The way thay talk is written like this:
Bella
Edward
Emmet
Rosalie
Alice
Carlisle
Jasper
Charlie and any other cast member
Bella's POV
So Edward and Bella just started to go out he wanted to take her somewhere special because she got ungrounded from her dad so he went to a real pricy place…but Bella didn't know were they where going so she didn't complain till they got there!
Edward why are you taking here…this place is way to pricy and I don't want you to use any money on me!
That's sweet Bella but I've been wanting to take you out before you got grounded…so now we have something to celebrate this for!
HEY EDWARD, Rosalie screamed from behind us with Emmet right beside her.
Hey you guys what are you doing here?
Dude you know how Rosalie likes romantic places especially the ones with beaches.
This place was so nice it was by the beach in Jacksonville, Florida. Edward wanted to meet my mom so we are staying here for the summer even though he doesn't go out in the day he always makes up something so my mom and I can have time to talk and because he's a vampire who doesn't want anyone to know! But while we were here we didn't know the whole family was here on vacation as well.
So Edward how is Bella's mom, is she easier than Charlie?
She is fair and is really hard on Bella when she does something wrong… the only reason were out tonight is because she just got ungrounded.
Bad girl Huh Bella? *giggle*
Edward and I were trying to go out and I yelled at for saying something inappropriate to him!
OMG tell me I want to hear!
Ok lets go for a walk and I will tell you all about it.
As Rosalie and I started to walk we heard Alice and Jasper yelling at us along with Esme and Carlisle. they came to join the party I guess.
Hey you guys!
Hey Alice, Jasper, Esme, and Carlisle!
All of them said hey together how weird, I thought!
Hey Alice Bella and I were going to go for a walk on the beach wanna come with?
Ok what are we going to talk about. Never mind I have a Guess.
I knew she knew what we were doing she keeps a close eye on me…because well…Edward tells her to!
Ok then lets go
We started to walk along and then we sat near a fire cause I was getting cold. We sat for awhile in silent then Rosalie broke the silence.
Ok so what was your mom talking to Edward about?
Ok I will tell you as long as you don't laugh or interrupt me in the story!
They both agreed so I started.
Ok well we have been here for a week and my mom had are rooms ready. But Edward has never slept since you know he became a vampire so usually he is with me…well my mom look at his room and the sheets didn't look touch neither did the bed so she started to get worried that he was sleeping in my room…so while I was walking the beach and Edward and my mom were in the house she kept talking to him about……
What?
Tell us come on!
SEX…I didn't know she was till I walked in the door and I heard her talk…Make sure you at least have condoms I don't want a pregnant daughter…and she was like I don't want you guys to have Sex till you are married but I cant slop you!
Hey Bella are you A virgin?
Yea why?
Just wonder!
Why were you wondering?
Because I wanted Edward to be your first!
Yea totally… I hope you guys will get married one day like us and join the Family!
Edward wont even let me think about becoming one of you he wants me to live.
How is that going to work when your like 50 he will still be 17 and your almost 18!
He said we will talk about when I graduate high school!
Oh well I think we should get back I don't like what I see the boys talking about.
Good idea….hey what are they talking about?
SO WHAT ARE THE BOYS TALKING ABOUT…TO BE CONTINUED….
PLZ REVIEW TELL ME WHAT YOU THING I KNOW THE FIRST CHAPTER ISNT VERY GOOD BUT IT WILL GET BETTER!