I just decided to write this. My first sly writing so please give helpful tips. This story is in Sly 4.
I don't own anything of sly cooper.
Now to the main story.
Ch.1: Too much.
Sly Cooper, master thief, was in despair. Carmelita refused to talk to him unless necessary to. He wanted to show her that she meant the world to him, but she wouldn't give him the chance, hell she wouldn't give him the time of day anymore. He would give it one more try to tell her that he honestly loved her.
His plan was set into action when he found a beautiful flower while in the ice age with Bob. He would try to give it to her once she was alone so he could have no distractions. Now we follow Sly who is about to give the flower to Carmelita when he heard her talking to herself (I never got why they never spoke in their heads?).
"Damn it, Sly. Why can't you see that I'm not interested anymore? You used my feelings to try and get info every time. I once loved you but not anymore." She said, not realizing that Sly was hearing every word. To say that Sly's heart was shattered was an understatement; he felt like someone took his heart and burned it to ash before tossing it to the winds. "Fine, if you don't love me like I love you then I shouldn't spend more time trying to chase after you."Sly said, startling the vixen as she turned to see him with nothing but hurt in his eyes.
"How much did you hear…"she was cut off by Sly."I heard enough. Here you can have this as to remember me by." And with that he tossed the flower at her and jumped to somewhere else. Carmelita was shocked, never had Sly done what he just did. He never would off cut her off; also he didn't try to apologize for what he did. She then noticed the flower; it had a note on it. This is what it said:
"Dear Carm,
I wanted to tell you how much you mean to me but you wouldn't give me the chance. So I decided to show you. I found the most beautiful flower I could find and tell you that you were unlike any flower, beautiful and graceful, but you are more than that to me. You are what keeps me going in dark times, to see your lovely face again. I hope you can forgive me for lying to you, but I wanted to get closer to you without the shock pistol. I'm sorry, Sly."
Carmelita was crying by the end of the letter. She was more beautiful to him then this flower, which was more than beautiful than anything. He wanted to know her better. She felt ashamed of herself for being so blind. She also just realized her great mistake. She had to make things better and tell Sly that she loved him more than anything. She then raced after the raccoon she wanted to find. Only problem was, she didn't know where he was. He could be anywhere after she read the note.
Sly was looking over the edge of the rail on top of the mountain behind the hide out. He wished it would rain so he wouldn't have to worry about anyone seeing him cry. Just as he was about to leave, he heard someone coming up the path. He quickly hid in a small cave nearly unseen from the path. Carmelita ran by franticly as if to find someone. Sly didn't get into it further because he no longer cared for Carmelita or what she did. As soon as she was gone he came out and headed home. He locked himself in his room after Bentley asked what was wrong. Sly just said he didn't want to talk about it and they left it as that, but everyone (except Carmelita, who was still looking for Sly) knew something was up.
Time skip to mid-evil era.
Carmelita was crying her eyes out. She wanted to tell Sly that she was sorry and that she loved him. He just avoided her and only talked when necessary, a lot like she did to him. When she went inside to talk to Bentley and Murray about Sly, she them talking about Sly. "Something changed him. He doesn't do anything to try and have Carm forgive him. Wonder what could have happened to make him stop?" Bentley said. "I know what happened. He heard me talking to myself how I had given up loving Sly, and he gave me a flower and then became what he is now." Carmelita said to them. The guys were shocked at what they heard, but before anyone could say anything, even Sir Galleth. "But now I want him to love me like I love him." She now had tears in her eyes as she looked out in the distance. "What made thou change thy mind?" said Sir Galleth. "The note attached to the flower. He said I was more beautiful than any flower or bouquet. He also said he was sorry for lying; he wanted to know me without a shock pistol aimed between his eyes. That made me change my mind." Carmelita was now flooding tears. "A-all I want now is for him to love me again so we can move on in life as lovers. He won't even give me a chance like I didn't give him one." She then just sobbed into her arms. Bentley was the first to speak. "Maybe we can help you out. We don't like to see Sly this sad." Carmelita then realized something. This Cooper Gang wasn't just friends, they were all family, and they cared for each other like brothers only could. "If you can do that, I'll owe you for life!" she said. "Think nothing of it; I think we all want the old Sly back." Murray said. They began to plan what might be the most difficult mission ever.
Thanks for reading, now please review and give me your opinions and if you want another chapter.
Again I don't own anything from Sly Cooper. So don't sew.
I'll make more if you guys want more, if not I will delete this.