Toothache
A shrill, echoing roar came from one of the rooms in Castle Bleck. Dimentio, who fell out of bed upon hearing the dreadful noise, entered the room that has believed to hold the creature of the Underwhere. Upon entering, he saw a black/green dragon/fox creature with her back arched, a pained expression on her face. With a sigh, Dimentio asked in a bored yet slightly amused tone, "What's wrong, Kyuubi? Not feeling well?" Red eyes shot open, the owner speaking in a slight pained voice, "Shut up, Purple Skirt…"
Before implied jester could reply, a little green girl barged into the room, and she looked quite angry. "KYUUBI! YOU WOKE ME UP FROM THE BEST DREAM EVER!" Kyuubi let out another agonized groan, both from pain and the unwanted minions in her room, then answered, "I can't help it! Mimi, you can go back to dreaming about your stupid fantasy lifeguards once I get rid of this pain!" Mimi huffed, and then walked away. Once again, before Dimentio could insult the dragon/fox, a muscular man with reddish-brown beard lumbered in the room.
"'Ey, wat be this yelling 'bout?" Dimentio, now quite annoyed, replied, "I don't know, but, Kyuubi is in as much pain as-" "SHUT UP DIMENTIO!" Kyuubi yelled, which was, unfortunately, in the jester's ear (does Dimentio even have an ear?). Then, another unwanted minion of Count Bleck's came into the room. "Hey! You better shut up, or else I'll unleash Brobot on you!" A man in black and green, who was identified as Mr. L, yelled. Kyuubi rolled her eyes, "Oh yes, a robot is so scary to me..."
"What's going on here asked Count Bleck?" Everyone who was currently in the room turned to see Count Bleck and Nastasia standing in the doorway.
Dimentio spoke up, "Well, everyone was woken up by this beast's roaring, and she appears to be in pain." Upon hearing the word beast, the dragon(1) let loose a hiss of small, black flames. "Um, well, what seems to be the problem?" Nastasia cautiously asked, hoping not to enrage Kyuubi further.
"…I have a toothache…" Was the quiet reply of the dragon. Silence was all that could be heard for a few moments, then obnoxiously loud laughter.
Well, there's the first chapter of my first story. I don't think its very...amusing.
Kyuubi: It sucked!
Not helping my mood ya know...
Kyuubi: Exactly! This way, you can't continue!
...I spit on your words. Anyway, criticism is welcomed, but only if it's about how to improve!
Kyuubi: Hmph, you definitely need to take a writing class...
SHUT UP! Please review!