for Rory from my story Test.
Rory Gilmore, her mum Lorelai and her best friend Lane walked around the supermarket. Lorelai thought she was about to burst into tears because they were going there to buy a pregnancy test for her 18 year old daughter who has to go to College next year. She found the aisle with the tests. Rory and Lane came up behind her and she heard them each take a deep breath
"Which one?" Asked Rory, they didn't care about who heard them, they drove all the way to Woodbridge so no one they knew would see them and see what their buying.
"Ummmm...this one." Lorelai said after looking at all the different tests, Rory grabbed one and they headed to the cash register. They paid for it and drove back to Stars Hollow.
They walked into Lorelai's room where there was an adjoining bathroom, Rory hugged Lane and when she hugged her mum they stood there for a few minutes, Rory took a deep breath and headed for the bathroom and shut the door, Lorelai sat on the bed,
after a few seconds Lane and she heard a scream from the bathroom
"Rory!" Called her mum, Rory burst out of the bathroom smiling
"I just got my period!" Yelled Rory, Lane squealed in excitement and she and Rory jumped around laughing,
"Rory's not pregnant, let's go dancing!" Lane exclaimed, Lorelai let out a deep shaky breath, thank god! She though, she smiled at her daughter's happiness. She went and joined them, and for the rest of the night the three of them ate junk food and watched TV.
This is very short I know but review anyway, is this better or not so better than the actual story?