The Rise of Scourge The Chao

by RipperOfTheWild

Based on the manga by Erin Hunter. It starts with pain, then hatred, then revenge, then death. That was the story of a chao named Scourge, who was tormented by his brother and sister, and some of his classmates in Chao Kindergarten. But then one attack from a dark chao... Made Scourge a bloodthirsty monster. Read on to find out what happened to Scourge, and his past life...

NOTE:

Hey, guys! This is my first FanFic! Just to tell you, here is a disclamer: I OWN all of the characters and the plot. I made this story up. I was inspired by my cat, Max! He acts like he is the king of our house. He also really likes my other favorite girl kitty, Lily! And, my other female, Camilla, doesn't really care about anything and is old and fat. That's all I have to say! Rating is K+, but my change. Be warned that violence is in the further parts of the story. Other than that, enjoy!

CHAPTER ONE: ALL MEOW, BUT NO BITE!

"Caw,caw! Caw, caw!" Screeched a crow one cold winter morning. Inside a warm house, a striped black cat with long ears and white legs was sleeping soundly, hidden from the bitter cold. Until of course, that crow made alot of racket. "..Stupid crow. Ruining my nap." Max mumbled as he stretched his paws and yawned. "Well, it doesn't matter. I didn't really want to sleep in anyways." Max walked into the kitchen, paused and looked up at the clock. It read, 7:30. "Well, it's time for breakfest, I guess." He went to his half full food bowl, and started munching down immediantly. "Hm..Oh, look! It's an early bird! I wonder how easily I can catch it!" said a menacing, cracky voice. "Ah!" Max said startled. "Oh..It's only you Camilla.." He added. "Oh, you sure do look hungry, why don't you eat and GAIN a few more pounds! If that's even possible!" He joked.

"Grr..Don't go to far with me, Max!" Camilla growled. "Oh, c'mon. It's just a bunch of harmless jokes! Hey, I got one..When you sit around the house, you LITERALLY sit around the house!" Max laughed.

Camilla's ear twitched and growled angrily. "I am warning you. I don't find this funny!" She said. "Huh? Was that the wind? Another joke! Heh..Best one.. You are SO fat and UGLY, That a boy cat would never, ever, EVER. Like you. Zero! Zip! That's all! That is the answer!" He said as his final joke. That did it. Camilla hissed angrily, clipped her ears back, meowed and pounced at Max.

But unlike Camilla, Max was skinny and fast. He dodged her attack and climbed onto the table. Her face fell flat on the hard cat food. "Hahahahahaa!" Max laughed so hard that you could see his back teeth.

After Camilla got up, she started laughing. "Bwhahahahahaa!" She was not laughing at what happened, but at MAX. "Hey, I don't get the joke, what are you laughing at?" He questioned. "YOU! About how weak you are! Instead of attacking me, and defending yourself with responsibility, you just dodged me! Because you were a fraidy cat!"

What bothered Max alot, is that this was kind of true. He never attacked anything ( besides rodents and small birds ) he always just seemed to dodge everything. This made him feel weak. Very weak. And very mad, knowing that what Camilla was saying was true. "You can't go though life, by trying to escape all of your problems!" She said as she walked away. "Wait." Camilla paused. "I will. I will prove to you. I will attack anything. And bring their claws back here. To prove that I have attacked it." Max said as he walked by her. "I am leaving..And..I won't come back without my prize." He ran away. Into the wild. Outside.. Not knowing the dangers ahead of him.

Sorry if this was a bit short, but the next part will be better. With some more action. Give me some ideas! Review please! Bye!

WildWarriorKid