THE UNEXPECTED TWIST
Just so you know, this is my first "posted" fanfic. (Well it was) So
feel free to inform
me of my mistakes, give me advice and tips, and tell me what you think
of this story. It's currently un-finished, and I'm not sure how long
it will be.
Please though, read and tell me what you think of it so far.
*Brackets: '[ ]' indicate that Amidamaru is speaking to Yoh through
the mind during
Spirit unity.
*The little stars:'*********' tell when a scene changes in the same
chapter.
* And squiggles: '~' that is found before and after a certain
paragraph(s) mean that
that certain paragraph is a dream...and ending squiggles means that
the dream has ended.
"Ahh! Finally, I'm done with Anna's training for the day! " Yoh said,
sitting down
on a bench near the bus stop.
"Yeah," came exhausted reply from Manta, who also sat down on the
bench.
The two rested comfortably on the bench, desperately gasping for air.
After a
breif moment of silence, Yoh finally decided to ask Manta something,
as he just
realized that Manta didn't actually do the training himself.
"Uh...Manta, why are you tired? You didn't go through Anna's
training! "
"I know! " Manta said, looking up at Yoh. "That's how intense her
training
sessions are! It tired ME out! "
"Heh heh heh!"
Yoh and a reluctant Manta, slowly climbed off the bench and started
to walk
home. Manta, with his bike, had a strange feeling that they had
forgotten
something and decided to share this bit of information with Yoh.
"Yeah! I had that same feeling too! Hm...... oh well! " Yoh said
shrugging it off
and walking on.
"Lord Manta," Amidamaru said appearing from out of nowhere. "You did
remember to pick up the fish from the market today for Anna, right?"
"Ahhh! The fish!! I forgot all about cooking!!" Manta took off,
pedalling towards
the market to collect the fish yelling:
"Sorry Yoh! I have to go now! Oh man, Anna's gonna KILL me!"
"Aww. Poor Manta! I sure hope Anna isn't too hard on him! Heh Heh!"
Yoh said,
stretching and yawning while passing through the cemetary, with a
hovering
Amidamaru not too far behind.
"Oh...uh...Lord Yoh? "
"Yeah Amidamaru? "
"You'd better start running too! I heard that Anna was thinking of a
penalty
training session if you didn't return in two hours! " He said, yelling
at Yoh to try
to get him to hurry on.
"Hee hee! Where'd ya hear that!?" He said, turning to face Amidamaru.
"From the ghosts here in the cemetery, the ones in the house, and
even the
ones that haunt the abandoned shack near the bowling alley! "
"You're not kidding, are you! " Yoh screamed in shock. His eyes were
wide
with terror.
"No! I am not! And you only have three minutes left! "
"Oh man!! Anna's gonna murder me!" Yoh screamed. He was now by
himself,
since his samurai spirit had already left.
Yoh darted through the cemetery and down the street to his house. He
burst
through the door, and was panting wildly.
"Sorry I-- "
"Hey Yoh! Back in time for dinner! " Manta said, as he carried the
tray of food
to the living room.
"Uh..." Yoh stared perplexed at Manta as he set the plates and bowls
of
food on the small table.
He was about to open his mouth to protest, but the smell of Ramen and
Sushi
had made his mouth water.
"Eh! Uh.Yoh, why don't you just sit down and eat! Your staring is
kinda
making me nervous. " Manta said, when he realized that his friend was
staring
into food paradise, with drool oozing out of his mouth.
"Yeah...sure! " Yoh said dreamily, walking towards his spot at the
table. He
picked up a set of wooden chopsticks, and observed the table before
him.
There were four bowls of hot, fresh-out-the-pot-Ramen, (two of which
were Yoh's),and four plates piled up with recitals, sushi, and shopou
(two of which were Yoh's).
"Wow Manta, you sure have outdone yourself this time! " Anna said,
walking
in the living room and sitting infront of Yoh.
"Heh! Thanks Anna! " Manta took the tray into the kitchen, and took
off the
apron.
"Man! " He said exhaustedly. "Talk about last minute meals! "
Manta entered the living room, and sat down next to Yoh. He took the
remaining pair of chopsticks, grabbed a bowl of Ramen, and dug in.
Everybody stuffed their faces with Ramen, sushi, or Riceballs (which
weren't
salty, but was instead sweet), and then there was a knock on the door.
"Huh? Someone at the door? " Yoh asked, with a mouthful of shopou.
"Oh, swallow your food, Yoh! " Anna snapped furiously. "And Manta,
get the
door! " She added when they heard three more knocks on the door.
"Alright, " he said glumly. He walked slowly towards the door and
opened it
a little bit, just to see who it was.
A blue-hared boy stood on the other side of the door, clutching a
snowboard
and a small shoulder bag.
"I have nowhere to stay, and I can't find the rest of my things. May
I stay with
you for awhile? " He asked.
Manta looked at the blue-hared stranger and felt sorry for him. He
looked tired
and helpless as he stared at Manta, and he had a small beam of hope in
his
eyes as well.
"One moment, please! " Manta said while closing the door, leaving it
open a
crack.
Manta walked over to the table where Anna and Yoh were sitting. They
stared
at him intently as he told them the situation.
"Absolutely not! " Anna yelled so loudly, so full of anger, that the
ghosts fled
in fear. Well... all of them except Amidamaru, of course.
"But Anna-- " Yoh and Manta screamed in unison.
"But nothing! We will not let some stranger come and live with us!
What if he's
out to get Yoh! No! I will not have it! "
The blue-hared stranger stood on the porch peering through the small
crack
made from the opened door. He was listening sadly to the argument
inside.
He had heard every word and didn't want to hear anymore. He was heart
broken and alone, but also felt very pleased to know that some people
still
cared.
"Ca'Mon Kori! " he said to the little miynushin (no clue how to spell
that).
"We're not welcome here! Let's go back on the streets and sell
jewelry! "
The boy, with his belongings, walked away from the house in front of
him.
Obediently, the little miynushin followed behind him, leaving their
hopes
of finally getting off the streets...behind.
I do not own SHAMAN KING. It is a manga and an anime created
and owned by: Hiroyuki Takei who created this in 1998. The story I
have written (and am still writing) is just a fanfic and has nothing
to do with the SHAMAN KING series. ^-^ Hope you've enjoyed
this...I will be up dating it later!
Just so you know, this is my first "posted" fanfic. (Well it was) So
feel free to inform
me of my mistakes, give me advice and tips, and tell me what you think
of this story. It's currently un-finished, and I'm not sure how long
it will be.
Please though, read and tell me what you think of it so far.
*Brackets: '[ ]' indicate that Amidamaru is speaking to Yoh through
the mind during
Spirit unity.
*The little stars:'*********' tell when a scene changes in the same
chapter.
* And squiggles: '~' that is found before and after a certain
paragraph(s) mean that
that certain paragraph is a dream...and ending squiggles means that
the dream has ended.
"Ahh! Finally, I'm done with Anna's training for the day! " Yoh said,
sitting down
on a bench near the bus stop.
"Yeah," came exhausted reply from Manta, who also sat down on the
bench.
The two rested comfortably on the bench, desperately gasping for air.
After a
breif moment of silence, Yoh finally decided to ask Manta something,
as he just
realized that Manta didn't actually do the training himself.
"Uh...Manta, why are you tired? You didn't go through Anna's
training! "
"I know! " Manta said, looking up at Yoh. "That's how intense her
training
sessions are! It tired ME out! "
"Heh heh heh!"
Yoh and a reluctant Manta, slowly climbed off the bench and started
to walk
home. Manta, with his bike, had a strange feeling that they had
forgotten
something and decided to share this bit of information with Yoh.
"Yeah! I had that same feeling too! Hm...... oh well! " Yoh said
shrugging it off
and walking on.
"Lord Manta," Amidamaru said appearing from out of nowhere. "You did
remember to pick up the fish from the market today for Anna, right?"
"Ahhh! The fish!! I forgot all about cooking!!" Manta took off,
pedalling towards
the market to collect the fish yelling:
"Sorry Yoh! I have to go now! Oh man, Anna's gonna KILL me!"
"Aww. Poor Manta! I sure hope Anna isn't too hard on him! Heh Heh!"
Yoh said,
stretching and yawning while passing through the cemetary, with a
hovering
Amidamaru not too far behind.
"Oh...uh...Lord Yoh? "
"Yeah Amidamaru? "
"You'd better start running too! I heard that Anna was thinking of a
penalty
training session if you didn't return in two hours! " He said, yelling
at Yoh to try
to get him to hurry on.
"Hee hee! Where'd ya hear that!?" He said, turning to face Amidamaru.
"From the ghosts here in the cemetery, the ones in the house, and
even the
ones that haunt the abandoned shack near the bowling alley! "
"You're not kidding, are you! " Yoh screamed in shock. His eyes were
wide
with terror.
"No! I am not! And you only have three minutes left! "
"Oh man!! Anna's gonna murder me!" Yoh screamed. He was now by
himself,
since his samurai spirit had already left.
Yoh darted through the cemetery and down the street to his house. He
burst
through the door, and was panting wildly.
"Sorry I-- "
"Hey Yoh! Back in time for dinner! " Manta said, as he carried the
tray of food
to the living room.
"Uh..." Yoh stared perplexed at Manta as he set the plates and bowls
of
food on the small table.
He was about to open his mouth to protest, but the smell of Ramen and
Sushi
had made his mouth water.
"Eh! Uh.Yoh, why don't you just sit down and eat! Your staring is
kinda
making me nervous. " Manta said, when he realized that his friend was
staring
into food paradise, with drool oozing out of his mouth.
"Yeah...sure! " Yoh said dreamily, walking towards his spot at the
table. He
picked up a set of wooden chopsticks, and observed the table before
him.
There were four bowls of hot, fresh-out-the-pot-Ramen, (two of which
were Yoh's),and four plates piled up with recitals, sushi, and shopou
(two of which were Yoh's).
"Wow Manta, you sure have outdone yourself this time! " Anna said,
walking
in the living room and sitting infront of Yoh.
"Heh! Thanks Anna! " Manta took the tray into the kitchen, and took
off the
apron.
"Man! " He said exhaustedly. "Talk about last minute meals! "
Manta entered the living room, and sat down next to Yoh. He took the
remaining pair of chopsticks, grabbed a bowl of Ramen, and dug in.
Everybody stuffed their faces with Ramen, sushi, or Riceballs (which
weren't
salty, but was instead sweet), and then there was a knock on the door.
"Huh? Someone at the door? " Yoh asked, with a mouthful of shopou.
"Oh, swallow your food, Yoh! " Anna snapped furiously. "And Manta,
get the
door! " She added when they heard three more knocks on the door.
"Alright, " he said glumly. He walked slowly towards the door and
opened it
a little bit, just to see who it was.
A blue-hared boy stood on the other side of the door, clutching a
snowboard
and a small shoulder bag.
"I have nowhere to stay, and I can't find the rest of my things. May
I stay with
you for awhile? " He asked.
Manta looked at the blue-hared stranger and felt sorry for him. He
looked tired
and helpless as he stared at Manta, and he had a small beam of hope in
his
eyes as well.
"One moment, please! " Manta said while closing the door, leaving it
open a
crack.
Manta walked over to the table where Anna and Yoh were sitting. They
stared
at him intently as he told them the situation.
"Absolutely not! " Anna yelled so loudly, so full of anger, that the
ghosts fled
in fear. Well... all of them except Amidamaru, of course.
"But Anna-- " Yoh and Manta screamed in unison.
"But nothing! We will not let some stranger come and live with us!
What if he's
out to get Yoh! No! I will not have it! "
The blue-hared stranger stood on the porch peering through the small
crack
made from the opened door. He was listening sadly to the argument
inside.
He had heard every word and didn't want to hear anymore. He was heart
broken and alone, but also felt very pleased to know that some people
still
cared.
"Ca'Mon Kori! " he said to the little miynushin (no clue how to spell
that).
"We're not welcome here! Let's go back on the streets and sell
jewelry! "
The boy, with his belongings, walked away from the house in front of
him.
Obediently, the little miynushin followed behind him, leaving their
hopes
of finally getting off the streets...behind.
I do not own SHAMAN KING. It is a manga and an anime created
and owned by: Hiroyuki Takei who created this in 1998. The story I
have written (and am still writing) is just a fanfic and has nothing
to do with the SHAMAN KING series. ^-^ Hope you've enjoyed
this...I will be up dating it later!