Authors note.
Ok
this is not only my first fic it also happens to be the first story I
have ever actually sat down and written properly, but don't worry I
have already written well into the story so I will be posting
regularly.
One more point, you may notice a bit of a change in the
style of writing after Jack kisses Oona, well basically that is
because its a lot easier to write from imagination than it is to
write a scene from a film. Or at least I think so.lol. If this in
anyway upsets you feel free to flame me. Any attention is good
attention after all;-) If however you absolutely want to bow down and
worship my average talent so much that you would in fact be willing
to leave a review I will love you forever and ever! (Hint
hint).
Anyway I'm babbling so on with the fic!
You can also find this on ,but that's the naughty version, or it will be when I get to those bits. lol!
chapter one.
The Kiss.
In a cold dungeon far under the Dark Tree Jack and his companions were trapped.
In a dark and cold dungeon they lay in wait for a disgusting creature to leave and take with it its newly claimed prize,a small fairy screaming for them to help him.
A stab of guilt flowed through Jack as he heard the pitiful screams coming down the hallway outside his own cage.
The screams died away as the fairy was carried closer to the furnace and the other screaming captives awaiting their turn to be tortured,cooked and eaten.
Gump, one of Jacks companions held Oona in his hands, cradling her so that her light would not be seen by the thing that had left, whispering for silence and stillness.
Jack turned to gump desperation in his voice "Gump, we've got to help him"
Screwball piped up with his cowardly answer "ohh don't worry, our brother can take care of himself I'm sure... I think?"
Gump considered the answer for mere seconds "Screwball's right it's more important that you find the unicorn" A slight nod of his head and a strong stare said that there was no more to be said on the question.
Jack considered this a moment. He cared about the unicorn but his heroic nature could not let another be in pain.
Finally his reply was "Why not have Oona fly out and find a key?"
Even as he said it he knew that it was wrong to betray the secret that he had promised to keep,even though it was necessary to save not only the unicorn but the ones outside in the Dark kitchen.
Gump's look of confusion only added to Jacks guilt but his determination was apparent.
"Oona? But she's much too small!could never lift it."
Gumps reply was filled with confusion that quickly turned to astonishment as Oona flew out of hishands screaming
"OUR SECRET!"
Jacks watched her fly above his head quickly in anger as he cried, "Our secret will keep forever in this grave if you don't help us!"
Oona suddenly turned from the small ball of light into a fully-grown beautiful woman.
Her blonde hair framed her oval face with its sharp features; her wings stood starkly from her body soft and light looking too small to lift such a beauty into the air. Her gleaming blue eyes dancing in the firelight.
Gump's loud hiss of betrayal and anger caused them all to look his way
"You wilful sprite! How dare you keep such secrets!"
Oona's only reply was "Their mine to keep" The anger still evident in her voice.
She turned to Jack and her face softened, she walked towards him slowly kneeling down to be as close to him as possible.
From the first moment she had lain eyes on Jack she had wanted him, damn his princess, damn his human heart! She always got the man she wanted and today would be no different even if she had to resort to...darker methods.
"I'll do what you ask...If you'll kiss me Jack?"
His face remained blank, his true innocence showing through his hero's armor.
"Easy enough"
A slight laugh escaped his lips as he pushed back the thought that Oona would make a more demanding request of him.
He leaned over and gave her a quick kiss to the side of her face. Relived that his task was done he returned to his sitting position. An innocent smile upon his lips.
"Call that a kiss?"
She paused as she thought of what to do next, a slight frown upon her face.
"Am I not sweet?"
At first he looked bemused but soon his face went soft and he replied.
"Sweeter than bee pollen on a summer wind"
She came to the conclusion that she would use her magic to overcome this dilemma. There really was no other way to make him love her and not his brat princess!
"Sweet is the wind that blows me to you"
As the words left her mouth she transformed into Lili, a seductive,inviting look on her face.
From the other side of the room was Screwballs screeching voice "It...its fairy magic!"
Jacks looked confused and disbelieving as he said "Lili...Lili?"
Oona had to concentrate all her powers on making Jack believe it truly was Lili, but it would not have to last forever soon he would even forget that stupid princesses name!
"Yes Jack!"A small smile playing on her lips as she answered him.
Jack lifted his hand up to touch her face as she closed her eyes in anticipation of his touch, it never came.
"This isn't real." Was all Jack could say. He shook his head in disbelief of what he was seeing lowering his hand.
"Ohh it is... I'm warm and alive, and want to be in your arms"
Jack retreated from her for mere seconds before giving in to Oona's magic and leaning in slowly to take his kiss from her.
As their lips met a bright white light went from Oona's body into Jack's enveloping them both.
Stares of wonder came from the other fairies in the dungeon. Gump looked in disapproval he knew exactly what Oona was doing but the unicorn was too important to do anything about it now.
He would solve this problem soon enough,but not yet.
Their kiss deepened as Oona parted her lips to let Jack taste her for the first time as a stronger surge of light went through them both.
All too
quickly the kiss ended as Gump shouted "He has done as you asked
now go get the
keys!"
Oonas stare was of pure fury as
looked at Gump,but even she knew that the unicorns must
be
saved,Jack and herself could not survive in a world of darkness.
She stood up but Jack grabbed her wrist trying to bring her back to him, he did not even realised she no longer looked like Lili, he no longer cared.
She placed her hand on his head and whispered "I'll be back, do not worry" Giving him another kiss on his forehead.
He looked in physical pain as she transformed once again into a small ball of light and flew away.
When she had gone Gump decided to test the extent Jack had been bewitched.
"We must hurry and save the unicorns,perhaps we will find your Lili too.Ehh?"
Jack looked at him in confusion "Who?"
Gump looked at Screwball and Browntop all sharing saddened glances, all knowing what Oona had done was wrong but not willing to put their quest in peril by questioning it now.
Jack had been bewitched and Oona had really used a lot of power to cause him to completely forget his one true love.
Oona returned to the cage door and they all scrambled to it.
None so fast as Jack she smiled at him telling him "You have to save the unicorn Jack. At any cost...so that we can be together properly."
He smiled at her warmly "for you I would do anything!"
She let them all out of the cage to begin their battle anew.
Authors
note.
Whew! Well at least we got the groundwork down. So just to
recap Jack was seduced by Oona with her magic, bad bad Oona! He has
forgotten about Lili completely, this of course changes a few scenes
later in the film but I will also be going over them.
Unless you
would like me to just get right on with the story and just explain
what happens in the Dark Tree.There is only one scene in which Jack
sees Lili apart from the final battle which is in fact pivital to my
story.Just review and let me know which you would prefer.See you
soon!
P.S. I don't exactly know what a Beta is but I think they kindda read over your work and fix any problems with it.If anyone knows one that could help me as I really cant spell I would really appreciate it.
