So, my first story was pointed out to me made no sense what so ever :( and I realized they were right when I re-read it, I was afraid to be TOO descriptive but then…I thought for a minute…well, maybe too descriptive CAN be and interesting thing ;) right? SO…with that out of the way…WE CAN START A NEW :3 my name is Melonie…and well, I hope throughout my stories we CAN become friends. Somehow lmao, I will try to include ANYONE in this story that is wanted. (: THAT'S IT have fun reading…love ya!
"Momma!" I yelled from the top of my lungs, today was my sisters graduation and we were having the party at her friends house…Kagome I think she had said her name was. Yeah, I'm sure that's it! Oh, I totally forgot! My name is Hinata and my sisters' name is Kana and we were born into the Hotaru family. Kana's friend Kagome is Kagome of the Higurashi's she met her at some school mom sent her to. Apparently she lives at a beautiful shrine and that's where mom wants the party so, I cannot object to that. Not like it would be my choice either, right? No? Thought not. I mentally frowned inside, wondering around the house when something cold touched my shoulder.
"Hinata! What are you doing out of bed?!" My mother screamed at me "It is only a WEEK before Kana's party! Come one baby get back to bed you're sick…"
"I don't want to momma, I wanna walk around, you try lying in bed for three days in a row with nothing to do but sleep. You won't wanna sleep anymore. I wanna talk to Kana please momma!" I kept begging her and I folded my hands together as I gave her 'the ill be good' look mixed with some puppy dog eyes, she normally can never resist that.
"No, not going to work this time Hinata, you're going to bed got it? Now go." She smacked my butt shooshing me back into my room. I hate you some day's mother…
As I was walking back to my room I noticed something felt different, I looked at Kana's door and it was shut. "That's Funny, she always keeps her door open so she can hear when mom calls…Kana?!" I walked up to the door and opened it and what I saw I don't think ill forget…ever…I saw something hovering over Kana as if it wasn't even there. She was sleeping so peacefully cuddled up to her pillows as always. But…why can I see that thing? It had midnight black eyes with bright, bright, bright red pupils, it was all bone and you could see the flesh rotting off of it. I don't know how I could actually see this thing, it was so unreal. Maybe…no. That's not it…I can't see the dead.
"Hey Hinata, what's up?" she sat up slowly and sleeply, COULD SHE NOT SEE THIS THING?! I had to keep my calm I walked over and sat on her bed. It was right above us, that….thing. What was this thing?
"Kana, can I ask you something?"
"Sure Hinata, what is it?"
"When you look up at the ceiling, do you see anything strange?" I watched her look up and shrug.
"Nothing unusual…why? Well, actually, there's a little black spot on the ceiling. Ill tell mom about that later. Why?"
"No reason…." How could I tell her about the thing above her bed, it was watching her!
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