We'll I needed to rewrite this so yeah, the first chapter is re-writen.
so yeah anyway, i hope you like this version better,

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He said so' my mother said. I looked at her ready to complain about this event. 'Do not argue with me, you know that you are different from us. Lord Kuchiki said you need to leave, I know you hate that, but it pains me to say it, but he is right. My daughter, remember you are still one of us, here or anywhere else. Keep Momo, he'll keep you company, just don't bring him out all the time.' Mother said. She slowly got up, her four paws straining to keep her up. I opened my mouth again. 'I'll be fine dear; Kuchiki will take care of me. Now leave.' She turned around and left me. Her reddish brown fur swaying slightly as she limped.

I turned around and pushed my self to leave. Lord Kuchiki, always did things for a good reason, now if he wanted me gone, then I shale go. As I ran swiftly through the forest, my ears picked up the sound of angered and strained voices. I changed my course in an instant, only having to turn on one foot and flip over a rather large bolder I found my self several feet behind the odd clothed creatures. Were they native to these parts of the woods? Probably, seeing how they looked.

"Since when was this here. WHAT ON EARTH ARE WE DOING HERE IN THE FIRST PLACE?" this one seemed to have a rather short temper.

Would you stop, we always had a forest; it's just no one ever bothered going in it. Never new it was this big… Hay, you" I just had to be curious; mother said that's how I got my self injured all the time. The….thing was pointing at me. Did it even have a sex? Most creatures did, I just couldn't tell with these. They wore so much on there bodies. Plus they walked up right…were they chimps? Lord Kuchiki said there were these walking up right chimps, and I shouldn't start messing with them. I jumped up and flipped over them and zoomed in a random direction. Just before I could get enough speed to bolt over a rock I was tacked from behind like a bear cub.

"Yay, we got her!" I heard a light voice. Now what to do with her? She's rather weird looking, look at what she weirs. Pretty mush nothing. Now, let's be polite boys and not stare." A pink furred chimp looked at me with a loopy grin. Weird think it was too. Smaller than the one on my back, who currently didn't realize that it was crushing my rib cage. Suddenly my world whizzed down words and I found my self in the front paws, well I thing they were, of the chimps. Finally realizing were they were headed I struggled to get out of its paws. I had never left the forest and now wouldn't be a great time either.

Come one, stop that now, we're only trying to help" These chimps were rather loud when they talked. As I kept struggling, I felt it tighten its hold on me. "No really stop doing that, if you're feeling uncountable you could at least tell me that." It swiftly switched me to his shoulder; I could look out and see the woods slowly fade away. "There, happy now? You're not going to move around anymore?" I sighed. Well this can't be help.

I was brought in to this big odd structure. It was white, and many places to go and no trees. To put it simply I had no clue where the chimps had taken me. It dumped me on the ground and I was left to stare at an old chimp...I think it was old, sure looked old with all that fur on its face and none on top. It also had all those wrinkles and let's not talk about that old smell.

"So let me get this strait, you found her in the woods?" They all nodded. Looking around I found many thinks to look through like this cave like thing that sat on the floor, when I opened I found that it held more of those weird clothing they had on. I left it be and let the cave thing close with a loud bang. Startled I jumped and hissed at it, not really getting the picture on what I was anyway. "For goodness sakes, what on earth are you looking for?" the old chimp asked me.

I think she's just curious," The light voiced one with the pink fur turned to me. "So…what's you name?" I turned toward her and cocked my head.

'Name? Mother never really named me, everyone just called me girl' I told her. She shot back and pointed at me.

She's telepathic,' the chimp said in aw. "she doesn't have name." she nodded and then It turned to me again. "Where are you from?" Was she stupid or soothing.

Forest' I pointed to the out side. It just nodded. 'Can I go back home now? Though, I'm really supposed to be leaving home, but I guess I can stay there till I'm ready to leave' I was just rambling on, I guess I was scared. You know, being with the upright chimps was kind of odd. They lived in odd places.

"You live there…dear god, no wonder you're so odd" It said.

'Odd, you one to talk…' I stated to the chimp. 'You upright chimps are very loud, plus you were all those weird cloth things, and you all smell like blood, dirt, sweat and some chemicals.' And then the chimp laughed.

"oh my. She acts like she's been raised by bears" it continued to laugh. My mother wasn't a bear.

'Um…Correction, I was raised by a fox spirit. They are very nice. The bear spirits are real pushovers, and they hate me as I am anyway.' I stated to it. She stopped laughing and looked at me.

You were raised my spirit foxes. You literally live in the woods don't you. Well, isn't that just interesting. Well you said you had to leave home right?"

'yeah, The Lord doesn't want me there anymore…and I will respect the lords wishes.' It just nodded.

"well then, I guess you can just live with me" it smiled.

"Are you crazy, she has been living in the forest, I guess you can just call her an animal…though…that's not the right word?"

"I really don't care, I'll get her civilized, have her walking and talking and eating just like all the other humans. You'll see. Plus I feel like she could be a real good aspect here." It turned to me and smiled. "Hope you enjoy your stay here, because you will be living here for a while."

I hope you like it so far...but tell me if i should keep it a Bakuya and Oc. So tell me.
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Next chapter:

It has been years since that day, I have grown to under stand the costumes of humans. Sadly I still have trouble talking in the human language though I have understood it for years. I still have my telepathy power, and I have gained much more power. I have even received my Zanpakutou… but I'll tell you about it later.