A/N: Ok, so I read this story and I loved it, until the end when Julian died, so I've decided to write this.
Hope this is ok, tell me if you think there are any problems. :)
I laid back, I was at a beach with my friends sitting in the shade, it wasn't that I didn't want to be in the sun all day, it's just that I couldn't because I wasn't used to its burning beams although my skin didn't burn easily… or tan, I just stayed pale either way, like a vampire, but I loved the sun, I had spent so long in a world of ice and shadows with no light, so looking around at this world, it was beautiful. My name is Pandora Blake, which I hate, I was named Pandora because my mum loved it because it was a Greek name from Greek mythology, she was kind of obsessed with it I guess, and even though years have passed and she's dead now, I've always somehow kept a link to that name but I always change the second name, or people would realise that I'm not like everyone else. My friends at the moment just call me Andie, because I prefer that name.
I looked up at the clear sky, I loved the colour, it reminded me of someone who's important to me, Julian. His eyes have always been beautiful, he has always been beautiful, because he's a shadow man, they're beautiful and perfect until they get really old and then they turn as ugly as they're souls are, but Julian is different, he is the youngest and kindest of the shadow men. He even loves a girl called Jenny who is so full of light that the other shadow men want to kill her. I know this sounds weird and hardily any would believe this, but I'm a daughter of a shadow man and a human, the only one. All the shadow men other than my father and Julian wanted to kill me because I was an abomination, but my father is one of the elders, he's in the group of the leaders, so he convinced them to let me live. My father wasn't a kind shadow man, he stole my mother from earth and made her his wife and they made me, he loved my mum, she loved him too, but then she hated him when she found out his hobbies. She tried to run away with me and they killed her, my father wouldn't let them play with her body or trap her, that was the last thing he gave her.
I was brought up by my father and Julian, Julian was the youngest so naturally I liked him a lot, he always looked about 18 years old, but I went from being born to that age, they thought I would grow old and die but then when I stopped aging they realised that wasn't the case. Julian was like a brother but I loved him like he loved Jenny, at one time he loved me back, but he pushed the feelings away because he looked after me and then he saw Jenny and it was love at first sight, he used to tell me stories about what she would do and how her eyes are so beautiful. I envied her at first, but now I realise that I shouldn't stop him loving her out of jealousy.
I decided I want to go in the sea again, so I ran into the water and dived into my friend Kyle, as soon as he heard me running he turned around, but it was too late because as soon as he turned I had reached him and had grabbed him and now we were under the water, and that's when I felt it, I felt this small and muted pain, like when someone's name is carved out of the… Then I knew what had happened and I knew who it was, they had killed Julian. I couldn't move, I was stuck in the water and I needed to get to the shadow world to get Julian back. Kyle dragged me out of the water, he was shaking me and then suddenly I could move again. "Julian" I whispered. I felt eyes on me and I looked towards the water, and there stood a figure, with hair whiter than snow and a black duster on. Julian was standing there, he didn't have his body anymore. He was saying goodbye to me for the final time, but I wouldn't let it be the last time. I looked at Kyle "I'm sorry Ky, I've got to go, something's come up, I'll text you when it's sorted and I'm free" I kiss his cheek like I always do and I ran to my car. I needed to find Jenny and her friends, and soon. I started the engine of my car and looked back at the beach, I was going to miss this place, hopefully it won't take too long to get him back.
A/N: Ok, so I hope that was a good chapter, should I continue or is it a bad idea?
Reviews would be nice.
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Peace!
Raven-Thea. xx