Please review, I love all of them. This is a bit dark, I guess.
I sat and took shallow breaths, my face in my hands
I had let the monster consume me
I let it take over and thrust into her
I could barely feel my heartbeat
How could I let it happen?
The bedsprings creak as she gets to her knees
She crawls to my end of the bed
I feel her warm delicious mouth on my neck
Coaxing me, coaxing it
What is she doing?!? She knows I'm dangerous like this
I call her name to get her to stop
But her mouth keeps sucking and her teeth keep biting
I need to stop her, WE both know that you don't wanna do that
No, I won't let you touch her, Oh, but you already have
It has a point I've already failed
I feel my body get up and turn to her
No, I can't let this happen
I weakly fight against it taking over
Her back hit the mattress
Light turned to gray
You both are in my hands now
Gray turns to black……no
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