Love by Another Name"- A Pearl Harbor Story

Hey girls! This is my new story. It's a Pearl Harbor story. It's sort of similar to the movie but not really. I added one person here. Elaine is her name. Josh is of course Danny. So, here goes.

Chapter 1

"Danny!" yelled Rafe to his friend on the other side of the street. Turning around, smiling, Danny said, "Rafe! Hey! Where you going?!" "I'm going to the train station. Don't you remember, my sister, Elaine, is coming back today?" Said Rafe as he came up to Danny. "Really? Wow! The last time I saw Elaine, was when we were kids." Danny said, picturing Elaine. He wondered how she had changed. "Well, I'll tell you what, Danny boy, come on down with me and you two will meet each other again." Said Rafe. "Good idea, Rafe. Let's go." Said Danny. Danny and Rafe ran to the train station. Arriving there and taking a breath, Danny said, "Well, where is she?" "I don't know, Danny. Her train had to come by now." Said Rafe. Suddenly, "Rafe! Rafe!" screams a voice far off. Turning around Rafe, saw her. He saw Elaine. He ran to her and Danny followed him. "Oh, Elaine! You look so beautiful! How you have changed!" said Rafe taking his sister into his arms and hugging her. "Oh thank you Rafe and look at you. You're so handsome." She said smiling. Danny meanwhile just stared at her. 'She really is beautiful.' He thought. Elaine was beautiful indeed. She had light black hair, dreamy baby blue eyes, a beautiful body, and the softest skin. Looking up to see that someone was standing behind Rafe, Elaine pulled away from him and said, "Well, Rafe, aren't you going to introduce me to your friend over here?" "Oh, I don't think there needs to be an introduction. That's Danny over there." Said Rafe. "Danny? Danny Walker?" asked Elaine surprised. "Yup." Rafe said looking at Danny who looked at him and came up. "Elaine, wow, is it really you?" asked Danny smiling at her. "Yes, it is and look at you. You've.you've changed so much, Danny." Said Elaine. Smiling at her, Danny said, "So, have you." Rafe realized that the two needed to be alone and left to get Elaine's baggage. "So, how is everything, Danny? You better catch me up on a lot." She said smiling. "Well, everything's great. There's not much I can catch you up on, Elaine. I mean what can I say, I'm a workaholic. I have not personal life. No, girl, no nothing. I work in the military. Rafe is the only best buddy I've got." Said Danny. "Oh, I see. Well, I'm sure you'll find someone." Said Elaine. "Maybe. Well, enough about me. Let's talk about you. How have you been?" he asked. "Oh great, great." Said Elaine. The two continued their conversation, until they stopped at a special place.

Well, that's the end of the first, chapter! Please, tell me what you think, y'all!