Ok, here is one of my older fics i wrote, but didn't know how to post.
I hope you enjoy this story. I sadly, do not own Salior Moon. Mabye one day...
.....{hits head}...never mind!
I hope that this is better, I went back and tried to slow down the story and make the chs longer.
For everyone that flamed me: I will never give up writting. For everyone else who reviewed my
story thanks for all of the kind words!!!!!

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"You're out!", the scouts said. But, they didn't know why she was late for their last
battle. She looked around the room. First at Darien, then at the outers, and last at the
inners, slowly studing their expressions.

Darien was the next to speak up, "It's unamous, hand over your wepons, until you can be
more responceable Sere."

"You broke-up with me, so you have no right to call me that," she growled. Relucantly,
she got her septors and tiara out of her space pocket.With a thud she let them fall to the
floor.

"Ooohhhh." Luna gasped, as Serena took down her hair denouncing her thrown. She popped
her crystal out of her locket and throws it to the floor. It didn't break, so she put her foot
on top of it and just then a portal opened up and out jumped a man.

"Baby," he said while grabbing her and dragging her out the temple and to the park. He
walked Serena over to a bench, where she broke down and began to cry that soft cry that she
made to let you know that not only was her heat broken but so was her soul. The cry that he had
only heard once before.

"Baby?" wispered a jealous Darien. "I have to know what he means!" he thought. So, he
decied that the fist chance he got he would run to the park to find Serena and that man.