Hey :) So this is my first ever fan fiction and I've not fully written it all yet. I am pretty sure by the title and the first chapter you will be able to tell that it's planned around the film, 'The Breakfast Club'. I truly love the plot and the result of that movie and I thought what it would be like if I changed the characters – to none other than the glorious Cullen's – and change a little more too, still sticking to the moral of it. So here's a little insight into it, it's a tad short, but if you like it I am willing to post more. So here goes…
Oh, and! Some reviews would be really awesome, just let me know what you think so I know where I'm heading :)
The Breakfast Club
Chapter 1
Saturday, March 24th, 2010. Forks High School. Forks, Washington. 3:30pm.
Dear Mr. Greene,
We accept the fact that we had to give up a whole Saturday in detention for whatever it was we did wrong. What we did was wrong, but we think your crazy telling us to write an essay about who we think we are. What do you care? You see us as you want to see us, in the simplest terms and the most convenient definitions. You see us as a brain, an athlete, a basket case, a princess and a criminal. Correct? That's how we saw each other at 7am this morning. We were brainwashed…
"I can't believe you can't get me out of this." She stated horrified.
Rosalie Hale sat in her fathers BMW dreading a day she thought she never deserved. She was the prom queen, the popular one, the pretty one. Her long blonde hair hung gracefully down to the small of her back. She flicked her hair and continued trying eagerly to prove her point, "I mean its ridiculous I have to be here on a Saturday. I don't believe I should put up with this, isn't there anything you can do daddy?" she fluttered her eyelashes hoping the effect of her dads answer would change to her benefit.
"I will make it up to you, I promise, but ditching class to go shopping? What am I going to do with you? You know fine well you do enough of that at the weekend. Have a good day." He handed her lunch over and signaled her to get out of the car.
Rosalie dragged herself out of the car, still with adding a ladylike manor to her movements.
Meanwhile in the car behind, Edward Masen sat absentmindedly looking out of the window staring at the sidewalk. He was trying to ignore his mother as much as possible, and he was becoming very good at it.
Edward was your average geek. Bronze tangles of hair hung over his eyes which were shielded by a pair of glasses. On his skinny frame hung a pair of black skinny jeans held up with braces. His look was completed with a Coldplay t-shirt and pin badges – Star Wars and Spiderman.
"Now is this the first or the last time you do this?" His mother said with a hint of frustration in her voice.
She was truly worried about her son. With his actions and not participating in anything but school work – most mothers would be delighted at that. But she missed when her son watched cartoons on TV, even though he was way too old. She missed when he would do anything so that she would take him to the local comic book store, she felt he was slowly slipping away.
"Last" he answered quietly.
"Well get in there quick and use the time to your advantage, make some friends."
"Mom, your not supposed to socialize, you just have to sit there doing nothing but study." He pointed to his bag suggestively.
His backpack was old, which was suffering a broken zip because the large number of textbooks he was carrying.
"Well Mr you find out a way to study!" Her phone rang effectively ending their conversation. "I will see you tonight" she stated as she then answered her phone, gently pushed him out of the car and drove off.
At the other end of the parking lot, a boy named Jasper Whitlock and his father were sitting talking about tomorrow's basketball game.
Jasper was the teams best and favorite player. He was loved by all the girls in the school – mostly for his trademark accent and curly hair. His family were extremely proud at his success in the game, but he wanted nothing more to forget about basketball all together and focus on his studies. His dad thought differently.
"Okay, well you better get in there." His dad stated with a slight huff, "I mean son, I fooled around when I was at school, who doesn't? Except one thing, you got caught sport. How would you feel if this made you miss out on a game?" he asked with a shocked expression.
"Devastated" he grumbled and removed him self swiftly from the car before the conversation could go any further.
Emmett McCarty was known well to be the school bully, drug addict and troublemaker. He wouldn't let anyone stand in his way, he was huge. His 6.4 frame was highly intimidating to all the other boys. No one dared to intimidate him - they all simply knew better. And if they stood up to him? it would only end in a fight and another Saturday robbed from him..
Deep down, he didn't truly mind. Any excuse to get out of the place he was saddened to call home.
As he walked towards the school entrance with a swagger, a car came from the left and skidded to a stop whilst Emmett strolled past the front of the car with a smirk. He lightly padded the hood of the car and laughed.
I am God. He thought.
"Asshole," Alice Brandon, the girl sitting in the backseat of her mother's car stated. She climbed out and leaned down to the front window to say goodbye when suddenly the car drove away quickly and left Alice standing there confused. She thought they were getting along well for a change. Alice simply but painfully accepted that her mother had and never will change. All she wanted was to be loved.
She shuffled her way toward the school when she tripped due to her untied lace on her worn Converse shoes.
"Way to go Alice," she murmured to herself, "clumsy fucker."
At 7am, the bell rang out loudly giving all five students a fright. One by one without saying a word to each other, they all entered the building dreading what the day was to bring..
So there you have it, review and let me know if you want more or simply what you think :)
Katarina x
