I wanted to write a more interesting and also a pretty good story for The Loud House. I always wondered how interesting it could be, if the Loud family met a charater between Lori's and Leni's age, but he is full of mystery and maybe there is more to him, then just anger and hatred. Writing a good OC charater is hard and it's even harder to make him/her a good charater for a show like The Loud House. So this is basiclly a re-write of the my pevious story a „New Boy in Town", but I haven't come up with a good name for this story for now, so enjoy the read of the stories first chapter.
It was morning in Royal Woods Michigan and it was also school day. Luan Loud wasn't happy going to school, because in school, she may joke allot and is always happy, but to no ones knowledge, not even to her own family know that Luan has been secretly bullied at school. She doesn't think much of it, because she always tries to be cheery and happy, but it's not like her pain her heart isn't still there. She always is afraid to tell her family about her bullying problem, because she thinks, their family would make things worse or they won't believe her and think it's one of another jokes from Luan.
Luan doesn't hate her family, but she hates the fact that she has to lie to her family of her being bullied. She got up from her bed and saw Luna getting up too. They went downstairs for breakfest and for a long while, Luan and her family were at home. Her siblings, more specificly. Her father and mother were at work early in the morning. Taking care of 11 children is never an easy task and Luan, like the rest of her siblings know that predicament.
Fast forward to High School. Luan was in 10th Grade. She basiclly has started high school, but she always tries to stay positive and not pay too much attention of what other people think of her. After she has taken her seat, she overhears some people, not very loud talking about a the new student that was attending to her high school.
Boy (whispering): Have you heard? The new kid that comes here. He practiclly lashed out at some bullies and made them scared for life.
Girl (whispering): I know. Not to mention that more people are scared of the new kid. Some say that he has that hatefull look in his eyes. I don't want to cross paths with him.
Boy(whispering): Me neither.
After the school bell rang, everyone took their seats and the teacher came in. After few school hours have passed, she sat next to Lori, Leni and Luna for lunch. They were having a great time and were laughing and talking about school. They each asked about how was their day have been. Untile Luna spoke.
Luna: We have the new kid in our class. He seems very grumpy and he barley talks to anyone.
Leni: Maybe he is shy?
Lori: Doubt it. I think he is a freak. He only beat up bullies and always gives people cold stares. And I thought Lucy was creepy.
Everyone on the table laughed, except for Luan. The other notice this, but later shrug it off and continued laughing none stop.
Some time has passed and the last class was over. Luan packed her backpack and was about to walk away from class, unti she was stopped by bunch of teens. They were bullies to Luan and Luan was actually scared, that she was gulping out of fear. Luan wasn't the strongest, so physical fighting was never gonna happen to her. She was pushed by 2 people. One is a girl, the other is a boy. While the other person was another boy, who looked pretty strong in his age. They thought that no one was around and that they were lucky, because ever student in this school always get a chance to be free from all the studying. Unkown to them, after they turned left, where the back entrance of the school is, they were spotted by one tall person. Who had brown hair and he wore a white jacket with black and grey stripes around it. He wore dark blue jeans and black and white hi-tops. He also wore glasses with black outlines. He saw the girl being pushed away and he gave a very serious and a very angry glare.
Cutting back to Luan and the 3 bullies, the 2 bulliespushed Luan on the ground were laughing at her. Luan had tears coming down her face and asked sadlly: „W-what do you want from me?"
Boy Bully #1: Nothing much. We just wanted to give you a beating, if that's ok with you?
Luan (sad): No! Leave me alone.
Luan was then pulled by her ponytail by the girl bully.
Girl bully: What was that shrimp? You dare talk back at us?
Luan then was punched in the stomache by the boy bully and the girl bully took off her bandanna, that was holding her hair. Her brown hair wasn't in pony tail anymore, but it didn't matter, she was fell down on her stomache on the ground was holding her stomache in pain. The bullies started to kick her repeatedly and they were laughing. Until they were interrupted, when one of the bullies was hit in the head by school book. He was holding his head in pain, when he turned around he was then punched repeatedly, until his cheeks were swollen and some of his teeth fell out and he was punched on his right cheek, until he fell down uncocisous.
The girl bully was attacking the boy with glasses, until he quickly doged her and grabbed her by the back of her head and smashed her face on the wall, because the person they were fighting was in rage. And there wouldn't be nothing to calm him down. The last bully and was running away scared, until the boy let go of the girls head and picked a branch and throwed it in the air screaming in anger.
He missed, but the bully was far gone. He saw the uncocious bully with a swollen face, weakly getting up, until the boy kicked him in the stomach and made him roll in his back. The boy clenched his right fist very hard and was about to give him a finishing blow, while with the left hand, he was holding the bully by his shirt. The bully saw a very murderous look on the boys face and pleaded to not hurt. The boy let go of the bully with his left hand and got off of him.
?: Do anything like this again. And I promise you, that I will do much worse.
The bully quickly got up and picked up the girl bully, who's nose was broken from the wall impact and was also bleeding. The boy bully was limping and crying, because he was in too much pain, to even make any rational thoughts on the way. He was paralyzed by fear.
The boy with glasses sighed and picked up his book and put it back in his school bag. He was about leave, until he heard crying. He turned around and saw Luan on the ground in pain crying from sadness and sorrow. The boy couldn't just leave her like this. His mind was telling him to leave her behind, because of his anger and hatred towards people, but his heart was telling him to help her. He looked up in the sky and noticed that it was about to start to rain. The boy quikcly took off his white jacket and put it on Luan's back. Luan didn't was confused, when she felt she was being pulled up by her hands. She felt her cheek touching someone elses cheek and her hands was on something soft. It was a shirt. The girl then felt her legs being pulled up aswell and she felt something warm touching and holding on her legs. She didn't know what was going on, but she understood that she was being carried by someone. The boy then was carrying Luan om his back, while she has his jacket on her back, so she doesn't get too wet from the rain. The boy wasn't the strongest person in the world, but he wasn't completlly weak either.
After few mintues passed, it continued to rain, but the boy continued carrying Luan to her home. How he knew, where she lived, wasn't important. The only thing that matter is to bring her home, so her family can take good care of her. Luan had closed eyes all the way, but she was still awake. She could hear footsteps spalshing around on puddles from each step. They finally arrived home and the stranger rang the door bell. The door was opened by Leni and saw Luan and the new stranger carrying her on her back. He was soaking wet and thunder also striked making a flashy image of the boy carrying Luan. Leni screamed Luan's name and the boy carried her to the sofa. He heard and saw allot of people comming from downstairs. He quickly put his school bag on his right shoulder and quickly left. The Loud family saw how bad their cheerfull sisters was injured. And many tried to make her feel better. Leni was crying, because it looked really bad. Lori on the otherh and was angry, because she thought that the boy was the one who hurt her younger sisters. She was about turn around and catch him, until Luan quickly grabbed Lori's hand. She weakly said, while crying and smiling: „He saved me." The Loud siblings were shocked, but some were relieved that their cheery sisters was ok.
But the boy continued walking in the rain, until he turned around saw his house. He didn't want to go inside, but he did it, because he didn't want to make his family worried. He sighed and was going towards the house with a serious look on his face.
End of Chapter 1