Well this is my new fic but I don't know if I´m going to continue it, to
continue it only depends on your reviews telling me: "Yes it is ok" or just
only "continue please" but if you not said please then I´m going to
continue cause I want to continue.
As you already know I´m a person that love violence and suffering stuff with a lot of angst and full drama, please don't bother me with romance, I just don't like it.
NoW with the story.
Deep in Blue
Chapter one
When you are little you always ask at least one of your parents What would happen if I just have a twin brother? Sometimes they answer you Oh I´ll be very happy to having you both, or maybe Well I think everything would be as normal as now, Maybe they also answer you that it would be bad an impossible to having the both of you. Well sometimes you just wish to have a twin brother and others not. like me.
I now it is very selfish to just want to be one and to be the center of all your parents attentions but. when you have a twin brother everything is slipt and that includes the love of your parents. I´m not a bad boy it is just that this situation get worse when you are the big brother, you are responsable of your twin, your twin is slow with everything and your parents doesn´t love you.
Yes our parents does not care for us and that is the reason that our mother left us with our father. Our father is not that kind of man that is responsible and work for his family no, no. He is more like a work- colic man, he prefers to be all the day in his work doing who knows what, and returns home just for sleep and kick us in a way to get of all his frustration. Does this have to affect me? Well yes, of course it have. You´ll see in home I´m in charge of everything but my twin always mess all. Sometimes I get hit by my father cause he is my responsability but other times I really would prefer to be kick instead of him. Sometimes I think that my family would be a family without Kouji. How do I get to this conclusion? Well it is very easy. Once my brother, Kouji, and I have to clean all the house and I broke the photo frame of my mother, when our father came home and notice my little accident began to shout like a devil and in less than a second he was in the top of my brother hitting him without mercy. Of course I tell him that I did what I did but he didn´t belive me.
Other prove that I have that he doesn´t like my brother is that Kouji always get hit for everything like if world polution was his fault. My father have him in a close looking state, he didn´t left him live. And I think that that was the reason why Kouji is so nervous when he is around our father and for that he always get beaten. But the reason of all this I don't know but something keeps telling me that Kouji knows the reason but he didn´t want to tell me, I don't know if it is for he is shame or maybe he didn´t know.
But something keeps bothering me. This all live problems where not like this, this suddenly began to happen. But what it never changes was that Kouji always gets yell. Now don't be fool and think that I doesn´t like him. We are twins and we are bond in some way. I always try to help him and it is not only me, we have a friend in common and his name is Takuya. Well he is more my friend cause I know him first. Takuya says that Kouji is just a passive boy, but I think that he is more a jerk cause he didn´t make everyone to respect him and that includes our father. It seams that my father sucks all his soul cause when he is around he is like waiting something happen.
By now it is late but not as late as other times I think that my father is getting out of the car, he will pass the principal door in any minute then. I could feel that Kouji is begining to shake but not for cold, it was of fear. - "Hey don't worry. I´ll go to feed him ok?" - he just nod to me but continues shaking, how does his father do to scare Kouji in that way?.
"Hi father, so how was the work today?" - I think he is in good mood. I began to set the table for him and serve what we have cook earlier with Kouji.
"It was as always, so where is your brother? Is he wake up? Why did he didn´t came here to welcome me?"
"He was not feeling alright so I tell him to stay in bed" - wow he is in good mood cause he doesn´t ask for Kouji´s state, never.
"Tell him then to come here, I need to talk with both of you"
"Can I know the problem?"
"You´ll know"
This was not good, something is not right, he could smell it. Kouichi stand up and went to wake up his brother. - "Kouji wake up, Father wants to talk to us" - This words made Kouji shiver in his bed and very slowly he stand up. - "Hurry up, he is waiting for us, and don't worry it seams that he is in good mood"
When they arrive to the kitchen their father ask them to take a sit so thye did what he ask. - "What are we waiting father" - Kouichi ask cause his father keep as quiet as ever. - "we are waiting for your mother, she just want to talk to us".
Suddenly someone knock the door and Kouji go to open the door, of course all of they know that it was Keiko the twins mother. They could smell her perfume even if she was out of the house. She enter but with a man and both of them sit down in the couch. - "So Heero we see each other again, Hi sons" - how could she enter into the house with that smiling face after she left them. - "You maybe are asking what do I want her? Well I came here cause your father never went to the judge to fix our problems. So I bring here Mr. Togashi that is my lawyer and new houseband too to help me to fix this terrible mistake."
"Hi Mr. Minamoto, nice to meet you"
" Not as I" - the Twins knows by now that their father was becoming anger every moment that pass.
"Please don't be childish Heero. Well this is a simple visit you know, you just have to sign this papers and then I´ll go with my son and you could stay with the other one. So please Kouichi began packing darling we have to go to our new house".
"Hey! Wait up there, why do I Have to STAY with the SLOW one! I want to pick KOUICHI with ME!.
"Well sorry darling, you´ll see the judge have give me the pleasure, well it was more like a order that I have to keep Kouichi with me thing that I´m glad of course and you darling have to keep Kouji. So what you only have to do is to sign and then everything is alright and I go out of your sight and everyone would live happily ever after"
Mr Minamoto was thinking very hard now, he realy doesn´t want to sign that form but he have to and so he did. The boys didn´t have time to react cause in one moment they were normal and the other one they where getting separate by their own parents. Kouichi always have dream of not having all this problems and it was true that he once ask to be the only son but by now he doesn´t want to leave his brother with his father, he knows that they could not live more than two minutes alone... He was going to grab his brother´s hand when other hand grab him and began to pull him toward the door, out of this house of laments.
"Wait! At least let me said good bye to my brother" - He could take advantage of this opportunity and try to escape of this house, he was very proud of himself for just being so love by both of his parents but he could not stop to feel bad cause his brother, no one wants to stay with him, this realy was bad. But looking more carefuly he could see that Kouji wasn´t moving like he was conform with this situation.
"Nice try. But if you want you could say good bye to him here where I could watch you." - mothers they always know everything about you he thought. He doesn´t have the oportunity to hug Kouji for one more time cause his mother hug him and pull him to the car. No one except them move. He wants to cry but he he knows that his mother and this man are not going to do anything to fix the situation for him.
He was now leaving Kouji, leaving him with all the problems ans what was worse leaving him with the person he fear most: his father.
TBC...
So what do you think???? Do I continue with this story or do I have to try with other plot? Please any suggestions for a new fic are welcome just one thing: Please I don't like any tipe of romantic plot. I just can´t. Please ask me violence, fantasy anything but not romance.
Well I think this is all at least for now. SEE YOU LATER THEN!!!!!!
As you already know I´m a person that love violence and suffering stuff with a lot of angst and full drama, please don't bother me with romance, I just don't like it.
NoW with the story.
Deep in Blue
Chapter one
When you are little you always ask at least one of your parents What would happen if I just have a twin brother? Sometimes they answer you Oh I´ll be very happy to having you both, or maybe Well I think everything would be as normal as now, Maybe they also answer you that it would be bad an impossible to having the both of you. Well sometimes you just wish to have a twin brother and others not. like me.
I now it is very selfish to just want to be one and to be the center of all your parents attentions but. when you have a twin brother everything is slipt and that includes the love of your parents. I´m not a bad boy it is just that this situation get worse when you are the big brother, you are responsable of your twin, your twin is slow with everything and your parents doesn´t love you.
Yes our parents does not care for us and that is the reason that our mother left us with our father. Our father is not that kind of man that is responsible and work for his family no, no. He is more like a work- colic man, he prefers to be all the day in his work doing who knows what, and returns home just for sleep and kick us in a way to get of all his frustration. Does this have to affect me? Well yes, of course it have. You´ll see in home I´m in charge of everything but my twin always mess all. Sometimes I get hit by my father cause he is my responsability but other times I really would prefer to be kick instead of him. Sometimes I think that my family would be a family without Kouji. How do I get to this conclusion? Well it is very easy. Once my brother, Kouji, and I have to clean all the house and I broke the photo frame of my mother, when our father came home and notice my little accident began to shout like a devil and in less than a second he was in the top of my brother hitting him without mercy. Of course I tell him that I did what I did but he didn´t belive me.
Other prove that I have that he doesn´t like my brother is that Kouji always get hit for everything like if world polution was his fault. My father have him in a close looking state, he didn´t left him live. And I think that that was the reason why Kouji is so nervous when he is around our father and for that he always get beaten. But the reason of all this I don't know but something keeps telling me that Kouji knows the reason but he didn´t want to tell me, I don't know if it is for he is shame or maybe he didn´t know.
But something keeps bothering me. This all live problems where not like this, this suddenly began to happen. But what it never changes was that Kouji always gets yell. Now don't be fool and think that I doesn´t like him. We are twins and we are bond in some way. I always try to help him and it is not only me, we have a friend in common and his name is Takuya. Well he is more my friend cause I know him first. Takuya says that Kouji is just a passive boy, but I think that he is more a jerk cause he didn´t make everyone to respect him and that includes our father. It seams that my father sucks all his soul cause when he is around he is like waiting something happen.
By now it is late but not as late as other times I think that my father is getting out of the car, he will pass the principal door in any minute then. I could feel that Kouji is begining to shake but not for cold, it was of fear. - "Hey don't worry. I´ll go to feed him ok?" - he just nod to me but continues shaking, how does his father do to scare Kouji in that way?.
"Hi father, so how was the work today?" - I think he is in good mood. I began to set the table for him and serve what we have cook earlier with Kouji.
"It was as always, so where is your brother? Is he wake up? Why did he didn´t came here to welcome me?"
"He was not feeling alright so I tell him to stay in bed" - wow he is in good mood cause he doesn´t ask for Kouji´s state, never.
"Tell him then to come here, I need to talk with both of you"
"Can I know the problem?"
"You´ll know"
This was not good, something is not right, he could smell it. Kouichi stand up and went to wake up his brother. - "Kouji wake up, Father wants to talk to us" - This words made Kouji shiver in his bed and very slowly he stand up. - "Hurry up, he is waiting for us, and don't worry it seams that he is in good mood"
When they arrive to the kitchen their father ask them to take a sit so thye did what he ask. - "What are we waiting father" - Kouichi ask cause his father keep as quiet as ever. - "we are waiting for your mother, she just want to talk to us".
Suddenly someone knock the door and Kouji go to open the door, of course all of they know that it was Keiko the twins mother. They could smell her perfume even if she was out of the house. She enter but with a man and both of them sit down in the couch. - "So Heero we see each other again, Hi sons" - how could she enter into the house with that smiling face after she left them. - "You maybe are asking what do I want her? Well I came here cause your father never went to the judge to fix our problems. So I bring here Mr. Togashi that is my lawyer and new houseband too to help me to fix this terrible mistake."
"Hi Mr. Minamoto, nice to meet you"
" Not as I" - the Twins knows by now that their father was becoming anger every moment that pass.
"Please don't be childish Heero. Well this is a simple visit you know, you just have to sign this papers and then I´ll go with my son and you could stay with the other one. So please Kouichi began packing darling we have to go to our new house".
"Hey! Wait up there, why do I Have to STAY with the SLOW one! I want to pick KOUICHI with ME!.
"Well sorry darling, you´ll see the judge have give me the pleasure, well it was more like a order that I have to keep Kouichi with me thing that I´m glad of course and you darling have to keep Kouji. So what you only have to do is to sign and then everything is alright and I go out of your sight and everyone would live happily ever after"
Mr Minamoto was thinking very hard now, he realy doesn´t want to sign that form but he have to and so he did. The boys didn´t have time to react cause in one moment they were normal and the other one they where getting separate by their own parents. Kouichi always have dream of not having all this problems and it was true that he once ask to be the only son but by now he doesn´t want to leave his brother with his father, he knows that they could not live more than two minutes alone... He was going to grab his brother´s hand when other hand grab him and began to pull him toward the door, out of this house of laments.
"Wait! At least let me said good bye to my brother" - He could take advantage of this opportunity and try to escape of this house, he was very proud of himself for just being so love by both of his parents but he could not stop to feel bad cause his brother, no one wants to stay with him, this realy was bad. But looking more carefuly he could see that Kouji wasn´t moving like he was conform with this situation.
"Nice try. But if you want you could say good bye to him here where I could watch you." - mothers they always know everything about you he thought. He doesn´t have the oportunity to hug Kouji for one more time cause his mother hug him and pull him to the car. No one except them move. He wants to cry but he he knows that his mother and this man are not going to do anything to fix the situation for him.
He was now leaving Kouji, leaving him with all the problems ans what was worse leaving him with the person he fear most: his father.
TBC...
So what do you think???? Do I continue with this story or do I have to try with other plot? Please any suggestions for a new fic are welcome just one thing: Please I don't like any tipe of romantic plot. I just can´t. Please ask me violence, fantasy anything but not romance.
Well I think this is all at least for now. SEE YOU LATER THEN!!!!!!