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Hana POV
I've always been abnormal. People call me "Freak", or just "Girl" when they're feeling nice. Nobody ever seemed to like Dursley's most of 's why I turned to the internet. I found the internet on one of Dudley's old broken computers. It only had a crack in the screen, but he threw it away anyway. It was still usable, so I turned it on one day, and met him. Well, I didn't really "meet" him, I discovered him. I follow his blog, one Mr. Sherlock Holmes. He's really cool and really smart. He thinks like me! Figuring out what people are like and what they have done recently just by observing. After a large amount of thought and consideration, I finally e-mailed him.
Dear Mr. Holmes,
Hello, My name is Hana. /My friend told me about/ no not that… /I stumbled upon/ no… I discovered your blog /on the internet/ Of course he knows it's on the internet! and I'm wondering as to how to build a mind palace. Good, that looks nice. Though I'm thinking of a different type of mind palace, more of a mind tree. A big pine. With larger branches for more important thoughts at the bottom, and smaller branches at the top for unimportant subjects that can be easily snapped off. Sort of, anyway... Do you know how I could go about this?
/Sincerely/ Too formal.
From,
Hana
There. Perfect. At least, I hope so.
*click*
There. Sent.
And now, we wait.
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