Hello everyone! This is my first fanfiction story so I hope ye all like it.
I would also like after reading this story to give me a few tips or any ideas and reviews are always welcome! Oh and unfortunately i'm not from Hawaii, living far away in Ireland :(, so please excuse any mispelled streets etc. Thank you read on!
Chapter 1:
Danny Williams felt he was the happiest person alive right now, and he never even knew that would be possible ever since he moved to this "pineapple infested hellhole" chasing his English ex Rachel to Hawaii when she moved here with her partner step-Stan as Danny called him, with his pride and joy Grace.
He relaxed in bed, the gold Hawaiian sun seeping through the windows as Danny snuggled into the warm duvet under a very, very soft mattress. And to make things even better Rachel and step-Stan decided last minute that they wanted to go out for a lovely, romantic meal last night leaving Grace in Danny's all night. Danny couldn't help but smile ear to ear and when his daughter Grace came in shouting excitedly.
"Danno, Danno wake up its Christmas morning, look what Santa brought!".
Danny never loved someone so much in his life, he would do anything for Grace, she was his life, so when Grace ran into the room jumping and shouting on Danny's bed it didn't bother him in the slightest, not like the typical dad on 7am on Christmas morning.
Danny grabbed his daughter from destroying the comfy bed and hugged and kissed her until Grace pulled away "eeewww" she said wiping her cheek with the sleeve of her mini-mouse pyjamas. She held up what Santa brought her; a touch-screen video console- the Nintendo 3ds, Danny began to wonder if he spoilt his child a bit too much, but when he looked at Grace again and saw her happy and laughing he realized he really didn't care, after all she was worth it.
"Hey, Grace y'know that thing does come with terms and conditions"
Grace looked at him dissapointed. Danny carried on anyway, even though he knew he spolit her he knew he had to put down the foot somewhere he did'nt want her to grow up to be one of those spoilt teens who go through tantrums every 5 minutes and who just are downright brats.
" Don't give me that look, terms and conditions are you only can play on it 2 hours max every day, those things are too bad to be looking at for too long, it'll turn you into a zombie child." Grace almost forgot Danny was talking as she buried her face into killing Bowser in super Mario Land 3D.
" Hey monkey go get changed i'll make breakfast then we'll drop you home ok." Proving Danny's zombie theory Gracie did'nt even take her eyes off the console and slowly walked towards her bedroom, barely managing to open the door.
After Breakfast Danny and Grace were soon driving in the drive to Rachel and step-Stan's mansion. Rachel came out to meet them in the stunning driveway with a gurgling baby Charles in hand.
When Rachel saw what Grace came out of the car with, she gave Danny a "Oh no what have you done now" look and it brought a smile to Danny's face.
Grace did'nt even acknowledge her mother and little brother, walking straight past her mumbling"go on mario jump,jump...shoot,shoot"
Rachel shot another look at Danny and said "If it weren't Christmas i would totally kill you right now"
Danny laughed "Who had this little man all night last night?"
"A Friend" Rachel said without making eye contact.
"I better go inside Happy Christmas Daniel!" Rachel was already turning towards the door.
" Happy Christmas Rachel, Love you monkey!" he manages to shout before Rachel closes the door. He goes back to the car, hops in and drives away.
Danny eventually makes it home, he plops himself down the couch and beer in one hand remote in the other, he could'nt be more relaxed if he tried, that is until his phone vibrated, picking it up the caller ID red "McGarrett" he reluctantly answers.
"Happy Christmas partner! he hears Steve's voice on the other end of the line. Danny sighs heavily knowing his idea of a relaxing evening is now ruined by this particular phonecall
"Just what i need" Danny replies, hand wiping his stubble.
"Everything ok?" McGarrett asks slightly concerned.
Danny rolls his eyes "Yeah everythings fine ok."
"Good, coz im on the way over to your place now, Catherine and Mary are preparing the dinner at home, your spending Christmas with the McGarretts!."
These were the dreaded words Danny heard echoing in his ears before splurting out "great" he didn't actually mean it.
Well thats the end to chapter 1 i really hoped ye enjoyed it and believe me there is alot more to come: whump Steve, Danny, Mary and Catherine thats right im giving all of them a bad time!
Please, Please, Please REVIEW as this is my first fanfic story and i want to know yer opinions as always ! Constructive criticism is also appreciated! Until next time my peeps,... Slan!
Mahalo! :)