I am freakin tired of all those Curtis sister stories with the sister miss Mary-sue in the flesh. If the Curtis had a sister, this is how it would go even if you don't want to admit it. This takes place a little before the book.
Disclaimer- I don't own the Outsiders. One day I will own my own book. Just not this one!
Chapter one
It was five minutes till the bell range, and I was dying to get out. I blocked out Mr. Ruff's voice out, who, was for the one billionth time, lecturing the class on how we were completely stupid, and didn't deserve to be in the 'smart' kid class.
I looked back at the clock. Five, four, three, two, one, the bell range. The last five seconds of class always seemed to be the longest. I gathered up my books, and pulled my jacket on. I ran down the hall, and out of the door to meet my older sister Kim.
Kim was everybody's average greasy girl with the short skirts, and too much eye make-up.
" Hey, Kim," I said. She was around back applying more lipstick.
" Hey Pony," Kim responded. She was a year older than my brother, Soda, and in her junior year in high school.
" Where's Two-bit," I asked. " He was supposed to give us a ride home." As if on queue Two-bit showed up.
" Are you ready to go," he asked. We nodded our heads, and got into his car along with Steve Randle, Soda's best buddy.
We took a detour on our way home to pick Soda up from the DX, and drop Steve off. They worked there. Steve part-time, and Soda full time. It kind of bothered me that Soda dropped out of school. He was only sixteen when he did. Kim wanted to drop out, but my brother wouldn't let her. Darry, my oldest brother, took care of us when my parents died a little while ago. He can continue to care for us if we stay out of trouble.
Soon, we arrived home. We went in the house, and Two-bit turned on the TV like he always did when we got home from school. Soda tried to find a cake. He soon discovered that we didn't have any cake. He quickly made another. I really didn't like his cake. He put too much sugar in the icing.
I sat in front of the TV with Two-bit, and waited for Darry's arrival.
I now, it sucks. I got bored. I hope you review! Please tell me what I can improve on.