My first fanfiction...constructive cristicism is appreciated!Also if you see grammatical erros please tell me XD
Snow
Warm hands,sweet kisses and protective blonde strands that brushed his soft eyes that were full of love,high cheekbones and soft lips were caressing hers that whispered words of love and admiration .He was her sun,her moon, her showed her how to love and to appreciate though he wasn't near her now,in her mind,body and soul he was alomost alive.
Flashback
The wind was softly blowing his hair and the light of the moon gave him an ethereal was as if his apperance was approaching as if not to make him dissapear;she stopped in front of him and looked directly into his eyes, searching for hand rested at the nape of her neck while the other one was sensually touching her lips ,daring her to away her hand and bowing slightly his head,looking into her eyes,his lips almost touching hers he asked:"To whom do you belong to?" his almost inaudible question made her smile"To you".The greedy person in him was not satisfied he needed to know ,so he asked another one "What am I for you ?"her reply came fast,as if she had not even thought about it "You are my hot sun,cool moon,my star,my love.I exist only for you as you exist only for me"A rare smile appeared on his face."Then let me make you mine ,let me have all of you and I shall be yours" knowing it will the only time he would speak in such manner to her ,she replied "under one condition".A brow slightly arching and blue eyes curios yet patient for her to continue, she put a hand on his cheek and whispered "Promise me that no matter what form we shall have ,be that of best friends,enemies even relatives we shall love each other."By the time she was finished a single tear was gliding down her her tear he took her into his arms and kissed words she heard "I promise.".
End of flashback
Looking at the window she remembered one of their conversations.
Flashback
They were sitting on the couch watching how it snowed his head on her shoulder he told her "You are like the fire".Suprise etched on her face "Am I?" "Yes, you way you make me burn,the way you make me feel,your temper; oh yes your temper now calm but if you are not careful you can get burnt".Turning around and seeing his amused face yet serious eyes she replied "The if I am the fire you are the ,soft yet hard,cold towards others but warm to me ,protective ,like a blanket snow."Smiling ,he kissed her.
End of flashback
Rising from the bed that had so many memoires of to the window,she opened it and felt the cold winter wind,calming her,making her remember."where are you my love?" one hand rested on her belly "i am not the only one waiting for you".Tears were streaming on her face "come back ..."
was the soft whisper carried by the wind.