blood drips from the little girls arms and legs . as she tries to maintain her
balance and her mind. she walks out of the house and right into the pouring rain .
Drip
Drip
Was all she could here and the screams of her mother crying out in pain.
the little girl stops turns to look at the house and falls to the ground ,as
if she had been struck down by god himself. knowing nothing else to
do she cries out not knowing if she will live or die.
the little girl then cradles her arms and falls out completely.
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"C'mon hirumi"
I'm coming mommy .
the little girl runs for her mom.
wow it's so big can we go there some day: the little girl said with a big smile on her face.
One day Hirumi one day.................
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BEEP ,BEEP
Hirumi !
Hirumi wake up!
ugh!! the young woman woke up with a loud scream.
bump, bump
Hirumi Miazaki open this door now or I'll kick it down you here me.
ugh.. miuki why do insist on wakening me up so early . she was tired and cranky from the night before ,staying up and watching movies all night will do that to you .Hirumi never really slept at night since that day when her whole life changed in a blink of an eye . Miuki was always there for her even at the craziest times.
are you packed and ready to go Hirumi
Hirumi was never was never really good at stuff like that not like Mew who was a genius at almost every thing she did ...well except sports and puzzles .the girls where going to a beautiful spa located just on the out side of the city . they say magical things happen there and hirumi only wanted to go just to see if the rumors were true or not .either way she needed a vacation from school .
was already on her third year of college and really longed for one since forever .[ so Miuki how long is this bus ride there anyway ." well i say about six ho-
six hours! what am i gonna do for six hours .this was very frustrating for her. Miuki just smiled and laughed . Your hopeless . she said .
so Miuki
yeah
this spa
what about it
is it really enchanted like everyone say's it is
maybe.. who am i to say for sure
but what about all the rumors and the pictures and an-
and nothing !
............
Miuki took a deep breath .
look we won't really know anything until we get there to see for our self ok
yeah i guess your right.
if anything were not here for that we are here for a break and that it.
The girls sat on the bus eagerly waiting to arrive at the so called magical spa Toquana.
nothing can ruin this trip for them .. or so they thought.
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well i hop you liked this first chapter of my story please tell me what i need to improve ok and tell me if you like how it sounds so far ok thanks ^_^