It's eh at best. I had a better set up for the dialog, but no clue how to write up to it.
Continue if you want, just send a link so I can read it.
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It had been several minutes since Danny and Sam left the Manson's front porch for the senior prom but Danny was still shaking from the short, tense small talk/warning from Sam's father.
"He's going to kill me."
"What?"
"The restraining order was just the beginning . One of these days he's going to decide, once and for all, that you need to 'stay with those of your station' or something, and he'll hire someone to sneak in and kill me in my sleep."
"Danny that's ridiculous." Sam replied, more than a little unsure.
"You're right; that's more your mother's style."