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Found poem, New Moon, By Stephenie Meyer

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He took a deep breath and stared, unseeingly, at the ground for a long moment. His mouth twisted the tiniest bit. When he finally looked up, his eyes were different, harder- like the liquid gold had frozen solid.

Found poem, New Moon, By Stephenie Meyer

He took a deep breath and stared,

Unseeingly,

At the ground

For a long moment.

His mouth twisted

The tiniest bit.

When he finally looked up,

His eyes were different,

Harder-

Like liquid

Gold had frozen solid.

Found poem, New Moon, By Stephenie Meyer

Revised

He breathed deep and watched,

Seeing,

Through the clouds

For the longest second.

His eyes twitched

For the briefest moment.

When it finally started to rain,

It looked different,

Sad-

Like tears

The clouds were crying.