This is my first ever fan fic. 1st time i've written in more then 5 years. This is a little taste of an idea I have. What do you think? Constructive criticism is appreciated

Alice had faced fear before. Running from a jabberwocky, standing up the queen of hearts and her worst fear… heights. Who would have thought that her greatest fear would be a 5 X 1 inch piece of plastic?

It had been a year since Hatter had arrived at her condo. Alice's mother Carol had accepted the truth about Wonderland surprisingly well. "I have never known you to lie Alice, not even as a child." She had said after a two hour conversation. The knowledge that Robert had not 'left' her seemed to be a huge comfort.

Six months later Alice and Hatter moved in together in a basement apartment below the dojo.

Now Alice sat in her bathroom staring at her biggest fear. "Oh No" she moaned as the plus sign formed on that dreaded stick. How was she going to tell Hatter?