So this is my first story apart from school work. Very short first chapter I know but things should get better . I will make mistakes but everyone does ( especially 13 year old girls with twenty minuets to type this !) please rate and any tips would be nice
Forgotten Friends
"Dr Hannah, there's a girl in reception looking for you" Lenny told her as she entered the department. She looked around until she heard "Zoe" a shy and nervous voice forced her to turn around.
" Is there somewhere we can talk?" she smiled brightly.
" Um, yeah" Zoe led her into Nick Jordan's office knowing he wouldn't mind. They sat in silence staring at each other.
"I really need your help, I'm in a bit of trouble and everyone has left me " the girl looked nervous whilst waiting for some kind of reaction. "Say something please".
"It's too early for this, I need coffee, come" .This was too much for Zoe to take before her daily coffee from the canteen. I must be dreaming, this can't be right. An hour later they were still sitting at the table.
" Look I came here because I thought at least you would care since everyone else has shut me out but now even you can't speak to me or offer advice." She got up to go.
" Wait, stop, sorry but I can't believe you're actually here, it's been so long". Zoe snapped out of her silent thinking and decided to help.
" So how can I help" Zoe wanted to know why she was so messed up but knew that she wasn't ready to tell all.
" A place to stay would be more than enough" she said with a sheepish grin. There's something strange here, sure she looks different, it's been years but... Zoe wondered what was so strikingly different. Zoe walked her back through the ED and asked Lenny to tell Mr. Jordan that she had to go home early. Adam was searching for her though. Zoe pulled her into the cupboard.
" Are we hiding?" she giggled at the thought of Zoe hiding from anybody. After ten minuets Adam pulled open the door. He stood for a few seconds looking confused. They both burst out laughing.
" No way it can't be you...
TBC ? Depends on what you think of it. I know that was dry but it'll hopefully get more exciting (alot more exciting) . A mention in the next chapter for anyone who guesses who the girl is really easy but...