I have contacted Ansela Jonla and will be talking this through. So please don't let her review discourage you.
yeah, I need OCs for my next fanfic that I will be starting after I update my crossover story with chapter 13, which may be a while, then leaving it alone since I've only gotten one review, and because of that I don't feel like working on it. Even after that I don't think I'll get to it right away because of finals and a research paper among other school stuff.
the OCs are for my next fanfic, as stated above, called Hell's War. I need captains, lieutenants, and two seated officers for Hell. Names can be whatever language you want them to be, but zanpakutou must be Japanese. And people must be human looking for the exception two squad captains, squads 7 and 12 can be whatever thing, hopefully for obvious reasons. Haori designs can be whatever for captains, but the kanji for their squad must be on the back. I have three slots filled with my own, try to keep them in the same format. Any requirements for lieutenants and/or captains' squads will be displayed.
Submit an OC via review ONLY. If you pm me with a submission, I will humbly request you submit it as a review.
Name: Dean "Lucifer" Shard
Rank: Captain of Squad 1, Head Captain.
Gender: Male
Appearance: Six feet Four inches tall with jet black hair. Has glowing yellow eyes that are slits and lightly tanned. Wears a black suit like clothing with silver, gold, red, and blue skull studs on the right side of his chest. Instead of a tie, he has a silver skull necklace about half the size of a baseball.
Personality: Dean is very punctual and businesslike, almost to an intimidating degree. He is very manipulative, often pitting two squads to fight each other under highly regulated team battles, but heavily stays in the background and watch. He heavily emphasizes a captain's choice to do a mission. He will only interfere when the other captains start to put their hands on their swords, then settling the dispute by choosing a number than having each captain that wants the mission choose a number. While not necessarily cold, he can be very cruel and often plays favorites with the Squad Ten captain. He is also one out of two currently alive people who were born and raised in Hell.
Zanpakutou: Amaterasu
Sealed form: A double-edged sword hidden inside of a "magician's" cane.
Shikai: "Leave nothing left: Amaterasu!" A standard all black scythe with a spiked ball on the opposite end of the scythe blade.
Ability: Allows the use of black flames that consumes everything.
Bankai: Unknown (if the captain does not have bankai, then put N/A, no more unknowns on bankai for captains, only one lieutenant may have one, will be specified which squad)
Other powers: Corruption-His mere presence can influence humans to act more hostile or commit more crimes than usual.
Premonition-Once in a while, he will get a premonition of what is to come. (please keep these other powers reasonable and explain them, you can make them up on your own or use what I have here. a max of two will be allowed or put N/A)
Lieutenant: no bankai, no further requirements
Squad Two Captain: Assassin/Specail Ops, picks on Squad Three Captain due to inexperience and unwillingness to take on missions, very good at flash step (or shunpo, whatever you want to call it)
Squad Two Lieutenant: no bankai.
Name: Natsume Tomoharu
Rank: Squad Three Captain.
Gender: Male
Appearance: Four feet three inches tall, the shortest of all captains. Has short, spiky black hair with the exception of a foot long lock of hair that hangs over his right shoulder. Wears a red shihakusho with a haori that has all colors of stars all over it and the kanji for 3 on the back. Eye color is a dark grey and wears his zanpakutou like a sling over his left shoulder (kind of what Captain Unohana does).
Personality: A timid and shy boy genius who is very unsure of himself, and gets bullied and picked on because of it. He greatly admires his lieutenant because of his/her self confidence and regards the captain of Squad Ten as his "older brother" after he rescued him from third rate citizens (demons with moderate human appearance) shortly after arriving to Hell. He rarely volunteers himself for missions and is easily the weakest and least experienced of all the captains. Surprisingly, when he is truly motivated to kill, he is the second fastest captain of them all (Head Captain is fastest, tied for second with Squad Two captain).
Zanpakutou: Shuensha
Sealed form: A standard katana with a five pointed star guard and yellow and blue hilt. The sheath is yellow.
Shikai: "Star bright, star shine, and twinkle: Shuensha!" four small yellow stars are blades, each with their own black metal string for three feet, then combining to one black metal string that then connect to the guard. Can stretch up to 200 yards.
Ability: Has three attacks: Ryuusei Arashi-hurls five "meteors" of spirit energy at target
Shouheki-a yellow star shaped shield appears wherever the hilt and guard is.
Baisuu-fires off hundreds of thousands of small, yellow stars at the target that act like blades
Bankai: Kozumikku Shuensha-16 cartoonish, yellow stars appear, then bursts into millions smaller yellow stars, 100 blue, jagged stars are above that can come crashing down upon his will. He still keeps his star mace? (would that be a mace? or something?)
Other Powers: N/A
Lieutenant: no bankai, get along with their captain perfectly.
Squad Four Captain: Medical
Squad Four Lieutenant: no bankai, medical
Squad 5 to Squad 9 Captains: no requirements, Squad 7 can be a thing (meaning anthropomorphic animal or a demon of some sort)
Lieutenants for those squads: no bankai
Name: Nickel Shard
Rank: Squad Ten Captain
Gender: Male
Appearance: 4 ft. 11 in. tall. Has short blue hair with a red snowflake pattern on his right side and has ice blue eyes. Wears a sleeveless red shihakusho and a haori with a single large red snow flake pattern on it with the kanji for ten on the back. Zanpakutou is worn on his back.
Personality: Sometimes he is cold and heartless, but is surprisingly nice. Nickel is very harsh on punishment, often sending troublesome subordinates to the "acid chambers." He saved Natsume because he was a first class citizen, but later grew a fondness for him and accepted him as a younger brother. While he is a strategist, he is often referred to as a Swiss army knife in the way he is good at everything to at least captain's level. Out of all the captains, he is widely accepted as the second strongest and third fastest, though he believes his strength is overestimated. Being the Head Captain's son, Nickel often gets what he wants, making him seem like the Head Captain's favorite. When there are disputes involving more than five captains for accepting a mission, though his voice is soft, he "commands" to have the mission, and the others back off. He keeps the fact that he is the Head Captain's son secret to all the captains of the exception of one, who is a very good friend of his. He is the second currently alive person born and raised in Hell.
Zanpakutou: Akai Kousetsu
Sealed form: a standard katana with a snowflake guard design and a dark red sheath and hilt.
Shikai: "Freeze to death: Akai Kousetsu." The blade changes into a double-edged sword with a chain coming from the hilt, where a half snowflake blade is at the end of the chain, which can lengthen up to 15 ft. Often called the strongest ice/snow zanpakutou.
Ability: Grants greater control of more powerful ice in general, which is colored red, but has two actual attacks: Nokogiri-two snowflakes form and spin like saw blades, cutting almost anything in their path.
Ryuumon Kousetsu-fires off a red ice dragon at the target.
Bankai: Daiguren Akai Kousetsu-more or less a red version of Captain Hitsugaya's bankai, though with no actual attacks aside from greater strength of the two mentioned above.
Other Powers: Corruption-his mere presence compels humans to be more hostile and commit crimes more frequently.
Hell's Power-can be temporarily activated to triple the user's strength and power. For Nickel, the change is ice blue stripes on all of his attacks and bankai. His eyes also turn blood red and become slits. This power can be dangerous if activated for an extended amount of time, including severe physical wounds and brain damage. Even consecutive, short activations can have the same effect, but allows it to last a bit longer.
Lieutenant: no bankai
Name: Ashley Alburn
Rank: Squad 11 Captain.
Gender: Female
Appearance: 5 ft. 10 in. Has long, brown hair and one eye green, the other orange. Is just as well endowed as Orihime and wears a red shihakusho (surely you guys now know the standard Hell's Guardians' uniforms) with an un decorative haori with the kanji for eleven on it.
Personality: A very accepting woman who is also Nickel's friend, and the only one that knows he is the Head Captain's son. As the captain of Squad 11, she is very combative, but not an arrogant fool. She only wishes to find a man that has no fear of death and can fight her all day. She is very attentive and can spot abnormalities of others' behavior. She often consults Nickel about things she has little to no understanding of, and asks if she could send some of her subordinates to his acid chambers. Most of the time, she is an emotionless drone, only breaking from that when there is something she is excited or passionate about in one form or another. Nickel is also the only person who can stop her when she goes into a murderous frenzy.
Zanpakutou: Kurenai Subeta
Sealed form: A standard singe katana whose guard is half shaped like flames and half shaped like a snowflake. The hilt and sheath are both red and blue.
Shikai: "Emit third degree burns on both sides of the spectrum: Kurenai Subeta!" The katana splits into two double-edged swords. One is red-orange and the tip of it ends in fiery waves. The other is ice blue with the tip ending in a jagged ice like structure.
Ability: The red-orange sword increases the opponent's body heat with each cut, making them sweat more and cooking their insides. The ice blue sword acts like poison, ice crystals slips into the bloodstream with each cut, then they explode into jagged ice flowers that blocks blood flow and causing internal bleeding.
Bankai: N/A
Other Powers: N/A
Lieutenant: Bankai IS allowed for this rank.
Squad 12 Captain: Research and Development, can be a thing
Lieutenant: no bankai
Squad 13 Captain: do whatever you wish
Lieutenant: no bankai
a third, fourth, and any other seated officer can be from any squad, a maximum of three will be accepted.
If you feel the restrictions are a little harsh or restrictive, please say so, if you have any questions, please ask. Thank you for your time.