dauntless secret

by bitches-its-satan

Summary: Tris is a 16 year old girl who like to have danger and excitement in her life the only job she wants is a place in dauntless (secret service to the government) she has been training for this her whole life. Will she fail will she succeed? Summary is literally the worst thing I have ever written in my life but the story could be good if you give me a chance

1. Chapter 1

I wake up at six in the morning, like I have been trained to do everyday of my life ever since my brother Caleb woke me up to a lovely refreshing bucket of ice-cold water (note my sarcasm.) Those were some sad times. When I finally recover from seeing spots I stare at my calendar, not really processing what day it is, the calendar stares back at me. I trudge to the bathroom, brush my teeth and splash some water on my face not bothering to dry my face or look for my towel. Walking back to my calendar I find the date. That is when I realize today was the day my life was finally worth living. I am going to Dauntless to start my awesome career. Being of some service to this country. Being a spy. I rush to my wardrobe to throw on any item of clothing that comes to hand. Big mistake. I end up wearing my dad's baggy shirt my jeans from sixth year and the world's ugliest socks. I change again, taking more care this time. I wear black skinny jeans and a black sleeveless shirt that reveals my ravens; they symbolize my mum dad and brother even though my dad left when I was young. Without knowing a tear slips through my eye.

"Pathetic," I mutter.

I race down the stairs only to find Caleb with the dreaded bucket of water in his hands. I take it from him and put it over his head.

"That's a really nice look on you, you know? You should really thank me, I'll take fifty pounds…" I say

"I'll give you a slap!" my brother says.

Laughing to myself I grab a waffle and yell,

"Adios mum! I'm going to start the career of my dreams!"

" Okay honey, have fun!" my mum yells back.

As I walk to the secret address that only people who were offered the job know, I wonder if my family really believes in me, they all take it for a joke. They think I'm too weak. I know I'm strong and I'll prove it to them. If only I could get someone to have faith in me…

hey this is my first fanfic so go easy on me but constructive criticism is good and ill try to update soon and um please review! because reviewing is a good thing! and um if you read this then that is awesome!