H0ll0w: Hi there! This is my first fanfiction so be nice... I think it's rather bad... in fact... I'm pretty positive it's bad... But it's your opinion that counts, so please review!


Toshiro Tachiou :

Chapter One


No this can't be happening

No this can't be happening! Her thoughts screamed at her. NO it's not fair! I'm not ready to die yet! I don't want to die yet!! No body, move!! Come on move something! Open your eyes please!! She cried out silently however her body remained still like it was forever captured in a photograph.

Suddenly the weight had been lifted it was as though her body was the way it was moments before the car crash. She looked down only to see a chain connected to her chest. What the heck?! She asked herself as her eyes followed the chain links that lead to her body.

"NO! That's impossible! That's not me… this is me… so what's that?!" she cried out as she saw her crushed body chained to her soul.

"It's a Chain of Fate…" a rough voice echoed behind her.

The girl visibly jumped in surprise at the voice. She quickly turned around only to see a boy with white hair no older than her. "It's a what?"

"Chain of Fate… when people die the Chain of Fate binds their souls to their bodies," he further explained.

"I knew it… I'm dead…" she whispered quietly as her eyes fell on her parents and brother still alive (but barely) in the crushed car. "Hold on a second, if I'm dead… how can you speak to me… even see me?"

"I'm a Soul Reaper, I'm here to send you to the Soul Society…" the young man answered pulling out his zanpakutou.

"Here, there… hold on a second, I'm sorry! I didn't mean to… just put away the sword!" she begged putting her hands over her face like they would actually protect her.

He shook his head with an amused smirk before turning the zanpakutou around so the end of the hilt was facing her forehead.

"What's your name?" he asked as the sword neared her head.

"Tyra Nagasaki," she replied timidly trembling in fear.

"Tyra… Nagasaki…" he murmured before he gently pressed the hilt to her head.

Then everything went black.

Tyra woke up in the middle of the street in an old Japanese style main street.

"The irony…" she muttered, "I die in a car crash and wake up on a dirt road…"

"Excuse me?" she called to anyone who was listening, "Where am I and where can I get something to eat?!"

Suddenly the busy bustle came to a complete stop as citizens all turned around and faced her.

Her cheeks turned pink with embarrassment. She just asked a simple question, it's not like she wanted the whole town's attention, "What?" she whimpered looking at the hundreds of faces with eyes that rested on her own.

"Leave her alone!"


H0ll0w: Ok, well that's the first chapter... I didn't continue it to make it long because I was pretty sure it was bad.

Ichigo: It's not that bad.

H0ll0w: (frowns hides behind Ichigo) Don't even try to cheer me up. It is so bad.

Ichigo: Is not!

H0ll0w: Is too!

Ichigo: Is not!

Toshiro: Um... right moving on... review.