The By-Product

Chapter One:The Beginning

Hi, I'm Olinas and I am of course a noob so please don't flame. I have just started writing and I was wondering if you guys can give me some advice on how to be a better writer on yeah I hope you enjoy. Oh and this story is kind of based on HL2's storyline but I'm to morph it and change it so it can fit my story.

Disclamer:I DO NOT OWN HALF-LIFE (Althoght I wish I did)

PS:Thanks exeHL for the advice because as I read your review I thought to myself 'He's right...' so yeah thanks again

On Combine Homeworld

"Hmm...it seems that you Gordon Freeman has destroyed one of our citadels"

"Yes, Mr. Freeman had done 'many' impossible things...but it seems that he is slipping out of my control...slowly but surely"

"What will you do about this...problem..."

"We should use him..."

"You dont mean..."

"Yes...I do"

Back on Earth

As a dropship flew above White Forest it only had one occupant and that occupant was Assassin Alpha Zero/Eight or AO8 for short

"Your mission is to kill Gordon Freeman and anyone and I mean anyone who gets in your way." AO8 said outloud

'Heh...repeating my mission objective sure doesn't help it sound easier...' AO8 thought

The dropship started to slow down as it neared its destination all the while AO8 was gathering as much ammo he could carry of his Pulse Rifle and found two combine balls he then took a quick glace at his HUD and saw that his health and energy were in perfect condition. AO8 felt a lurch as the dropship stoped abruptly.

"Well...here we go..."

The dropship container's door then opened up and AO8 jumped out of it he then looked around to get a mental map of his surrounding he then spoted a cave entrance about a fourth of a klick away he then walked to it. When he got to the entrance he thought it was just a normal dark, murky cave so he walked in and turned on his suits flashlight and looked around but he didn't see anything out of the ordinary he continued to walk forward into the cave but, he didn't noticed that in the shadows was a antlion.

So..hows that for a first chapter I hope its good enough to be understood and enjoy so just give me some feedback so I can know if you like it...oh and again no flames...lets be nice :) oh and I will try to make my chapter long then this one and I will try to update as soon as possible