Perfect Incomplete

Introduction :

Hello everyone! This will be my first fanfiction. It is from Naruto (The Younger Version).

However, the story won't be about Naruto himself, it will be about Uchiha Obito. He's a real character in the Naruto series.

In this story, Young Kakashi,Obito,Rin and their leader Midori (Originally Minato) will be joined to the old Naruto genins and will be considered as a team. The story will revolve around Obito's team, team 12.

The current Hokage in the story is the Fifth Hokage (Tsunade)

So consider everything is the same except that Obito's team is added, and that instead of Kakashi being the leader of team 7 (Naruto, Sai , Sakura), he will be as a young jounin in Obito's team. And team seven's leader will be Jiraiya instead. Sasuke already left the village and Sai took his place. (A Young Sai, of course)

Well, that's about it. I hope you enjoy the story as I will do my best to ensure entertainment.

Expect one chapter every week. However, these days I might make about five chapters since I have a really long holiday.

Chapter One – A Loyal Uchiha

Midori ran as fast as he could, his eyes were scouting the area. Followed by his team, who were completely exhausted, Midori felt that the mission will fail. They had to rescue a V.I.P from some gangs from the Lands of the Stone, which was a place filled with corrupted groups of ninjas. The weather was cold in that night devoid of light, the region had so many trees and paths, enemies could be anywhere.

A kunai passed between Obito and Rin, almost hitting them, they both quickly stopped, and soon everyone did. Midori told them that he will place traps around this area while the three of them distract the hostile ninjas. So the three of them headed out to where the Kunai came from, Kakashi said, "Obito! Keep checking your left side! That VIP could be anywhere!"

Soon, they reached a place that lead to a huge cave. As the three young ninjas entered that cave, they started to look for hints. However suddenly, a person appeared behind Rin and said, "Looking for something?" Kakashi quickly dashed towards that ninja but it was too late. Rin was now held hostage, that man held her with a kunai. Kakashi stopped, knowing that any step closer would result in Rin's death. The man asked them, "What do you know about the VIP Takashi Teryuo?" Obito answered with a clear voice, "Why do you care?" The man looked at Obito, and then smiled, "Because if you don't tell me... the girl's dead! Now you both will go find that man, and you will bring him here. Until then, this girl stays with me!" Both of the young ninjas looked at each other, they had to do it... for Rin.

Kakashi said, "Just tell me what do you want from Takashi?" the main said, "He knows too valuable information, I was hired to kill him! Now you have exactly thirty minutes, if Takashi is not inside this cave alive, then I swear I'll kill this girl and it will be both of you who dies next!"

Obito said, "Calm down! We'll do this... Right, Kakashi?" Kakashi nodded.

Both boys headed out, on their way they Obito said, "Kakashi! I have a plan!" As the boy explained his plain Kakashi smiled. Then they went and found Midori, they told him about the situation and he agreed to their plan.

Ten minutes later, both boys come in the cave, with a man infront of them. The evil ninja said, "That was fast! You two are good." He let Rin go and as the so-called Takashi came closer to the evil man, the evil man said, "Takashi Teryuo! It's about time you die!" He then swung his axe only to hear a "Puff" as the so-called VIP disappeared. Then instantly a lightning strike hit the evil ninja from behind. It was no one other than the so-called VIP, Takashi Teryuo... or shall I say, Midori. Their plan was to act as if Midori was the VIP, and it worked. Soon everything was fine, except for the VIP, which was supposed to meet the team at the Bridge of the Land of Stone, which was not that far away.

The team hurried quickly and rushed through the forest, and finally found the VIP... tied in a tree guarded by four ninjas. (A group called "Kara") One of the ninjas said, "We expected you... Konoha ninjas. Let's end this quickly" The four ninjas had swords and were heavily armored. As they charged, one of the Kara spit mud from his mouth towards Midori's team. They easily dodged it. Obito responded with his fire ball that was headed towards one Kara member, but he easily dodged it by moving his sword and controlling the wind. Kara continued to charge, Midori said, "Rin, stay behind me and support me! Obito and Kakashi, go against that wind guy... I'll tae care of the rest!" Midori charged and used his Earth Style jutsu to form wood that surrounded three Kata members, him, and Rin.

Kakashi and Obito started to run towards the wind user with the sword, but he easily made them fly by waving his sword. However Kakashi went from the back and waited for Obito to attack. Obito his Fire Ball Jutsu, the other ninja said, "Heh, don't you realize you just can't hit me like that? No matter how big your fireball is, I can move it away easily." And so he did, he moved the fireball, but only to have his sword taken away extremely quickly by Kakashi from behind. Soon he was finished off since he had no other jutsu. By the time they were done, Midori was done.

They all cheered and went to untie the VIP. However, a much,much closer ninja was there. He was one of the three ninjas Midori thought he killed. He looked seriously injured, and was ready to kill the VIP in his last moments of death. He had a very long sword, and it was pointing towards the VIP. Obito, being the first one to notice, ran as quickly as possible. However, it was too late, the sword already was raised, and it was now on it's way to turn their mission to failure. However, Obito did not stop, he jumped as high and spread out his hands to try and push back the sword that threatened the VIP's life. Surprisingly, Obito made it. Obito saved the VIP by pushing the sword back with his bare hands. Their mission was a success. However, one thing caused Obito to scream in huge pain... His hands were cut, both of them.

The team rushed towards Obito, as Rin quickly used her healing jutsus to try and keep Obito alive. Kakashi and Midori quickly killed the ninja that cut Obito's hands.

Both Obito's hands were cut from the elbow, he was severely injured. The VIP started in silence, shocked by how precious his life was to others.
Rin was attempting to heal Obito. In the end all she could do was keep him alive temporarily while they rushed and took him to the Hidden Leaf's hospital. Obito was screaming in pain throughout their journey, but in the end they made it to the Leaf.

They took him quickly into the emergency room, and they brought one of the experts to take care of him.
The expert said, "He is in a critical condition! I need you all to go out right now, I'll take care of this!" They went and waited outside. Minutes passed like hours, hours like days.

The next day, Kakashi quickly went to the hospital to check on Obito. When he entered the room, he found Obito awake, he looked fine.

Obito said, "Hey... Kakashi." Kakashi quickly said, "Obito! How are you feeling?" Obito answered, "I'm good."
Kakashi asked, " Obito... what you did, was more than loyal," Obito smiled, but then his smile stopped when Kakashi continued, "However, it was unnecessary."

Obito was shocked, he asked, "What? What do you mean" Kakashi responded quickly, "Obito! You are a very talented ninja. You are an Uchiha, your life as a ninja should not be wasted on a mission like this."

Obito smiled and said, "My life as a ninja was not wasted. Not because I lost my arms will I stop being a ninja. I will stay a ninja even if I lose my arms, legs and sight. As a ninja, I die for my village, and until this happens, I'll always be a ninja no matter what. This life of mine has no better end than the end of a ninja in a battlefield. There is no more glory in dying that way. My life won't stop because I lost my arms. I'd protect the village even if I only could use my legs! A ninja, Kakashi, never stops being one. An injury is a badge of honor and loyalty that will be with you throughout your life, and a badge is not something that would make you quit. Therefore, I will never quit, Kakashi."

Kakashi stared at Obito with tremendous disbelief and shock. Soon someone came at the door and told Kakashi to go out as he will continue his medical treatment with Obito.

A week passed, and Obito finally got outside the hospital. His closest friends, Shikamaru, Naruto, and Kakashi greeted him happily. Soon, Obito went to Midori and told him about his desire to stay as a ninja, Obito said "Midori sensei! I have something I want to tell you!" Midori asked, "Mhm?"

Obito then said, "Sensei! I want to stay as a ninja!" Midori looked at Obito, he stared at him for a moment then said, "What? That's crazy." Obito responded, "It's not!I can still fight! I'm too young to be resting in the house doing nothing! I will not accept being a total waste. The only thing that will satisfy me is a death that is actually honorable! Not a silly injury like this!" Midori then said, "Listen, Obito. I understand your desire and loyalty. However you should not overdo it. You have been injured. This is the life of a shinobi. You go to the battlefield, get a permanent injury and never fight again."

Obito angrily said, "Sensei! Do not consider this a permanent injury! What a true permanent injury to me is to be sitting there doing nothing while people are crying for help in wars! I told you, nothing will satisfy me more than dying for this village!" Midori then looked at Obito and thought for a moment, then said, "I will ask you a question, and the decision in the end will be yours. Obito, people with no arms can't live a normal life. People help them, because those who don't have arms can't do major things in life. They can't lift things, they can't hold onto things. How do you expect to be a ninja, fight all these battles and complete these missions and live a normal life this way? Obito, you are incomplete." Obito said, "Sensei! You taught us that the will is more important than anything! Arms are not everything, I can use my eyes to scout areas, I can use my brain to think, and I'll use my legs to fight all the battles! And my will is the thing that will keep my going and never give up!" Then Midori looked deeply into Obito's eyes, and saw how serious Obito was. He was not kidding. Moments later Kakashi and Rin came and greeted them both, then Rin asked Midori, "Sensei! It's time to train now!" Midori looked at her, then at Obito, "Kakashi and Rin... You two have no training the next four weeks. I'll be training Obito instead." Obito smiled and thanked his master. Midori then told Obito, "Be ready tomorrow, Obito, you will recieve some special training."

"Yes, sir!" Obito happily said.

Author's Note :

Well that's about it. I hope you enjoy it. I'll release the next chapter tomorrow. Tell me what you think, it's my first fanfiction so feedback would be really helpful. (Positive or negative) :D

Thank you for reading, and tune in again :D!

Later :D