A Secret Never Told

Authors Note:

This is my first official fan fiction I have made up lots in my head but never actually write them down with pen and paper! So, as inexperienced writer, I would like to make a request of you critics, do your best at finding my errors! I want to learn all I can so I can improve my stories. I will do my best to follow through on what you say! *bows* Thank you very much!

Dedication:

This is dedicated to my good friend fionlao, who introduced me to Fairy Tail, and inspired me to write a fan fiction. Besides being a good friend and advisor, she has shown me the path to my love life! (No, I am not lez! Details next chapter 3)

Disclaimer:

I do not own Fairy Tale or any of its characters. (No matter how much I wish I did the ruby slippers don't seem to work.) However, I do own the main character, Hana Mizuku!

CHAPTER 1:

Hana's Misfortune (Hana's POV)

'Sigh. I've been walking for a looong time with no success what so ever. But I can't give up! This is for brother, Gray, mom, dad, and for everyone else who died by that damned demon.'

'Brother… Deep down this quest does seem pointless. Truly, it isn't pointless! At least I keep telling myself that. I keep getting the feeling that it's already done. For 14 years, I've been searching for this demon with no success.'

I started to reflect, but my thoughts were interrupted by a cold voice that shook my whole body. "Hey! You with the sunglasses! Move! You're in our way!" a tall man with boyish features and white blond hair shouted.

He had three other strange people with him. They were all young looking about in their mid-twenties I might guess.

There was a young woman with a little too much emotion showing, a short guy with thick eyebrows, and a lanky person who looked a bit like a lion.

They all looked like mages so I decided to check them. "Soul check" I whispered closing my eyes.

"What is she doing?" asked the woman.

"Stalling most likely, Sherry." the guy with thick eyebrows responded calmly.

"Does she want a fight?" shouted the guy with a lion face.

"Don't shout, Toby!" Sherry snapped.

"Sorry…" he whimpered.

'Oh, just shut up!' I thought.

I was panicking slightly; all of their souls were so bright! The lion face's (or Toby's) was purple (a paralysis mage), thick brows was grey (weather control mage: wind, rain, etc…) the woman's (or Sherry's) was hot pink (a soul control. They are disagreeable, especially the females.) However, the white blonde-haired person's soul was the brightest, ice blue.

'Yes! If he is an ice mage like me, I could use telepathy!' I thought.

'First, I think I should move…' I thought timidly.

"Hey! Are you going to stand there all day in this alley with your eyes shut pretending not to see us? That's a good way to start a fight!" he shouted.

"Ah, sorry. I really don't mean to be any trouble. If you want, I can pay for your last meal." I stepped aside smiling as I probed him.

"Telepathy." he said sternly to his companions.

I frowned, does this guy ever smile?

"Well? How much did you pay for the last meal you and your friends had?" I probed.

"Nothing." he said as he and his partners walked by. Then turning around he said, "By the way, my name is Leon and me and my friends are from Lamia Scale* so I don't suggest picking a fight."

(*Authors Note: he is referring to the fact that they are one of the top and most powerful guilds at this point also, giving away his name as one of the top fighters is basically a threat.)

"Oh don't worry I never intended to." I smiled. After they left, I realized that I could have followed them, asked for a map or at least some information on the demon.

I sulked thinking about that. It was very rare that I'm able to use my telepathic abilities. I could only use telepathy if the person I was using it on, uses the same magic as me. This handicap is incredibly stressing.

Maybe I should have just stuck with my original plan before I broke up with Carl… Now, I am a heart-broken, friendless, wanderer, lost in a fail attempt to avenge my village. I am really a miserable person.

To be continued….

Aww…. this is really sad, the first part was an attempt temporary depression corner then it was supposed to develop into self-disappointment please tell me how I did. *bow*

Anyway, I bet your confused about Hana Mizuku magic! I will explain…

Hana Mizuku is part of the Mizuku clan. The Mizuku clan has two special genetic abilities that are unique only to anyone in the clan. These are the two abilities;

- Soul Check

Soul Check is when the user brings a small amount of magic to their eyes and can see the color of a person's soul. Souls, depending on the brightness and color can tell the mage how to fight. OH! This genetic technique can only be learned, and passed down to family.

Soul types:

-Dull

No power here

-Normal Brightness

Small amount of magic power, a beginner/average mage

- Bright

Powerful magic, but not to powerful, a strong mage

-Very Bright

Extremely powerful magic, about Natsu's current level

-Brighter

Someone stronger than Natsu? Run away!

Soul Colors (a few examples):

-Green; Normal

-Purple; Paralysis

-Grey; Weather control (wind, rain etc…)

-Pink; Soul Possession (any kind, different shades show different styles)

-Orange; Stellar Spirit user (incl. stellar spirits themselves)

-Ice blue; Ice

-Red; Dragon Slayer

-Yellow; Demon (only people who are possessed, usually the souls have colored specs in it to show the type of magic)

These are just a few of the colors, in reality there are two, 500 page textbooks of colors that she had to memorize when she was a kid. I also made up this magic ability, but it would be really cool if it were an actual ability.

Telepathy

There are several stages of telepathy however, she could only get past the second stage before her village was destroyed and cannot improve. She can use telepathy to communicate, or use someone else's eyes. Her probing can go up to 500 miles distance but it takes a huge amount of magic power. As she explained earlier, she can only use telepathy if the person she is probing has the same magic power as her. I hope I mentioned that she is an ice mage (like Gray-sama :3)

Okay, so I want to tell all you readers that I will be updating about every two weeks (if I can) I don't have a lot of free time so, I'll do my best! *bows* Thank you very much for reading!

… I know, I know this chapter was short and most of it was just me explaining things. Chapter 2 will be longer! I promise! See you soon *bows* PLEASE REVIEW!