Again I am going to say will be more better than my first one."Any Beta?' is my question. I wrote this on my SB and then uploaded you can see there is improvement in my writing am disappointed myself after reading what i uploaded, all I am going to say.
There is always some type of enemies that may lose, some don't. There is one person who never fails in her goal, she hates losing. She was created by genus before carnage kabuto, he was weak compared to her, she is ruthless and has hatred for humanity, that increased after genos and saitama kills mosquito girl, who was her younger sister. After genus left the House of evolution, she took the leadership of the group there was no one to join her goals.
House of evolution
She was seen outside the building watching the sunset deep in thought 'So the 'hero's' defeated another one, huh. I am losing my control over this group after genus left, fool thinking he can control us and because of him my sister died' she silently thought, There is nothing she can do except attack the hero's. She known's where they all are now.
[She looks like this she has red hair with fox ears and 10 tails , her body is pale like juubi madara. She created her siblings[1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9. and herself] she is strongest of the siblings, her powers will be shown after the story].
She decided to attack the hero's and test there strength and then she will threaten the is not afraid of death nor her siblings, she quickly alerted her siblings to take the charge of the group while she is away then she opened a portal to the main building of the hero's
Hero Association building
They were in usual meeting after defeating another monster, like usual, suddenly everyone's attention was in mysterious portal which opened in the middle of meeting facing them. A women walked through the portal and looked towards them with her cold evil red eyes without a flinch" hmph, these are the so called heroes?'She said, others are in alert and ready to attack in movements notice. she looked towards each and everyone of them and laughed after checking their power. after controlling her laughter she reminded them of certain women "Do you remember my sister?" Nobody answered her, because they don't know her then she revealed "Mosquito girl" she the looked towards genos and saitama in utter rage "YOU TWO,YOU TWO KILLED HER,MY SISTER". she blasted the building away in her rageful state her eyes became glowing red orb with swirls and nine tomes, losing her control of her rage, she attacked them without thinking clearly, she targeted tatsumaki
She avoided most the attack from others, she appeared near tatsumaki and grabbed her neck and tightened her hold preventing from her from breathing and then smashing her into the floor. she then quickly jumped away from genos blast and flashed towards Bang and kicked him away and blasted him, she started to assault him with blasts, she was stopped by saitama's punch and Atomic samurai's slash, she quickly controlled her rage and quickly opened a portal and escaped from there before they captured her.
The hero's was left wondering who she was and why she attacked them. They known's only genus has the answer for the question
With Naruko
She appeared in her dimension, she was hurt very badly due to saitama's punch and slash of atomic samurai, her body has large slash which was bleeding. But she has high pain tolerance . she reviewed their abilities ,speed, power, intelligence and she was not disappointed. she targeted tatsumaki because of her power and rank of S, which was no joke, she is S in normal form, in her full power she is SSS rank
'i will avenge you, sister' she thought, then contacted her sibling yugito two tails and 7 tails fuu 'Yugito, Fuu, you can start the plan 2 now I gauged their abilities'. now her second part of plan has began she need time to recover from the injury she got. she smiled cruelly if her goal is successful, she will be the darkness of the world she will show the human the hope being crushed by her. 'Demon goddess, nice title 'she thought.
There is nothing they can do now, oh, how wrong she was
In the city
The city was in utter chaos, many lower rank heroes is been defeated by demons, monsters, normal heroes are being crushed by the army. S,A and B class heroes is fighting the generals of the army[siblings of naruko].the civilians were evacuated by hero' were crushed by the powers of generals.
2-Tails yugito[Hellcat] and 7-Tails fuu [rampaging beetle] was watching the chaos in amusement, They have the same hatred of their older sister naruko 10-tails [white demoness]
Well, I am going to need a lot of time to complete a good story . is it good or bad, review it. I can take anything you throw towards me. Story is mix of naruto and one punch man, so expect some villains from naruto world coming to the story as allies of heros and naruko's. character's bio will be given on each chapter ending. The bio will be of current and future
Name: Naruko
Age:30/35
Personality: Cold
Title: Demon Goddess, White Demoness
Powers: Mind control, Flames, many other elements
Rank: SSS[Planetary level threat]
That's all now folks, so see ya
-Madara signing out-