Prologue
Luigi never felt this much pain in his life. It was pitch black all around him. He tried to move, but something was holding him back. Some kind of invisible force. His whole body felt like it was on fire. Burning the flesh right off his bones. His back felt like a million knives were stabbing him again and again. Over and Over. Every time he tried to muster a scream nothing happened. When he tried to cry his eyes just became dry. He tried to remember what was going on or were he was, but the immense amount of pain was keeping him from thinking. He could faintly here the sound of his voice. He wasn't talking. Who was talking? He felt another jolt of pain. He screamed silently again, hoping someone would hear his cries. Hoping someone would stop the pain. He herd the muttering agin. His voice again. Then more pain come. A knife stabbing everywhere now. His arms, legs, and face. He herd more voices. These voices sounded like his friends. Mario, Peach, Bowser! Please help me! Please stop the pain. No one could hear him.
After what seemed like forever the pain finally stopped. Luigi opened his crystal blue eyes. They were met with the soft gentle gaze of his brother. Mario embraced his twin with a hug.
"Brother. I'm sorry. I can't believe I hurt you. I didn't mean to it was the only way to save the worlds!" Luigi's red brother sobbed.
After a few seconds Luigi released were he was. He was lying on the floor of Castle Bleck. Then he released he was bleeding. Almost every inch of his body had a stream of thick dark red blood pouring out. The pain came back. So much burning. Mario was sill hugging him. Sobbing. Luigi began feeling sleepy. His head felt light.
"Mar...io?" Luigi began in a shaky voice, "I'm feeling sleepy, I don't know what happened."
"No! Luigi! Don't go to sleep! We will get you back to Flipside! You... your going to be ok..." Mario sobbed.
Luigi lay on the floor in the pitch black castle. The pile of blood kept getting bigger. In Mario's Heart he knew they wasn't going to make it back. There wasn't no time. The blood was still pouring. Luigi's eyes were getting heaver and heaver.
"Bro. Why is there still so much pain." Luigi said, His eyes filling with tears. Tears of blood.
"We did it bro! The worlds are saved! We're all going to be ok. Your going to be ok..." Mario's Voice was shaking and his hands were trembling.
Luigi was feeling even more tired. He couldn't think straight. He didn't know what was happening and why it was. It was the blood loss.
"I did this to you! I'm sorry! I did it! Please don't leave me bro! I can't loose you!"
Mario's blue eyes met Luigi's. Both full of tears. Bloody tears. The last thing Luigi saw before it went black was someone rushing over to him with the return pipe. The last thing he heard was...
"Your going to make it! You have to!"
Everything became black.
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