Hey Guys.. Soo This is my very first fanfiction so I may not to do well, but the chapters will continuously get better, I hope. Please review if you like it. Please review if you hate it (: Tell me why. Anyway I loved this book! And reading all these amazing stories, I had to try to write my own. Speaking of amazing stories, read The Courage to Live by camillexelisabeth. It's really good! Hope you like it! R+R
TaylorSmith
Chapter 1 Aideen
"Aideen!" My mom called from the bottom of the stairs "Wake up, now!"
"Hey mom let me sleep"
"I need rest or I'm a grouch"
"You would not want that" I shouted back to her.
Man, I can think up Haikus quick! My mom says I get it from my dad. See my dad left my mom when he found out she was pregnant with me. I sometimes feel like I'm in the way or a burden, holding people back. Other than that I'm pretty cocky.
Oh, sorry, I'm being rude. My name is Aideen Taydea. I'm thirteen years old turning fourteen January thirty-first. I am 5'3 and I have dirty blonde hair with blazing blue eyes that seem to sparkle whenever I'm in the sunlight.
"Here, I have a poem for you, Aideen."
"I am late for work"
"You'll be late for school again"
"I cannot drive you"
"Tut tut mom," I laughed as I hopped in the shower, "Your middle line had eight syllables."
I basically ripped through the shower door. Today was the day of my schools track meet! Yes! Finally! I was going to DOMINATE!
I sprinted down the hall, jumping over invisible hurdles. On my last hurdle, my towel flew off but I kept running, right past my little sisters room.
"Ew." I heard her mutter.
When I got to my room, I ripped through my clean laundry basket. I threw on my favourite green and blue t-shirt with my orange undershirt beneath. But then, I frantically searched my entire closet for my shorts I got from archery camp last summer. Ah! There they are! Right there lying neatly on my bed. Sweet. The flames on them looked so realistic. Fire seems to keep me so calm. I ran the stairs two at a time, ate my Frosted Flakes, and was about to leave when.. Oh damn! My lucky necklace! I sprinted back up the stairs, grabbed my necklace (a wolf howling up to the moon, with a raven on his back, wolves and ravens are my favourite animals) and my iPod, and ran out the door
So, how did you like my first chapter? They will get better. I promise. This one was just explaining Aideen (he's a boy :P) I didn't really keep his parent a secret. Haha. Oh, By the way, I do not in anyway own PJatO and am not Rick. Holy crap I wish. I also don't own apple. Please review, I wanna know what you all think. I don't care if you hated it, still review, its good if you hate it, why did you hate it? Anyway. Next Chapters will be up soon. I hope.
