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Twilight hung over the stinking swap as though it didn't dare let complete dark take over. Warmish black water filled with an explosion of plant growth surrounded Naruto, Jiraiya, Tsunade, and Shizune. Trees with trunks that narrowed as they left the water dotted the landscape. The surface was broken occasionally by ripples of predator or desperately fleeing prey. The team was making their way though the swamp on the way back to Konoha so Tsunade could take her position as the Hokage.
Un-noticed by them, Sound Ninja were watching and waiting for the perfect opportunity to strike. Naruto was eyeing a nearby clump of trees when he spotted something that reflected the dimming light. His curiosity aroused, he spoke quietly "Hey, I see some- thing in the swamp. I'm going to get closer to see what it is."
Hearing this, everyone else turned around to argue with his decision. After all, they didn't have a lot of time to go haring off after every shiny flit that caught their eye. Tsunade spoke for all of them as he said "Stupid! Come back!", but Naruto was already wading off towards the trees, already out of sight. As they prepared to forge ahead without waiting on Naruto, the Sound Ninja silently attacked the splintered group. Quickly, they pulled weapons, their only hope that they could finish them off before the lone Naruto was attacked [they all presumed that it was an enemy he saw]. A nearly soundless battle commenced, the team working as quietly as they could in hopes that Naruto would not hear and respond and in so doing give away his lonely position.
Meanwhile, Naruto made his way though the dimly lit swamp towards the glinting light. Raucous calls from unseen birds split the air. Glancing over his shoulder, he realized that he had come farther than he thought. He could no longer see nor hear the rest of his group. Still, he resolutely forged forward- certain that the mysterious light was important. As he drew closer to the light, he saw that it was reflecting from a silvery object that was stuck in the branches of one of the trees. Excitement flooded him as he saw that it was a scroll about the size of the toad summoning contract. He cautiously made his way to it, all the while watching his step- wary of traps. Reaching the tree, he paused, then reached out and freed the scroll from it's wooden prison. When nothing untoward happened, he took a deep breath and unrolled it.
Reading carefully, he realized that it was a summoning contract with the crocodiles. He further noted that it also had a bloodline for the first person to sign it. With a sudden tightening of his stomach, his eyes flew to the bottom of the scroll. Joyous relief flooded him as he realized that there was no signature on the scroll. Barely pausing, he quickly drew a kunai and cut his finger to sign his name in blood, as was customary. As he lifted his bloody finger from the scroll, it began to glow with an eerie light. His body involuntarily jerked back as an immense pain shot though his body, starting from his heart, working it's way through his muscles, and then his skin as well. Shaking from the on-going pain, Naruto looked at his body. His skin began to thicken and turn green and scaly like that of a croc. Then, he let out a cry of agony as his nose began to elongate into a small snout and his eyes shifted slightly to each side. The searing pain in his body was not abating, and Naruto realized that his muscle mass was visibly increasing. The cry of the birds became nearly unbearable as his hearing and sense of smell joined with the overall pain in his muscles to begin to overload his brain. He brought his shaking arm up into his field of vision and noted that his nails had turned into thick razor-sharp claws. Baring his teeth, he felt them grow long and sharp [if you want a better idea of what he looked like see Killer Croc Batman Arkham Asylum]. His trembling increased and he fell to his knees. His orange shirt ripped, then tore away as did his pants leg. He grew to 3 inches larger then Lee when finally the pain grew too much to bear any more and he fell unconscious into the black water of the swamp.
The sounds of his transformation had not gone unnoticed and a Sound Ninja broke away moved in for the kill. He approached the spot where Naruto had gone under, his weapon at the ready. Raising his sword, he prepared to stab down into the water when a large croc erupted from the water. Huge jaws snapped around his body and, with a flip of it's massive body, it dragged him under. Nearby, another croc gently opened his mouth and took Naruto's unresisting body into careful jaws. Soon, a rippling water trail was the only sign of the crocs passage deeper into the swamp.
As Jiraiya, Tsunade, and Shizune finished off the Sound Ninja, they hurried off towards the last place they had seen Naruto. Jiraiya's sharp eyes spotted an orange rag and they raced towards it. When they saw the ripped shirt, they came to an abrupt halt, horror on their faces. Glancing uneasily at each other, none wanted to be the first to say what appeared obvious- that Naruto had fallen prey to a swamp predator. With a shaking finger, Jiraiya pointed out a pool of blood nearby. "There is so much blood" he thought. Then his trembling voice broke the moment. "Minato, if you can hear me, I am sorry that I could not protect your son." Tears filled their eyes as Tsunade and Shizune said silent prayers for him and cursed Sound with all their hearts.
Some distance away, Naruto was slowly gaining consciousness. The croc had gently laid him on a protected bank and he was surrounded by other crocodiles- all watching for danger. His brow knit while he remembered all that had happened to him. Looking at his green, scaled body, he knew that no one will believe his current massive form was Naruto. Sighing, he thought "This is a new start for me, at least."
Raising himself on knobby elbows, he looked at his surroundings and realized that he could not go back to Konoha now. Even if he could convince his friends of his identity, there was no place for him there. Sitting up, he stretched his limbs and shook out his thankfully pain-free muscles. Rising purposefully, he performed the summing jutsu. Since he was expecting a toad, he was quite surprised to see a very large croc standing before him once the mist cleared. Even more surprising was the dark black vest the croc wore. Shaking his head at the strange direction his life had so suddenly taken, he inclined his head in greeting and prepared to meet his destiny.
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