This idea just came to me as I was listening to this song so I hope you like it : )

Song of inspiration for this: the finish line by train, obviously

Disclaimer: I do not own any lines or characters all rights go to the amazing Veronica Roth

I thought I knew it all

How to escape the pain that accompanied my past.

I've been through a high, said all my goodbyes, learned to run before I learned to crawl

I said goodbye to Abnegation, and traded my weakness for ferocity.

It's not worth fighting for, if one of us is sure

I am sure. Tris changed me, showed me how to live and to love.

And one of us is dying, trying to find love's door

But Tris does not love me back, at least not the way that I love her.

I have waited all my life to paint these cities red with thoughts I've always had here, stuck inside my head

The pain I felt as a child, the unbelonging in Dauntless, and mow the anguish of never knowing if Tris truly loves me.

It's not worth waiting for, if one of us is sure

I am sure. I love Tris. And she knows that.

And one of us is dying, trying to find love's door

She doesn't not love me, but I can feel that she is too immersed in her grief and guilt to trust me that much, to trust me enough to look past all of that. But that's what she did for me

When we learn how to fly, we forget how to walk

Maybe I cannot fly, but I would carry Tris if the weight of life was too much for her

When we learn how to sing, don't want to hear each other talk

I would never grow tired of hearing Tris talk, as long as she is saying,' I love you'

Here we are at the finish line

But I can still hope for that perfection, even if it is unattainable

And you, you really thought you knew, everything to do, with holding on to me

Yes, Tris and I are still together, but sometimes I wonder if she's only holding on to me because I am simply her only ties to her past, a happier, easier past

But holing on this time is making me slip right through your hands

And that is not the reason I want her to stay with me

And you don't understand, trying to find love yourself

She doesn't understand. I am the only one who will always love her, no matter what.

When you find who you are, and forget about me

Will she forget about me? Will she be too concentrated on what she has done, and what she has lost?

Here we are at the finish line

Just then my cell door opens. I am escorted to a room, and I see Tris.

Dead.

This is my ending, then. My finish line.

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