Authoress: Oookay, time for my first fanfic ever, kiddies... I have a major
stomachache today, so this will either suck, or make no sense... or be
boring... which would fall under sucking... whatever.
Disclaimer: I do not own Pokemon, nor do I want to. I'm just writing about
it, me and my sister's character are the only things I own.
Chapter one. The STUPID Forest.
Fire sighed. This could possibly be one of the most boring days she had ever lived through, as a Pokemon trainer. She had spent the whole day walking through this STUPID forest, with no battles or new Pokemon to show for it.
She looked over to her only companion on this little trek through the woods. She had just recently gotten her Cyndaquil, nicknamed Cinder, from Professor Elm, and the first thing the little devil did was pop out of its Poke ball and flame her to death. Not exactly the greatest start. Cinder had also refused to go back in her Poke ball, causing more trouble and burns on Fire's part.
Finding an overly large rock, Fire sat down to take a rest. The rock moved. Fire stilled, eyes growing to the size of saucers. 'STUPID STUPID STUPID! Look for Geodude when you sit down on a rock!' She mentally screamed as she hurled herself off of the used-to-be-sleeping Pokemon's... er... head.
The Geodude rolled to look at his 'attacker,' seeing a short, brown-haired blue-eyed girl in jeans, blue sneakers, and a green-blue tie-dye shirt with a panther on it. (Authoress: I really own that outfit.. I'm wearing it right now. Minus the shoes.) Totally and utterly furious at that... HUMAN for sitting on him, the Geodude decided to throw large rocks at her.
"OW! STUPID GEODUDE!" Fire screamed at the top of her lungs while being pelted with very heavy and very hard objects. "Cinder! Sic 'em! Attack! Do something!" Brilliant Pokemon trainer words.
Fortunately, Cinder didn't totally hate her trainer, and didn't like the idea of being stuck with a bruised and crabby 14-year-old, so she stepped in at that point and proceeded to use Ember on the rock-throwing-Pokemon. Not that that did much... so, then she decided to just beat on it. It worked... eventually.
Fire let out a sigh of relief. Cinder had decided to listen to her, for one of the first times. She stood up, and once Cinder had beaten the Geodude into a... rocky pulp, she got the idea to throw a Poke ball. She watched as the Pokemon went inside, then as the ball twitched and rolled around as the Geodude resisted capture. Finally, the ball emitted a soft ping and the Geodude was hers. Fire practically burst with joy. Her first Pokemon! Other than Cinder, that is. She let out a loud WOOP of joy. "WOOP!" She picked up the Poke ball and rubbed it against her cheek, saying over and over, "My very first Pokemon capture!"
Cinder sweatdropped. How embarrassing. The thing had hurled large heavy objects at her, and now she was hugging its Pokeball like it was her favorite teddy bear or something. Sometimes that girl just was weird... plain crazy, off her rocker, a hamburger short of a happy meal.
Fire ceased her cuddling of the Pokeball containing the rocky Pokemon, and put the ball on her belt. Now that she had gotten away from that incident alive, and gotten a Pokemon out of it, she was through her boredom and ready to continue the long walk through the forest, before dubbed 'STUPID.'
Fire almost jumped for joy as she reached the next town, Cherrygrove. There wasn't a Pokemon Gym here, so she just decided to heal Cinder and Boulder, Boulder being the name she chose for her new Geodude, and walk around after that. So, she headed to the Pokemon Center, where she gave Nurse Joy her 2 Pokemon, not bothering to ask Cinder to go in a ball.
When she got her Pokemon back, she headed outside to check the town out. Not much to see, it wasn't a very big town. However, there was a little bit of water going down to what looked like a bunch of trees with a small clearing in the middle. She decided to check that out. Fire made her way through the trees near the water, trying not to get lost on the way, which wasn't TOO hard. The clearing turned out to be a very peaceful spot, without much noise from the nearby town. The only noise that happened to make its way to the clearing was the sound of water lapping against the shore. Very peaceful indeed. So, she decided to sleep under the stars in the beautiful clearing, rather than stay in the town at a Pokemon center or something.
Fire rolled out her sleeping bag to one side of the clearing, and made a little fire in the middle of it. Rather, she got Cinder to light a few large sticks on fire. Then, she slid into her sleeping bag, and fell asleep almost instantly.
Is the chapter too short? Is it too long? Well, don't be too hard with your reviews, but don't refrain from flames altogether, although I don't know how many people actually decided to read this...
Fire sighed. This could possibly be one of the most boring days she had ever lived through, as a Pokemon trainer. She had spent the whole day walking through this STUPID forest, with no battles or new Pokemon to show for it.
She looked over to her only companion on this little trek through the woods. She had just recently gotten her Cyndaquil, nicknamed Cinder, from Professor Elm, and the first thing the little devil did was pop out of its Poke ball and flame her to death. Not exactly the greatest start. Cinder had also refused to go back in her Poke ball, causing more trouble and burns on Fire's part.
Finding an overly large rock, Fire sat down to take a rest. The rock moved. Fire stilled, eyes growing to the size of saucers. 'STUPID STUPID STUPID! Look for Geodude when you sit down on a rock!' She mentally screamed as she hurled herself off of the used-to-be-sleeping Pokemon's... er... head.
The Geodude rolled to look at his 'attacker,' seeing a short, brown-haired blue-eyed girl in jeans, blue sneakers, and a green-blue tie-dye shirt with a panther on it. (Authoress: I really own that outfit.. I'm wearing it right now. Minus the shoes.) Totally and utterly furious at that... HUMAN for sitting on him, the Geodude decided to throw large rocks at her.
"OW! STUPID GEODUDE!" Fire screamed at the top of her lungs while being pelted with very heavy and very hard objects. "Cinder! Sic 'em! Attack! Do something!" Brilliant Pokemon trainer words.
Fortunately, Cinder didn't totally hate her trainer, and didn't like the idea of being stuck with a bruised and crabby 14-year-old, so she stepped in at that point and proceeded to use Ember on the rock-throwing-Pokemon. Not that that did much... so, then she decided to just beat on it. It worked... eventually.
Fire let out a sigh of relief. Cinder had decided to listen to her, for one of the first times. She stood up, and once Cinder had beaten the Geodude into a... rocky pulp, she got the idea to throw a Poke ball. She watched as the Pokemon went inside, then as the ball twitched and rolled around as the Geodude resisted capture. Finally, the ball emitted a soft ping and the Geodude was hers. Fire practically burst with joy. Her first Pokemon! Other than Cinder, that is. She let out a loud WOOP of joy. "WOOP!" She picked up the Poke ball and rubbed it against her cheek, saying over and over, "My very first Pokemon capture!"
Cinder sweatdropped. How embarrassing. The thing had hurled large heavy objects at her, and now she was hugging its Pokeball like it was her favorite teddy bear or something. Sometimes that girl just was weird... plain crazy, off her rocker, a hamburger short of a happy meal.
Fire ceased her cuddling of the Pokeball containing the rocky Pokemon, and put the ball on her belt. Now that she had gotten away from that incident alive, and gotten a Pokemon out of it, she was through her boredom and ready to continue the long walk through the forest, before dubbed 'STUPID.'
Fire almost jumped for joy as she reached the next town, Cherrygrove. There wasn't a Pokemon Gym here, so she just decided to heal Cinder and Boulder, Boulder being the name she chose for her new Geodude, and walk around after that. So, she headed to the Pokemon Center, where she gave Nurse Joy her 2 Pokemon, not bothering to ask Cinder to go in a ball.
When she got her Pokemon back, she headed outside to check the town out. Not much to see, it wasn't a very big town. However, there was a little bit of water going down to what looked like a bunch of trees with a small clearing in the middle. She decided to check that out. Fire made her way through the trees near the water, trying not to get lost on the way, which wasn't TOO hard. The clearing turned out to be a very peaceful spot, without much noise from the nearby town. The only noise that happened to make its way to the clearing was the sound of water lapping against the shore. Very peaceful indeed. So, she decided to sleep under the stars in the beautiful clearing, rather than stay in the town at a Pokemon center or something.
Fire rolled out her sleeping bag to one side of the clearing, and made a little fire in the middle of it. Rather, she got Cinder to light a few large sticks on fire. Then, she slid into her sleeping bag, and fell asleep almost instantly.
Is the chapter too short? Is it too long? Well, don't be too hard with your reviews, but don't refrain from flames altogether, although I don't know how many people actually decided to read this...