Ok ok ok. Yes I realize that I haven't written in my lotr fic for a bit.
And state the fact that this one is finished- it's just plain tacky that i
can't update. Ok my cousin and I wrote this fic together so it has our
clashed personalities for if we really went into the movie.
This is almost like a parody for POTC, but then again it isn't. So...I'll let you guys decide what you think of it. Lot's of laughs. And of course anything that you recognize doesn't belong to me cuz Disney is too cool to be mine.
Chapter One...which has no title as I'm writing this, but I hope it get's one soon...
"Tina! Quit talking! It' hard enough driving around this place without you side seat driving!" Erica shouted at her cousin. They made quite a pair when it came to outings. Erica with her dark brown hair and Tina with her blonde. Then the cousin part came into play. No matter what they stuck together, despite the fact that Erica was always the one to get in trouble when something went wrong. Her parents seemed to get the idea that she should get in trouble since she was Tina's senior by a year.
"Well, If you weren't such a picky parker we'd be parked already, Erica," Tina said, rolling her eyes. Ah, yes... Her cousin the picky parker of Disney Land.
"I'm just following the other cars so I can park in the garage," Erica said, following her
cousin in the eye-rolling example. "Besides, " she said, "It's supposed to rain tonight and if I pay for parking then I'm gonna get my designated spot."
Tina sighed and sat back in her seat. "Fine, have it your way. I just want to hurry up and get to the park. I haven't been to Disney Land in years," She said, her blue eyes sparkling with excitement. True, she hadn't been there in years, but neither had Erica. So, it was all the same on their bickering.
"You are such a little kid!" Erica scoffed "I mean, come on, the only good ride there is the pirate one anyway." She paused for a moment. "Yeah, ok, so it isn't the most exciting ride in the park, but it's funny. And then all the stuff with the movie." She then started to daydream about her Orlandobloomedme fantasies. This of course nearly caused her to crash into the wall as she parked. The car just barely stopped an inch away from the concrete.
Tina grabbed her chest as they almost met the wall. She breathed heavily for a moment then turned an accusatory glare towards her cousin. "Stop thinking those nasty little thoughts of yours and pay attention! And so what if I act like a kid!"
Erica stepped out of the car and turned towards her. "I have these little things in my head that tell me where everything is. I've never been in a car crash and I never will be - as long as I'm driving," she said. A smirk grew across her lips as she shouldered her small red backpack and flicked her sunglasses over her eyes. "Don't be so uptight."
Tina frowned as she also stepped out of the car. "I am not uptight! I just don't feel like becoming one with the wall in a Disney Land parking lot," she said, slinging on her mini backpack as well. "So where to first?"
"The Madderhorn?" Erica suggested. "If we don't get on now the line will be too long later."
"Ok," Tina agreed as she made her way towards the elevator that would take them to the ground floor. Once in the elevator Erica pushed the buttons for the highest and lowest floors. She had a love for elevator surfing.
As they entered the park they noticed something, though. Despite the date the park was unusually barren of the usual tourists. Both, however, shrugged it off as good luck on their part. The less people in the park the less lengthy the lines would be.
Tina glanced around for a bathroom. "Ok. I gotta go before we go on any rides," she said quickly then bound off towards the set destination. Erica rolled her eyes muttering something about her own bladder being weak. She set her eyes on the 'Mad Hatter' shop and went inside. She came back out wearing a Maleficent Sorceress hat, and in her hand was a pair of mouse ears for Tina.
A few minutes later Tina emerged from the bathroom and jogged over to her cousin. Erica held the mouse ears out to her. Tina grabbed them and put them on excitedly. "Ah, I feel so much better sporting the latest fashion," she said, striking a few poses.
"Very nice, darling," Erica laughed then put on her best, serious, British accent. "Today we have Christine modeling the latest in Disney Land fashion. A black T-shirt, complimented by her ebony mouse ears, and finished off with navy blue shorts." She had to bite her lip to keep from laughing as Tina started strutting around in a circle.
"Do you think Mickey will go out with me yet?" she asked jokingly as they headed for the Madderhorn.
"No, Mickey wouldn't have any taste if he went out with you," Erica answered seriously. Tina faked a look that showed her heart had broken then laughed. "But I'm sure Goofy would marry you anytime." Erica added.
"Oh perfect!" Tina said very enthused. "We could have a double wedding cuz you'd marry the Mad Hatter!" she said as they got in line. Only four people were in front of them.
"Oh shut up." Erica grumbled. They were quickly seat on ride.
"So how fast does this go again?" Tina asked.
"Well, it's more jerky than fast," Erica answered as the cart jerked forward at an alarming rate.
"I noticed." Tina said dryly. The cart rushed through the mountain quickly and Erica could help but notice things were looking a bit more realistic now. The abominable snowman may have been a real person now. It looked real enough.
"That was.ok.but I think I'm going to have bruised sides.
"Oh, poor baby," Erica said mockingly. She looked around for the next ride. "How about the Haunted Mansion?"
"Sure. I love the different themes they use. Wonder what it'll be this time?" she said, following her cousin.
Ten hours of fun later..
.. they found themselves in line for the Pirates of the Caribbean ride.
"Ok, a ten minutes wait isn't that bad," Erica said, a smile tugging at the corners of her lips in the dark atmosphere. Yes, the only time to ride POTC was in the dark. No real reason, though.
"Hmmmm. I wonder if they would Captain Jack Sparrow and Will and the others into the ride now." Tina said as she stretched her arms over her head. Walking around Disney Land all day made you tired.
"Being as the ride was made nearly fifty years before the movie, I wouldn't count on it," Erica said as a pirate cast helped her into the front seat of a boat. The boat was empty except for another woman who looked to be nearly thirty.
"Hi," she said, "I'm Erica"
"I'm Caroline," the woman said, holding out her hand to shake Erica's. "Having fun here?"
"Oh hell yeah," Erica said leaning back. Tina leaned over the edge of the boat and flicked at the water in her childish excitement. Erica suddenly leaned forward to look at the alligator in the water. "Holy cow! Disney must have redone a lot to make this stuff look real!" She exclaimed. Tina looked at what her cousin was talking about and blinked.
"Come to think of it they must have done the whole park over," she said. Caroline nodded her head in agreement as the boat neared the town being raided. Erica looked down at the water and was surprised to see it looked real. Well, of course it looked real, but it looked deeper and.the waves looked real. Not the fake stuff done by a motor.
The boat came to a sudden halt. The girls looked up to see a man that definitely needed a facial and a trip to the dentist had stopped their boat. "Arg! Out of the boat wenches!" He growled, grabbing Erica's arm and yanking her from the boat and onto the land. He then gave the same treatment to Caroline and Tina.
"D-did we do something wrong?" Tina shuddered, thinking the man was ride personal.
"Even if we did they shouldn't be treating us like this!" Caroline growled, ripping her arm from his grip.
Erica on the other hand was staring at everything in a mixture of amazement and joy. This place looked so real. "My gosh. Talk about being interactive with the tourists!" She spun around looking at everything. "Wow, they even have real fires.. Is it safe to have real fires in an enclosed building?" Her eyes grew even larger.
On the other side of things. The man who pulled them from the boat gave them a leering, lustful look. "I'll be given yeh a head start so I'd be movin' if I were yeh," he said.
"Whatever," Erica said, turned on her heal, and went to explore some more. "This place doesn't look this big from the outside. Wonder how they managed?"
"However they did it, they did a great job!" Tina said excitedly as she followed her cousin, Caroline in tow. "Man he had me thinking he was a real pirate for two seconds there."
As they walked further into the village a man came flying out of a burning house, through the window. Ash and embers smoked around him.
"Wow!" Erica said, "They have real stunt men!"
"Way cool!" Tina said distractedly. She spotted a brawl going on and headed towards it. Caroline followed her, a little bit untrustingly with the environment though. To her left a child was crying helplessly and she fought the urge to run and pick him up.
"And children!" Erica's eyes widened in disbelief as a woman ran by and picked up the child. A man ran after the woman, waving his gun around crazily. Out of habit, every time he fired a shot she ducked her head. She froze when she heard Caroline gasp. She turned and rushed over to the other woman.
Erica caught Caroline before she fell. She wasn't moving. Her hands were clasped over her stomach; a red substance trickled through her fingers. Tina muffled a scream with her hand as she looked down at Caroline and felt for a pulse.
"Erica.she's.dead," She choked out. Erica dropped Caroline's body and covered her mouth.
"Oh my bob! Disney land is full of killers!" she said quickly. A bottle shattered near her head and caused both to jumped.
"I don't want to play anymore!" Tina screamed. "This is the type of thing I trick my younger cousins into thinking. It's not supposed to really happen!"
"The guy from Jurassic Park was right!" Erica screamed suddenly. She grabbed her cousin's shoulders and pulled them face-to-face. "The Pirates of the Caribbean are going to eat everyone!" (Can anyone tell me who said this? Tina.don't help them).
In the mean time, Tina had stopped screaming and was pointing to something behind Erica. "Eri.He.the...somet behind. Look out behind you!" The man standing behind Erica glared at Tina before he grabbed Erica and turned her to face him.
"Their now. You're a pretty little wench now aren't you?"
Erica grabbed the closest thing to her, the broken bottle, and smashed it in his face before she grabbed Tina's arm and ran down an alley. The pirate stumbled back a few steps before he regained his composure and started after them.
"Come on now Puppets. I won't hurt you.much," he added under his breath.
Erica shoved Tina behind a barrel and hid behind one across the alley, muttering a few choice words about how stupid she was. During their run to safety a man armed with a sword and hatchet came out of the black smith shop. He looked around and threw the hatchet into the back of the pirate that had been chasing them. Without a second thought of the pirate, he ran past and pulled the weapon from his back.
Tina came out from hiding and picked up a metal pole. Erica did the same, but grabbed a discarded bloody sword. It would work for now if she needed it. She looked up and then back to Tina.
"Come on!" she said, pulling her cousins into the black smith shop. Tina started talking frantically about how she didn't want to die. They both slammed the doors shut and looked around. Only a donkey. Tina took a few deep breaths to calm herself. She looked around the shop then abandoned the pipe she had for a sword hanging on the wall.
"Nifty." she murmured, holding it up. Erica was about to say something regarding the place they were in when a pirate, supposedly dead, crashed through the window and lay lifeless on the ground, his neck twisted around in a strange fashion. Erica of course did the common thing most girls would. She screamed and stumbled back, trying to grab something to keep her balance.
Tina walked over to her cousin and pulled her up sharply. "Come one before un-dead pirates start jumping through windows," she said pulled Erica towards the back entrance. A groan made her stop. The supposed dead pirate stood up and twisted his head around so it sat correctly on his neck.
"Pretty, pretty," he sneered, making his way towards them.
"Holy shit!" Tina screamed as they bolted out into the back alley. Not knowing where they were going they just kept guess until they came to a set of stairs.
"The jail!" Erica said. She ran down the steps first and tripped at the bottom over a dog. It yipped then ran away. She got up and slammed her hand on the ground, cursing her luck, with a now bruised elbow. Her hand landed on the keys, though.
"Now I'll have ye my sweets," the pirate laughed cruelly from the top of the stairs. Tina did the only thing she could think of. She threw her sword at him. It landed in his chest and pinned him to the door. He glared down at the sword. The thing was. He was blocking their only means of a good escape.
"Erica!" Tina cried "What are we gonna do!?"
Erica picked up the keys and ran to the cell closest to her. She jammed the keys into the lock and unlocked the door. She ran in, but before she could do anything else a jarring explosion knocked the keys from her hand and into the next cell. At the same time it closed the door to the cell she was already in.
"NO!" She screamed, running at the cell door. Tina blinked and looked at her cousin before she came up with something snappy to say.
"Oh! Sure save yourself and leave me here to die!" She said only half serious. The pirate pulled the sword from his chest and walked down the steps towards Tina. Erica's eye drew further open in horror and she said the first thing that came to mind.
"Say Parley! Tina! Parley!" She screeched through the bars.
"Ok ok ok," Tina said. " PARLEY!" she shouted at the top of her lungs. The pirate stopped his advance and turned to glare at Erica.
"Did ya have to tell her that?" He growled then threw Tina over his shoulder. "Yer comin' to see the captain."
"What?!" Tina stiffened. "I don't wan to see the captain! Let me go! Let me GO!" She said struggling the whole way up the stairs. "Thanks a lot Erica! Now I'm going to a whole shipload of pirates! I'm going to kill you!"
"TINA!" She screamed, shaking the bars as hard as she could. "NO!! Tina! NOOOO!!!" It didn't matter how hard she tried the bars and the pirate wouldn't give in as Tina was carried away. "NO!"
A chuckle came from behind the girl. "Well, looks like you're all alone now, huh, Miss?"
OK..That's it for now. What do you think? Please be a returning customer and click on the little review button below!
This is almost like a parody for POTC, but then again it isn't. So...I'll let you guys decide what you think of it. Lot's of laughs. And of course anything that you recognize doesn't belong to me cuz Disney is too cool to be mine.
Chapter One...which has no title as I'm writing this, but I hope it get's one soon...
"Tina! Quit talking! It' hard enough driving around this place without you side seat driving!" Erica shouted at her cousin. They made quite a pair when it came to outings. Erica with her dark brown hair and Tina with her blonde. Then the cousin part came into play. No matter what they stuck together, despite the fact that Erica was always the one to get in trouble when something went wrong. Her parents seemed to get the idea that she should get in trouble since she was Tina's senior by a year.
"Well, If you weren't such a picky parker we'd be parked already, Erica," Tina said, rolling her eyes. Ah, yes... Her cousin the picky parker of Disney Land.
"I'm just following the other cars so I can park in the garage," Erica said, following her
cousin in the eye-rolling example. "Besides, " she said, "It's supposed to rain tonight and if I pay for parking then I'm gonna get my designated spot."
Tina sighed and sat back in her seat. "Fine, have it your way. I just want to hurry up and get to the park. I haven't been to Disney Land in years," She said, her blue eyes sparkling with excitement. True, she hadn't been there in years, but neither had Erica. So, it was all the same on their bickering.
"You are such a little kid!" Erica scoffed "I mean, come on, the only good ride there is the pirate one anyway." She paused for a moment. "Yeah, ok, so it isn't the most exciting ride in the park, but it's funny. And then all the stuff with the movie." She then started to daydream about her Orlandobloomedme fantasies. This of course nearly caused her to crash into the wall as she parked. The car just barely stopped an inch away from the concrete.
Tina grabbed her chest as they almost met the wall. She breathed heavily for a moment then turned an accusatory glare towards her cousin. "Stop thinking those nasty little thoughts of yours and pay attention! And so what if I act like a kid!"
Erica stepped out of the car and turned towards her. "I have these little things in my head that tell me where everything is. I've never been in a car crash and I never will be - as long as I'm driving," she said. A smirk grew across her lips as she shouldered her small red backpack and flicked her sunglasses over her eyes. "Don't be so uptight."
Tina frowned as she also stepped out of the car. "I am not uptight! I just don't feel like becoming one with the wall in a Disney Land parking lot," she said, slinging on her mini backpack as well. "So where to first?"
"The Madderhorn?" Erica suggested. "If we don't get on now the line will be too long later."
"Ok," Tina agreed as she made her way towards the elevator that would take them to the ground floor. Once in the elevator Erica pushed the buttons for the highest and lowest floors. She had a love for elevator surfing.
As they entered the park they noticed something, though. Despite the date the park was unusually barren of the usual tourists. Both, however, shrugged it off as good luck on their part. The less people in the park the less lengthy the lines would be.
Tina glanced around for a bathroom. "Ok. I gotta go before we go on any rides," she said quickly then bound off towards the set destination. Erica rolled her eyes muttering something about her own bladder being weak. She set her eyes on the 'Mad Hatter' shop and went inside. She came back out wearing a Maleficent Sorceress hat, and in her hand was a pair of mouse ears for Tina.
A few minutes later Tina emerged from the bathroom and jogged over to her cousin. Erica held the mouse ears out to her. Tina grabbed them and put them on excitedly. "Ah, I feel so much better sporting the latest fashion," she said, striking a few poses.
"Very nice, darling," Erica laughed then put on her best, serious, British accent. "Today we have Christine modeling the latest in Disney Land fashion. A black T-shirt, complimented by her ebony mouse ears, and finished off with navy blue shorts." She had to bite her lip to keep from laughing as Tina started strutting around in a circle.
"Do you think Mickey will go out with me yet?" she asked jokingly as they headed for the Madderhorn.
"No, Mickey wouldn't have any taste if he went out with you," Erica answered seriously. Tina faked a look that showed her heart had broken then laughed. "But I'm sure Goofy would marry you anytime." Erica added.
"Oh perfect!" Tina said very enthused. "We could have a double wedding cuz you'd marry the Mad Hatter!" she said as they got in line. Only four people were in front of them.
"Oh shut up." Erica grumbled. They were quickly seat on ride.
"So how fast does this go again?" Tina asked.
"Well, it's more jerky than fast," Erica answered as the cart jerked forward at an alarming rate.
"I noticed." Tina said dryly. The cart rushed through the mountain quickly and Erica could help but notice things were looking a bit more realistic now. The abominable snowman may have been a real person now. It looked real enough.
"That was.ok.but I think I'm going to have bruised sides.
"Oh, poor baby," Erica said mockingly. She looked around for the next ride. "How about the Haunted Mansion?"
"Sure. I love the different themes they use. Wonder what it'll be this time?" she said, following her cousin.
Ten hours of fun later..
.. they found themselves in line for the Pirates of the Caribbean ride.
"Ok, a ten minutes wait isn't that bad," Erica said, a smile tugging at the corners of her lips in the dark atmosphere. Yes, the only time to ride POTC was in the dark. No real reason, though.
"Hmmmm. I wonder if they would Captain Jack Sparrow and Will and the others into the ride now." Tina said as she stretched her arms over her head. Walking around Disney Land all day made you tired.
"Being as the ride was made nearly fifty years before the movie, I wouldn't count on it," Erica said as a pirate cast helped her into the front seat of a boat. The boat was empty except for another woman who looked to be nearly thirty.
"Hi," she said, "I'm Erica"
"I'm Caroline," the woman said, holding out her hand to shake Erica's. "Having fun here?"
"Oh hell yeah," Erica said leaning back. Tina leaned over the edge of the boat and flicked at the water in her childish excitement. Erica suddenly leaned forward to look at the alligator in the water. "Holy cow! Disney must have redone a lot to make this stuff look real!" She exclaimed. Tina looked at what her cousin was talking about and blinked.
"Come to think of it they must have done the whole park over," she said. Caroline nodded her head in agreement as the boat neared the town being raided. Erica looked down at the water and was surprised to see it looked real. Well, of course it looked real, but it looked deeper and.the waves looked real. Not the fake stuff done by a motor.
The boat came to a sudden halt. The girls looked up to see a man that definitely needed a facial and a trip to the dentist had stopped their boat. "Arg! Out of the boat wenches!" He growled, grabbing Erica's arm and yanking her from the boat and onto the land. He then gave the same treatment to Caroline and Tina.
"D-did we do something wrong?" Tina shuddered, thinking the man was ride personal.
"Even if we did they shouldn't be treating us like this!" Caroline growled, ripping her arm from his grip.
Erica on the other hand was staring at everything in a mixture of amazement and joy. This place looked so real. "My gosh. Talk about being interactive with the tourists!" She spun around looking at everything. "Wow, they even have real fires.. Is it safe to have real fires in an enclosed building?" Her eyes grew even larger.
On the other side of things. The man who pulled them from the boat gave them a leering, lustful look. "I'll be given yeh a head start so I'd be movin' if I were yeh," he said.
"Whatever," Erica said, turned on her heal, and went to explore some more. "This place doesn't look this big from the outside. Wonder how they managed?"
"However they did it, they did a great job!" Tina said excitedly as she followed her cousin, Caroline in tow. "Man he had me thinking he was a real pirate for two seconds there."
As they walked further into the village a man came flying out of a burning house, through the window. Ash and embers smoked around him.
"Wow!" Erica said, "They have real stunt men!"
"Way cool!" Tina said distractedly. She spotted a brawl going on and headed towards it. Caroline followed her, a little bit untrustingly with the environment though. To her left a child was crying helplessly and she fought the urge to run and pick him up.
"And children!" Erica's eyes widened in disbelief as a woman ran by and picked up the child. A man ran after the woman, waving his gun around crazily. Out of habit, every time he fired a shot she ducked her head. She froze when she heard Caroline gasp. She turned and rushed over to the other woman.
Erica caught Caroline before she fell. She wasn't moving. Her hands were clasped over her stomach; a red substance trickled through her fingers. Tina muffled a scream with her hand as she looked down at Caroline and felt for a pulse.
"Erica.she's.dead," She choked out. Erica dropped Caroline's body and covered her mouth.
"Oh my bob! Disney land is full of killers!" she said quickly. A bottle shattered near her head and caused both to jumped.
"I don't want to play anymore!" Tina screamed. "This is the type of thing I trick my younger cousins into thinking. It's not supposed to really happen!"
"The guy from Jurassic Park was right!" Erica screamed suddenly. She grabbed her cousin's shoulders and pulled them face-to-face. "The Pirates of the Caribbean are going to eat everyone!" (Can anyone tell me who said this? Tina.don't help them).
In the mean time, Tina had stopped screaming and was pointing to something behind Erica. "Eri.He.the...somet behind. Look out behind you!" The man standing behind Erica glared at Tina before he grabbed Erica and turned her to face him.
"Their now. You're a pretty little wench now aren't you?"
Erica grabbed the closest thing to her, the broken bottle, and smashed it in his face before she grabbed Tina's arm and ran down an alley. The pirate stumbled back a few steps before he regained his composure and started after them.
"Come on now Puppets. I won't hurt you.much," he added under his breath.
Erica shoved Tina behind a barrel and hid behind one across the alley, muttering a few choice words about how stupid she was. During their run to safety a man armed with a sword and hatchet came out of the black smith shop. He looked around and threw the hatchet into the back of the pirate that had been chasing them. Without a second thought of the pirate, he ran past and pulled the weapon from his back.
Tina came out from hiding and picked up a metal pole. Erica did the same, but grabbed a discarded bloody sword. It would work for now if she needed it. She looked up and then back to Tina.
"Come on!" she said, pulling her cousins into the black smith shop. Tina started talking frantically about how she didn't want to die. They both slammed the doors shut and looked around. Only a donkey. Tina took a few deep breaths to calm herself. She looked around the shop then abandoned the pipe she had for a sword hanging on the wall.
"Nifty." she murmured, holding it up. Erica was about to say something regarding the place they were in when a pirate, supposedly dead, crashed through the window and lay lifeless on the ground, his neck twisted around in a strange fashion. Erica of course did the common thing most girls would. She screamed and stumbled back, trying to grab something to keep her balance.
Tina walked over to her cousin and pulled her up sharply. "Come one before un-dead pirates start jumping through windows," she said pulled Erica towards the back entrance. A groan made her stop. The supposed dead pirate stood up and twisted his head around so it sat correctly on his neck.
"Pretty, pretty," he sneered, making his way towards them.
"Holy shit!" Tina screamed as they bolted out into the back alley. Not knowing where they were going they just kept guess until they came to a set of stairs.
"The jail!" Erica said. She ran down the steps first and tripped at the bottom over a dog. It yipped then ran away. She got up and slammed her hand on the ground, cursing her luck, with a now bruised elbow. Her hand landed on the keys, though.
"Now I'll have ye my sweets," the pirate laughed cruelly from the top of the stairs. Tina did the only thing she could think of. She threw her sword at him. It landed in his chest and pinned him to the door. He glared down at the sword. The thing was. He was blocking their only means of a good escape.
"Erica!" Tina cried "What are we gonna do!?"
Erica picked up the keys and ran to the cell closest to her. She jammed the keys into the lock and unlocked the door. She ran in, but before she could do anything else a jarring explosion knocked the keys from her hand and into the next cell. At the same time it closed the door to the cell she was already in.
"NO!" She screamed, running at the cell door. Tina blinked and looked at her cousin before she came up with something snappy to say.
"Oh! Sure save yourself and leave me here to die!" She said only half serious. The pirate pulled the sword from his chest and walked down the steps towards Tina. Erica's eye drew further open in horror and she said the first thing that came to mind.
"Say Parley! Tina! Parley!" She screeched through the bars.
"Ok ok ok," Tina said. " PARLEY!" she shouted at the top of her lungs. The pirate stopped his advance and turned to glare at Erica.
"Did ya have to tell her that?" He growled then threw Tina over his shoulder. "Yer comin' to see the captain."
"What?!" Tina stiffened. "I don't wan to see the captain! Let me go! Let me GO!" She said struggling the whole way up the stairs. "Thanks a lot Erica! Now I'm going to a whole shipload of pirates! I'm going to kill you!"
"TINA!" She screamed, shaking the bars as hard as she could. "NO!! Tina! NOOOO!!!" It didn't matter how hard she tried the bars and the pirate wouldn't give in as Tina was carried away. "NO!"
A chuckle came from behind the girl. "Well, looks like you're all alone now, huh, Miss?"
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